I Am Not Alone
Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
So nicely worded, Saru.. Truly the symbolic expression of shallowness in Relationship!
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DeleteSummed up SO well in five lines!
ReplyDeleteThanks Piyu :)
DeleteDeep thought in simple words beautifully presented, Saru.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ravish :)
Delete...no love to weigh it down! What a beautiful thought! Love is indeed a panacea. A very beautiful idea indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Rakesh :)
DeleteThat's a beautiful simile !!
ReplyDeleteMesmerizing! :)
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DeleteSuperb maam. !!
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DeleteSuperb!!
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DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteWow
ReplyDelete.no love to weigh it down! What a beautiful thought . Really beautiful and meaningful lines Saru ji.
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DeleteIts awesome Saru! You expressed reality of life so perfectly :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali! :)
DeleteHow very beautiful and so true! Loved it:)
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DeleteBeautifully captured in words.
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DeleteWrite a book Saru.....please do....weave a narrative that will melt many, that will leave your readers mesmerized. It is when I read masterpieces like yours, I realize what it means to be a 'writer'....You write on people's hearts. So so beautifully touching.....!
ReplyDeleteSometimes I don't feel like writing and in those times, comments like yours act as a guiding light. Thank you so much, Sunaina.
DeleteVery nice and meaningful.
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DeleteAAhh awesome <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Roma. :)
DeleteWell written
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines, Saru! Love the way it ends!
ReplyDeleteThanks Esha :)
DeleteBeautiful....
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DeleteLovely !
ReplyDeleteThat was so aptly worded
ReplyDeleteThanks Datta
DeleteOne hell of a post. I read many of your writings (through FB). They are very unique. Including this one :)
ReplyDeleteSure, had there been any love left, the bag might have been forgotten in a while.
Glad with your feedback. Many thanks. :)
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