Unfolding the night...

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Hooting, whistling, screaming, falling like a pack of cards within,
That's how my body feels when we are skin to skin.
Turn off the lights, let the music sink in,
Drive me crazy and let the night begin.

Location: Hackensack, NJ, USA

Comments

  1. Saru SinghalSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:09 PM

    I will be away for a week, will catch up with all your lovely blogs after I come back. Thanks for gracing this blog in my absence.

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    1. SoniaSeptember 14, 2012 at 3:09 AM

      Come back soon.. Nothing seems pleasant in this blogging world in your absence...

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    2. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 9:16 AM

      Awww....People like you make blogging beautiful. Thank God, I have met you here.

      XOXOXO:)

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  2. प्रवीण पाण्डेयSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Too soft and tender expression.

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  3. AmitaverseSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:42 PM

    Did I miss a beat? yes my heart says so....
    write on...

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  4. Ranjana's craft blogSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:25 AM

    Will miss you.

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  5. MithlashSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:49 AM

    Beautiful!

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  6. MadhushaSeptember 10, 2012 at 1:40 AM

    ermmmmmmm...thats romantic!

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  7. Rahul BhatiaSeptember 10, 2012 at 1:44 AM

    A nice one indeed :)

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  8. joshi danielSeptember 10, 2012 at 3:53 AM

    that is beautiful :)

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  9. DR. ANWER JAMALSeptember 10, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Nice.

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  10. BikramjitSeptember 10, 2012 at 8:12 AM

    now that is exotic and romantic :)

    have a great week :)

    Bikram's

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  11. Ashwini C NSeptember 10, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    Aww..So romantic. Have a Great week Saru :-)

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  12. KAJALSeptember 10, 2012 at 10:44 AM

    hmm full of expressions :)

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  13. Megha BansalSeptember 10, 2012 at 10:53 AM

    wow!!! so beautiful!

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2012 at 11:56 AM

    So brilliantly written!

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  15. Dark KnightSeptember 10, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    wow, powerful and seductive.... with only a few words. You're an amazing writer Saru! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 9:20 AM

      Thank you so much, it is really an encouraging comment! :)

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  16. Found In FolsomSeptember 10, 2012 at 3:51 PM

    ohho..romantic!!

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  17. SpiderdamaSeptember 10, 2012 at 4:00 PM

    oh, this make me smile very much!:-)

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  18. SoniaSeptember 11, 2012 at 3:18 AM

    This is so mesmerizing :) Great write up as always :)

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  19. JennySeptember 11, 2012 at 4:50 AM

    Have a great week Saru. Lovelt 4 lines. Makes me blush and day dream :-) Loved the ending :-)

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  20. Akshay Kumar GSeptember 11, 2012 at 9:11 AM

    I loved the way the poem begins, sets a perfect tone. Very beautiful and romantic. :)

    Very sorry Saru, I hadn't read your Hindi poem yet, will do so now. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 9:47 AM

      Please don't be sorry Akshay. I'm lucky to have you as a reader and glad to liked this quartet as well.

      Thanks for always being there:)

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  21. Someone is SpecialSeptember 11, 2012 at 2:14 PM

    Hmmm.. Romantic! :)

    Someone is Special

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  22. Elvira Lobo(Elli)September 11, 2012 at 3:24 PM

    oh really romantic:)

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  23. Binu ThomasSeptember 12, 2012 at 12:01 AM

    All it needed was one pic and a few selected words to reveal the true emotion within. Saru, you play magically with words yaar!

    See ya soon :)

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  24. Kumar BibekSeptember 12, 2012 at 12:47 AM

    Have a nice week... Oh yeah, and that was short and romantic.

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  25. ZunnurSeptember 12, 2012 at 2:53 AM

    A night filled with love, moments filled with magic, the mind loosing control, anxieties left behind the door.

    Feeling so beautifully described, and I like the title very much!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 9:52 AM

      I love your comment very much, kinda poetic itself. Thanks for reading!

