Tress-Symphony


Musical, like the strings of guitar,
Tied-Untied, I look million stars.
My playful tresses dazzle the show,
Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe.

A bit of punk, a bit of jazz,
Humming melodies of rock-n-roll.
Untied - my hair sweep you off your feet,
Rhythm of it caress your soul.
Angel I look with golden halo,
Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe.

Tied - they play country folk,
My face transcends midnight moon.
Swaying in the lilt of my locks,
You sense monsoon in June.
I light up the mood with pristine glow,
Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe. 

Tress symphony, ready to vibe,
With style I've an affair.
Everyday dazzling like a diva,
In my healthy groomed hair.
I live every moment, I grab every show,
Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe.

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  1. Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe...
    tied and untied...no matter what, it is graceful :)

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    1. With the mention of such beauties, everything turns graceful. Thanks for reading Sumit. :)

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  2. Loved the last lines got repeated. And the lines were exquisite!

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  3. Tresses wonder rhyme Madhubhla, Marlyn and Madonna entwined! Lovely writing Saru:)

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    1. I laughed after reading your comment, Sir. The first part rhymes perfectly. Read this,

      'Tresses wonder rhyme
      Madhubhla, Marlyn and Madonna entwined!'

      Thanks for reading :)

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  4. tresses pe poem! :D only u cud do it! it's lovely and i am always intrigued by these two beauties.. madhubala and monroe! :)

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    1. Who's not? Even after decades, their thought race our hearts. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading :)

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  5. Just wow! Loved it :) Madhubala, Marlyn and Madonna have srtuck the bull's eye!

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    1. Bull's eye or not but this line imbibes so much of charm and beauty. I bet, you'll agree. And thanks for a lovely comment. :)

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  6. WOW saru,,, How could you make such correlations, seems heavenly..I felt like saying "Isn't it really" after reading through the whole poem.

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    1. Glad you felt that way after reading the poem. Thanks for reading and for a beautiful comment. :)

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  7. Beautiful composition,best of luck:)

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  8. very nice !!! best of luck !!

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  9. Nice write...A little different style...i love the last stanza..

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    1. As you said, 'I am evolving.' :)

      Thanks for reading Sam.

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  10. Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Manroe..... Magic..

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  11. Lovely writing! An ode to hair!

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  12. :-) Nicely composed.

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  13. Kudos... Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe..

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  14. Lovely piece of writing ! Havent read a better ode to hair !

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  15. Lovely Saru. very well written.

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  16. Very creative composition! Loved the way you related hair to music :)

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  17. I loved it!!
    And it is again in a perfect rhyme!

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  18. That is melodious and creative, lovely writing Saru. :)

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  19. wow really admiring saru! :)

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  20. Whoa !!! What a beautiful entry ! All the best Saru :)

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  21. beautiful composition ---very refreshingly simple and pleasing to the eyes and the ears--enjoyed reading it

    all the best for the contest

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    1. Thanks for a beautiful comment Rajni :)

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  22. Tied and untied...anything that suits makes for the style... it all depends on the mood of the day and the preference.. but u have put it so well Saru.. very creative.
    When I read your poems, I too wanna try some poetry.. maybe this time for Tresmme.. :)

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    1. Will wait to read your poem and glad you liked reading it. :)

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  23. Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe.
    -- sensuous Saru!! LOved the composition...

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  24. Ohh!!!
    A great tribute-like poem.
    One of d best for these 3 I hv read in recent times.
    True to their on-screen flair and sensuous-ness.
    Great poem.

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    1. When you said true to their on-screen flair, it made me wonder we don't know how they felt in real life. We made stories, celebrated them or shunned them. Glad you liked reading it, thanks.

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  25. awesome .. loved it .. a name in repetition in the last line of the poem .. never came across something like this before :-)

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  26. VERY WELL WRITTEN

    talking abt tresses all i could think about was Katherine Hepburn.

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    1. She is another diva with perfect cheekbones. :)

      Thanks for reading Renu.

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  27. truly feminine & hence beautiful,

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  29. very creative with 3Ms and 1S,Saru :)
    Very Interesting!
    All the best, dear! :)

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    1. LOL! Thanks for reading and your wishes Gayatri. :)

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  30. Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe - altogether....never seen before. Nice poem

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  31. Hi Saru.. You have truly rocked the floor.. Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe. :)

    No truly, its an awesome combination you have brought together. FORMIDABLE.. KUDOS to you

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  32. Wow! :) This is lovely! Such a happy, romantic poem for great-hair days! :D These lines are so good:

    Tied - they play country folk,
    My face transcends midnight moon.
    Swaying in the lilt of my locks,
    You sense monsoon in June.

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    1. Yeah, those days when hair are happy with you. BTW, those days are quite less in number with age. These are my favorite lines too. Thanks for reading Harsha and welcome back.

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  33. I like all three of them ...lol...:)....
    congrats for your TRESemme products....

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  34. I like how a woman transforms herself into a different personality by just tying or untying her hair. We tend to look at them in a different way. That aspect has been brought out beautifully here. Those 3 eternal beauties being compared here, makes it all the more graceful. :)

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    1. That's a great observation and I am smelling something fishy here ;)

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    2. Haha!! I wish there was actually something fishy! :P

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  35. Oh, I so loved that last line, "Like...Madonna, Madhu Bala, Marilyn Monroe."

    And yes, I love these slow motion pictures that show women either tying up their hair or letting it down :-)

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    1. Yeah, it's such a pretty sight. Thanks for reading Ash :)

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  36. Lovely write up
    U can write poem on anything Han :)
    And madhubala and marlyn - mysterious lives and time less beauties .all the best
    Btw I was under the impression that we have to get a hair style done on our selves . Is it not needed

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    1. Actually, rather than picking a hairstyle, I said I look like a diva in tied-untied hair. In the last verse I said I look like a diva everyday. When they said, 'use your imagination,' I think I went overboard. :P

      And thanks for reading Afshan.

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  37. ah..the legends!! but i couldn't trace your pic?? [:p]

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    1. LOL! Hope you liked reading it though :)

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  38. Enticing!As lyrical as ever Saru.

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  39. Lovely refrain makes the poem!

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  40. Your hair is lovely and this poem so musical. Take care of your tresses. I'd love to read more verses about them. :)

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    1. LOL! Thanks for the compliment dear :)

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  41. Great refrain! You have a gift!! Keep writing.

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  42. I liked the style of writing and beautiful as it has to be.

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  43. Good musical poem.. Thanks to share and I like the last stanza.

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  44. So beautiful Saru! And I love those pics of yours too :)

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