Wandering Souls
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Being Human
Under the roof of winter, Latches of my door open without making a sound. It's cold out there, Someone lost his ground. My soul shivers, Not that I'm cold. Someone from my land, Sleeps under the bridge while dreaming of gold. How can I... tuck myself in the quilt? When the winter storm is blowing, Hopes they have built. I have to get up, Do something... Before I start questioning who am I? And, they start saying...'Humanity dies.' Let's work out something, Take a resolution. Walk across all kinds of bridges, And, just be human... From centuries people are migrating for work or for better opportunities. But, not everyone has a smooth sailing...some live under miserable conditions. Most heart wrenching fact is nobody helps them, not even people from their own countries. I know, everybody is busy chasing the bigger purpose of life. But don't you think we should help people in need? Let's try to be better human being...
Beautiful flow of emotions, Saru! Wishing you and Alok a happy Diwali:)
ReplyDeleteso strong and happy deepavali :)
ReplyDeleteIntense emotions are depicted in such a lovely way!
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beautiful one Saru!
ReplyDeleteI don't feel empty...so meaningful Saru. As usual Saru's intense words touch the heart
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and gentle. I flowing wave.
ReplyDeleteIncomparable, fantastic poem. A unique piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteWow. Just wow :)
ReplyDeleteThis post was just so intense and deep.
ReplyDeleteTerrific piece of work.
WOW! SO INTENSE AND ROMANTIC :)
ReplyDeleteHoney, the first two lines itself put me on a spell.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful this was!
Wow Saru....... Amazing flow of words!!
ReplyDeleteSuch passion... Beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words; and, together with the lovely presentation, creates a power packed impact.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThat connection with souls!Lovely lines.
ReplyDeleteIntense emotions are depicted in such beautiful words
ReplyDeleteVery much magic is there in your thoughts..!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful selection of words saru. Enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteJust the right balance of words and emotions...Excellent lines
ReplyDeleteAwsome......
ReplyDeletesimply beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteYour words always blend into the tale and that too seamlessly. brilliant. :)
ReplyDeletethat was intensely and deeply romantic Saru.. Loved the analogy to puff of cigarettes, and the line where you talk about the touch (where never been touched).. And like the new presentation (in image form), it prevents stealing.. I might just steal this method though :)
ReplyDeletethis was romance at its 'deepest'.. thumbs up :)
Just wow..... Toooooo good..
ReplyDeletelovely, wonderful, stupendous!
ReplyDeleteFlow of the emotions.. Ahh :)
ReplyDeleteSaru yaar .... kahan se paida karti hai aisa emotions.... But this one still remains my top most fav:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.sarusinghal.com/2012/02/blog-post.html
..sometimes words they flow like a river gently meandering down its way..enjoyed this dance of words laced with emotions and sweetness..keep it up Saru.. :)
ReplyDeleteIt's a beautiful expression. I derive freedom from it but it's open ended. What does "never reaching its shores" entail, though?
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant ... the stanzas are beautiful ... but the last two lines are just way out of the world ... AWESOME !!!
ReplyDeleteStrong emotions expressed beautifully
ReplyDeleteBeautiful flow of emotions ...
ReplyDeleteTruly intense and the emotions are expressed beautifully :).
ReplyDelete@Prateek - She is little wondrous and vagabond in nature, never does what normally happens. She tries to comply but never reaches that point.
ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comments.