Write a book Saru.....please do....weave a narrative that will melt many, that will leave your readers mesmerized. It is when I read masterpieces like yours, I realize what it means to be a 'writer'....You write on people's hearts. So so beautifully touching.....!
One hell of a post. I read many of your writings (through FB). They are very unique. Including this one :) Sure, had there been any love left, the bag might have been forgotten in a while.
So nicely worded, Saru.. Truly the symbolic expression of shallowness in Relationship!
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DeleteSummed up SO well in five lines!
ReplyDeleteThanks Piyu :)
DeleteDeep thought in simple words beautifully presented, Saru.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ravish :)
Delete...no love to weigh it down! What a beautiful thought! Love is indeed a panacea. A very beautiful idea indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Rakesh :)
DeleteThat's a beautiful simile !!
ReplyDeleteMesmerizing! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Purba :)
DeleteSuperb maam. !!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shraddha!
DeleteSuperb!!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteWow
ReplyDelete.no love to weigh it down! What a beautiful thought . Really beautiful and meaningful lines Saru ji.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteIts awesome Saru! You expressed reality of life so perfectly :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali! :)
DeleteHow very beautiful and so true! Loved it:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sir.
DeleteBeautifully captured in words.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteWrite a book Saru.....please do....weave a narrative that will melt many, that will leave your readers mesmerized. It is when I read masterpieces like yours, I realize what it means to be a 'writer'....You write on people's hearts. So so beautifully touching.....!
ReplyDeleteSometimes I don't feel like writing and in those times, comments like yours act as a guiding light. Thank you so much, Sunaina.
DeleteVery nice and meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteAAhh awesome <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Roma. :)
DeleteWell written
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines, Saru! Love the way it ends!
ReplyDeleteThanks Esha :)
DeleteBeautiful....
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteLovely !
ReplyDeleteThat was so aptly worded
ReplyDeleteThanks Datta
DeleteOne hell of a post. I read many of your writings (through FB). They are very unique. Including this one :)
ReplyDeleteSure, had there been any love left, the bag might have been forgotten in a while.
Glad with your feedback. Many thanks. :)
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