Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you.
Like that cigarette slowly burning between your fingers, I burn too. Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you. The only difference - you can buy your addiction - but I can't win over you in a million years. The only similarity - you crush both cigarette butts and my hopes multiple times a day under your feet. You are one cruel b*****d. Oh man, why I still love you so very much? I think about that a lot sober. There has to be a reason for this unwavering, almost God-like devotion towards you. For the life of me, I can't find an answer to that question. I don't know why I want to walk barefoot on a black beach with you. Watch the sunset - and - watch your features turn into a beautiful silhouette. As the evening would sink into darkness and we will lay on the beach to watch the stars and crescent moon - I want to smell the salty ocean on your skin. Then when you will try to light that f*****g Goldflake and put it between your lips, I will th
Waah Saru, your hubby must be proud ! Hey, I missed you at my blog. Do find time to visit The Sinhas at 302 :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome back! I will ask my husband whether he is proud of you or not...
DeleteA sweet read!
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DeleteA lovely weave and re read a few times so as not to miss the commas and sugar coated words, Saru:)
ReplyDeleteLOL, Sir. Thanks for reading.
DeleteSuch a lovely and adorable post :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Palak :)
Deletewhat a unique way of using words! loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ankita.
DeleteOne of the amazing I had read in last few months....cheers to you Saru!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hemant and welcome back!
Deletewow that is great :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, thank you. :)
DeleteLovely!
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DeleteIntriguing and charming at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sir.
DeleteSuch a lovely and adorable post with emotions
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Deletelovely and romantic,
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DeleteSugar coated yet perfect sweetness, neither too much nor too less. A really simple yet stunning read.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for a lovely comment dear. :)
DeleteWow...it's so romantic... Luv Rita
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rita.
DeleteRomantic one Saru :) I liked the beginning very much. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSad and sweet at the same time.
ReplyDeleteNice work, Saru.
Thank you, Dee!
DeleteWow Saru, one more masterpiece..... Loved it....:)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear! :)
DeleteNice work!
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DeleteThis was so cute :-)
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DeleteGreat one again Saru...love it... (y)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna!
DeleteHow great. What a powerful way to share a hero.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is beautifully written. Very light and breezy. It's kind of like renewing wedding vows :)
ReplyDeleteIs it? It's light and easy, I agree. I wrote in less than 2 minutes. I made my own poem into maggi noodles :P
DeleteA lovely read Saru. Simple yet powerful :).
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aseem :)
DeleteLovely poem, simple and really emotional in between lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruchi!
DeleteBeautiful, pleading and demanding at the same time !
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteYour poems have that magic feel good factor ... I loved this :-)
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