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  26. Always UnluckySeptember 12, 2012 at 8:10 AM

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    Keep going that way.
    Check out mine Perfect Shot

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  27. MiSeptember 12, 2012 at 11:54 AM

    Are you reading "Fifty Shades of Grey?" The poem is so gratifyingly erotic ;)

    Well done!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 9:52 AM

      Nah but I'll catch it. Glad to know your reaction Mi:)

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  28. RiàSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:18 PM

    Ooh la la!! that was enticing. ;)

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  29. RachnaSeptember 13, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    Hot!

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  30. vinaySeptember 13, 2012 at 12:45 AM

    That was very romantic. :)

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  31. Vaishali JainSeptember 13, 2012 at 2:52 AM

    Ooooh! Romance drips from every word. ;)

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  32. rajniSeptember 13, 2012 at 3:23 AM

    That was --WOW

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  33. MeSeptember 13, 2012 at 4:01 AM

    Beautifully romatic!!<3

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  34. AmitAagSeptember 13, 2012 at 4:06 AM

    Sensuality so graceful!
    Only Saru could write!!

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  35. indiamapSeptember 13, 2012 at 5:58 AM

    Simply WOW !

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  36. jaish_vatsSeptember 13, 2012 at 6:03 AM

    Sensuous and Romantic!

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  37. matheikalSeptember 13, 2012 at 7:19 AM

    I'm reminded of my bachelor days (long period - I married at the age of 35) when music was the only companion, a very faithful companion.

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 9:56 AM

      Music is always a good companion and marrying late is good in my opinion. :)

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  38. HaddockSeptember 13, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    Like the lighting in that picture.

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  39. RajeshSeptember 13, 2012 at 10:09 AM

    I am dreaming.

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  40. PanchaliSeptember 13, 2012 at 3:13 PM

    Aah, that's sensual..romantic! amazing Saru!

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  41. D.NambiarSeptember 13, 2012 at 8:26 PM

    Wow!! Perfect!

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  42. smSeptember 13, 2012 at 8:55 PM

    very romantic

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  43. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2012 at 12:56 AM

    romantic quote

    thanks

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  44. Shalu SharmaSeptember 14, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    Very nice Saru.

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  45. gayatri soniSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:06 AM

    crazy, sinking & rhyming! ;)

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  46. Dipthi SomeshSeptember 14, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    love it.. <3

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  47. indu chhibberSeptember 14, 2012 at 7:34 AM

    Very intense-i like the rhyming.

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  48. Priya SreeramSeptember 15, 2012 at 9:09 PM

    words ooze exquisite sensuality-love it ! cheers

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  49. Saurabh ChawlaSeptember 16, 2012 at 12:46 AM

    beautiful piece :) loved it :) nd yeah have a happy week Saru :)

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  50. KappuSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:25 AM

    Less says lot!! very nice Saru!

    Do stop by my blog!! I'd love your visits & comments! - Kappu

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  51. TTTSeptember 16, 2012 at 7:00 AM

    mmmmm.....loved it !

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  52. IndranilSeptember 16, 2012 at 7:29 AM

    That's it? Just 4 lines and that's blogging?

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 16, 2012 at 10:01 AM

      Yes, that's blogging and that's a quartet to be precise. If you wish to read more, click on Articles and Fiction tab.:)

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  53. Rahul AggarwalSeptember 19, 2012 at 6:18 AM

    so less but so hot :P

    beautiful !

    archiving it in my mailbox :D

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  54. The girl in the veilSeptember 19, 2012 at 8:09 AM

    very arousing! ;-)

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  55. The girl in the veilSeptember 19, 2012 at 8:09 AM

    Very lovely too :-) :-)

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  56. Harsha (@CriticLeo)September 19, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    Whoa! Intense and beautiful. :):)

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  57. RajSeptember 22, 2012 at 11:24 AM

    No one can express and emote so much in so few words. Simply beautiful, passionate and romantic! :)

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  58. Pratik MohapatraSeptember 23, 2012 at 7:28 AM

    bold and sensuous!

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