Rewind - September 2023
I wrote the following in September. Sometimes, I feel I will forget the art of writing couplets because I am not writing at all this year. I strongly believe you have to practice to hone your craft. And I am not doing that. Perhaps I schedule a time to write a poem. Or I need better time management skills. Date Published 09/05/2023 मुझे उसके जाने का इतना अफ़सोस नहीं हुआ जितना इस बात का कि इतने सालों तक उसे रहने ही क्यों दिया Love, Saru
So nicely worded, Saru.. Truly the symbolic expression of shallowness in Relationship!
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DeleteSummed up SO well in five lines!
ReplyDeleteThanks Piyu :)
DeleteDeep thought in simple words beautifully presented, Saru.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ravish :)
Delete...no love to weigh it down! What a beautiful thought! Love is indeed a panacea. A very beautiful idea indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Rakesh :)
DeleteThat's a beautiful simile !!
ReplyDeleteMesmerizing! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Purba :)
DeleteSuperb maam. !!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shraddha!
DeleteSuperb!!
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DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteWow
ReplyDelete.no love to weigh it down! What a beautiful thought . Really beautiful and meaningful lines Saru ji.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteIts awesome Saru! You expressed reality of life so perfectly :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali! :)
DeleteHow very beautiful and so true! Loved it:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sir.
DeleteBeautifully captured in words.
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DeleteWrite a book Saru.....please do....weave a narrative that will melt many, that will leave your readers mesmerized. It is when I read masterpieces like yours, I realize what it means to be a 'writer'....You write on people's hearts. So so beautifully touching.....!
ReplyDeleteSometimes I don't feel like writing and in those times, comments like yours act as a guiding light. Thank you so much, Sunaina.
DeleteVery nice and meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteAAhh awesome <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Roma. :)
DeleteWell written
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines, Saru! Love the way it ends!
ReplyDeleteThanks Esha :)
DeleteBeautiful....
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DeleteLovely !
ReplyDeleteThat was so aptly worded
ReplyDeleteThanks Datta
DeleteOne hell of a post. I read many of your writings (through FB). They are very unique. Including this one :)
ReplyDeleteSure, had there been any love left, the bag might have been forgotten in a while.
Glad with your feedback. Many thanks. :)
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