I Am Not Alone
Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
Waah Saru, your hubby must be proud ! Hey, I missed you at my blog. Do find time to visit The Sinhas at 302 :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome back! I will ask my husband whether he is proud of you or not...
DeleteA sweet read!
ReplyDeleteA lovely weave and re read a few times so as not to miss the commas and sugar coated words, Saru:)
ReplyDeleteLOL, Sir. Thanks for reading.
DeleteSuch a lovely and adorable post :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Palak :)
Deletewhat a unique way of using words! loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ankita.
DeleteOne of the amazing I had read in last few months....cheers to you Saru!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hemant and welcome back!
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ReplyDeleteThank you, thank you. :)
DeleteLovely!
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DeleteSuch a lovely and adorable post with emotions
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DeleteSugar coated yet perfect sweetness, neither too much nor too less. A really simple yet stunning read.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for a lovely comment dear. :)
DeleteWow...it's so romantic... Luv Rita
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DeleteRomantic one Saru :) I liked the beginning very much. :)
ReplyDeleteSad and sweet at the same time.
ReplyDeleteNice work, Saru.
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DeleteWow Saru, one more masterpiece..... Loved it....:)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear! :)
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ReplyDeleteGreat one again Saru...love it... (y)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna!
DeleteHow great. What a powerful way to share a hero.
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DeleteThis is beautifully written. Very light and breezy. It's kind of like renewing wedding vows :)
ReplyDeleteIs it? It's light and easy, I agree. I wrote in less than 2 minutes. I made my own poem into maggi noodles :P
DeleteA lovely read Saru. Simple yet powerful :).
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aseem :)
DeleteLovely poem, simple and really emotional in between lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruchi!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful, pleading and demanding at the same time !
ReplyDeleteYour poems have that magic feel good factor ... I loved this :-)
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