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  1. Waah Saru, your hubby must be proud ! Hey, I missed you at my blog. Do find time to visit The Sinhas at 302 :)

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    1. Welcome back! I will ask my husband whether he is proud of you or not...

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  2. A lovely weave and re read a few times so as not to miss the commas and sugar coated words, Saru:)

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  3. Such a lovely and adorable post :-)

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  4. what a unique way of using words! loved it :)

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  5. One of the amazing I had read in last few months....cheers to you Saru!!

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  6. Intriguing and charming at the same time.

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  7. Such a lovely and adorable post with emotions

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  8. Sugar coated yet perfect sweetness, neither too much nor too less. A really simple yet stunning read.

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  9. Wow...it's so romantic... Luv Rita

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  10. Romantic one Saru :) I liked the beginning very much. :)

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  11. Sad and sweet at the same time.
    Nice work, Saru.

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  12. Wow Saru, one more masterpiece..... Loved it....:)

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  13. Great one again Saru...love it... (y)

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  14. How great. What a powerful way to share a hero.

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  15. This is beautifully written. Very light and breezy. It's kind of like renewing wedding vows :)

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    1. Is it? It's light and easy, I agree. I wrote in less than 2 minutes. I made my own poem into maggi noodles :P

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  16. A lovely read Saru. Simple yet powerful :).

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  17. Lovely poem, simple and really emotional in between lines.

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  18. Beautiful, pleading and demanding at the same time !

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  19. Your poems have that magic feel good factor ... I loved this :-)

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