Unfolding the night...

Hooting, whistling, screaming, falling like a pack of cards within,
That's how my body feels when we are skin to skin.
Turn off the lights, let the music sink in,
Drive me crazy and let the night begin.

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  1. I will be away for a week, will catch up with all your lovely blogs after I come back. Thanks for gracing this blog in my absence.

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    1. Come back soon.. Nothing seems pleasant in this blogging world in your absence...

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    2. Awww....People like you make blogging beautiful. Thank God, I have met you here.

      XOXOXO:)

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  2. Did I miss a beat? yes my heart says so....
    write on...

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  3. now that is exotic and romantic :)

    have a great week :)

    Bikram's

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  4. Aww..So romantic. Have a Great week Saru :-)

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  5. So brilliantly written!

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  6. wow, powerful and seductive.... with only a few words. You're an amazing writer Saru! :)

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    1. Thank you so much, it is really an encouraging comment! :)

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  7. oh, this make me smile very much!:-)

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  8. This is so mesmerizing :) Great write up as always :)

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  9. Have a great week Saru. Lovelt 4 lines. Makes me blush and day dream :-) Loved the ending :-)

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  10. I loved the way the poem begins, sets a perfect tone. Very beautiful and romantic. :)

    Very sorry Saru, I hadn't read your Hindi poem yet, will do so now. :)

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    1. Please don't be sorry Akshay. I'm lucky to have you as a reader and glad to liked this quartet as well.

      Thanks for always being there:)

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  11. All it needed was one pic and a few selected words to reveal the true emotion within. Saru, you play magically with words yaar!

    See ya soon :)

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  12. Have a nice week... Oh yeah, and that was short and romantic.

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  13. A night filled with love, moments filled with magic, the mind loosing control, anxieties left behind the door.

    Feeling so beautifully described, and I like the title very much!

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    1. I love your comment very much, kinda poetic itself. Thanks for reading!

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  14. ___$?$?$?$?______$?$?$?$?$
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    $?________________LOVE_____?$
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    _$?________________YOUR__?$
    ___?$___________________$?
    ______$?______BLO_____?$
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    Keep going that way.
    Check out mine Perfect Shot

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  15. Are you reading "Fifty Shades of Grey?" The poem is so gratifyingly erotic ;)

    Well done!

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    1. Nah but I'll catch it. Glad to know your reaction Mi:)

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  16. Ooh la la!! that was enticing. ;)

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  17. Ooooh! Romance drips from every word. ;)

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  18. Sensuality so graceful!
    Only Saru could write!!

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    1. Thanks Sir, it is a very encouraging comment!

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  19. I'm reminded of my bachelor days (long period - I married at the age of 35) when music was the only companion, a very faithful companion.

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    1. Music is always a good companion and marrying late is good in my opinion. :)

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  20. Like the lighting in that picture.

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  21. Aah, that's sensual..romantic! amazing Saru!

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  22. romantic quote

    thanks

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  23. words ooze exquisite sensuality-love it ! cheers

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  24. beautiful piece :) loved it :) nd yeah have a happy week Saru :)

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  25. That's it? Just 4 lines and that's blogging?

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    1. Yes, that's blogging and that's a quartet to be precise. If you wish to read more, click on Articles and Fiction tab.:)

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  26. so less but so hot :P

    beautiful !

    archiving it in my mailbox :D

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  27. No one can express and emote so much in so few words. Simply beautiful, passionate and romantic! :)

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