Wandering Souls


For better resolution, please click on the image.

Comments

  1. Beautiful flow of emotions, Saru! Wishing you and Alok a happy Diwali:)

    ReplyDelete
  2. Intense emotions are depicted in such a lovely way!

    <3

    ReplyDelete
  3. I don't feel empty...so meaningful Saru. As usual Saru's intense words touch the heart

    ReplyDelete
  4. So sweet and gentle. I flowing wave.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Incomparable, fantastic poem. A unique piece of writing.

    ReplyDelete
  6. This post was just so intense and deep.
    Terrific piece of work.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Honey, the first two lines itself put me on a spell.
    How beautiful this was!

    ReplyDelete
  8. Wow Saru....... Amazing flow of words!!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Such passion... Beautifully expressed.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Beautiful words; and, together with the lovely presentation, creates a power packed impact.

    ReplyDelete
  11. That connection with souls!Lovely lines.

    ReplyDelete
  12. Intense emotions are depicted in such beautiful words

    ReplyDelete
  13. Very much magic is there in your thoughts..!

    ReplyDelete
  14. Beautiful selection of words saru. Enjoyed reading it!

    ReplyDelete
  15. Just the right balance of words and emotions...Excellent lines

    ReplyDelete
  16. Your words always blend into the tale and that too seamlessly. brilliant. :)

    ReplyDelete
  17. that was intensely and deeply romantic Saru.. Loved the analogy to puff of cigarettes, and the line where you talk about the touch (where never been touched).. And like the new presentation (in image form), it prevents stealing.. I might just steal this method though :)

    this was romance at its 'deepest'.. thumbs up :)

    ReplyDelete
  18. Just wow..... Toooooo good..

    ReplyDelete
  19. Saru yaar .... kahan se paida karti hai aisa emotions.... But this one still remains my top most fav:
    http://www.sarusinghal.com/2012/02/blog-post.html

    ReplyDelete
  20. ..sometimes words they flow like a river gently meandering down its way..enjoyed this dance of words laced with emotions and sweetness..keep it up Saru.. :)

    ReplyDelete
  21. It's a beautiful expression. I derive freedom from it but it's open ended. What does "never reaching its shores" entail, though?

    ReplyDelete
  22. This is brilliant ... the stanzas are beautiful ... but the last two lines are just way out of the world ... AWESOME !!!

    ReplyDelete
  23. Strong emotions expressed beautifully

    ReplyDelete
  24. Truly intense and the emotions are expressed beautifully :).

    ReplyDelete
  25. @Prateek - She is little wondrous and vagabond in nature, never does what normally happens. She tries to comply but never reaches that point.

    @Everyone - Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comments.

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Bricks, brickbats, applause - say it in comments!

Popular posts from this blog

Rewind - September 2023

यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं

I Am Not Alone