Read Between The Lines
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Rewind - September 2023
I wrote the following in September. Sometimes, I feel I will forget the art of writing couplets because I am not writing at all this year. I strongly believe you have to practice to hone your craft. And I am not doing that. Perhaps I schedule a time to write a poem. Or I need better time management skills. Date Published 09/05/2023 मुझे उसके जाने का इतना अफ़सोस नहीं हुआ जितना इस बात का कि इतने सालों तक उसे रहने ही क्यों दिया Love, Saru
Waah Saru, your hubby must be proud ! Hey, I missed you at my blog. Do find time to visit The Sinhas at 302 :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome back! I will ask my husband whether he is proud of you or not...
DeleteA sweet read!
ReplyDeleteA lovely weave and re read a few times so as not to miss the commas and sugar coated words, Saru:)
ReplyDeleteLOL, Sir. Thanks for reading.
DeleteSuch a lovely and adorable post :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Palak :)
Deletewhat a unique way of using words! loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ankita.
DeleteOne of the amazing I had read in last few months....cheers to you Saru!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hemant and welcome back!
Deletewow that is great :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, thank you. :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteIntriguing and charming at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sir.
DeleteSuch a lovely and adorable post with emotions
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Deletelovely and romantic,
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DeleteSugar coated yet perfect sweetness, neither too much nor too less. A really simple yet stunning read.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for a lovely comment dear. :)
DeleteWow...it's so romantic... Luv Rita
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rita.
DeleteRomantic one Saru :) I liked the beginning very much. :)
ReplyDeleteSad and sweet at the same time.
ReplyDeleteNice work, Saru.
Thank you, Dee!
DeleteWow Saru, one more masterpiece..... Loved it....:)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear! :)
DeleteNice work!
ReplyDeleteGreat one again Saru...love it... (y)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna!
DeleteHow great. What a powerful way to share a hero.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is beautifully written. Very light and breezy. It's kind of like renewing wedding vows :)
ReplyDeleteIs it? It's light and easy, I agree. I wrote in less than 2 minutes. I made my own poem into maggi noodles :P
DeleteA lovely read Saru. Simple yet powerful :).
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aseem :)
DeleteLovely poem, simple and really emotional in between lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruchi!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful, pleading and demanding at the same time !
ReplyDeleteYour poems have that magic feel good factor ... I loved this :-)
ReplyDelete:) Thank you!
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