कल शाम मेरे आँगन से तेरे नाम की ख़ुशबू आई,
सही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई !
ये नियामत तो मेरे हर अंग में है समाई!
~सरू सिंघल~
सही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई !
वो काफ़िर है जो लब से उल्फ़त को करे बयाँ,
सही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई...
शुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ख़ुदा भी न जाने कब उसने ये इबादत बनाई !
सही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई...
तसल्ली दे के दिल को, बहुत दिन काटे है मैंने,
आओ अब कि कदमों की आहट से घूंज उठे शेहनाई!
सही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई!
~सरू सिंघल~
Nice!!! 'shuru hoti hai....ibadat banayi' . My favourite lines :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for reading Stuti :)
Deleteकभी सोचा हे ?
ReplyDeleteजुदाई हो या तन्हाई
तुमने प्यार की प्याली जो पिलाई
अब सही जाये ने यह जुदाई
तुम्हरे प्यार में खुद खीची आयी
Cheers
Sush
Sorry could not translate in hindi]
Lovely lines. Didn't understand, you couldn't translate what???
Deleteशुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ReplyDeleteख़ुदा भी न जाने कब उसने ये इबादत बनाई !
Amazing lines those. I can so relate to this poem, separation is always hard. :(
Thank you Akshay. Yeah, separation is really hard and heart breaking...
DeleteVery nice.....'kadamon kee aahat se goonj uthe shehnai...bahut khoob
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sir. Your comments are very inspiring.
DeleteWow , very nice .....
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBeautifully written... Took me a lot of time reading this poem for im not that good at hindi. I might also have misunderstood some words, I apologies for that
ReplyDeleteNo problems, I think this poem has some heavy words. Thanks for reading and welcome here:)
Deleteआओ अब कि कदमों की आहट से घूंज उठे शेहनाई
ReplyDeleteये नियामत है !क्या कहे हम! अति सुन्दर शब्द!
Thanks a lot Sir...:)
DeleteBeautiful emotions penned down in Hindi cum Urdu........
ReplyDeleteMoments with the beloved fly, aptly said in-
शुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
Longing, immense love expressed in these words Saru is lovely. Write more often in Hindi....
I will try. I post once a month in hindi. Thanks for reading Shaifali. :)
DeleteAmazing vocab in Hindi. IS Niyamat betrayal? I took a lot of time to read this. But the essence is felt!
ReplyDeleteNiyamat means 'God's Gift'. Thanks for reading it Jenny. :) :) :)
Deleteromantic............
ReplyDeleteThanks:)
DeleteNo comments on romantic poems :P
ReplyDeleteWhy? I don't accept this comment.
DeleteBeautifully written Urdu poem in Hindi script.. Your Urdu is amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteSaru, where did you take pictures from ?
I search for pictures on Google, can't recall which keyword I used to get this one. Sorry...
DeleteAnd thanks for a lovely comment.
Amazing as always Saru! :D
ReplyDeleteThank You!
DeleteThat was scintillating and so beautiful. I am just amazed by the vocabulary and your phenomenal usage of those words so perfectly.
ReplyDeleteSpeechless, after reading such a beautiful comment. Thank you Raj...:)
DeleteSahee na jae juthaee. I think I'm right but translation please......
ReplyDeleteYou are right. I will try loading the voice blogging next time...:)
Deleteआहट से घूंज उठे शेहनाई wah!!
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed emotions!
Thank you Sir.
Deleteतसल्ली दे के दिल को, बहुत दिन काटे है मैंने,, aise hi hota when you love truley,,you never loose hope..and shayd ek din sach bhi hojaye jo hum chahte hai wo,,
ReplyDeleteTrue...There is always a hope against hope in love. Thanks for a lovely comment Ruchi.:)
DeleteAfter a break, its nice to enter with such read,
ReplyDeleteIn spite of not being a critic,highly appreciate,
Hope you will meet your need..Good luck!
Thank you Sir for an inspiring comment. Often hindi work is not appreciated.
DeleteDidi....kya hai aapme..a decent hindi poem on the most painful word...."Judai" after Tharki man baavra..
ReplyDeleteThank you Hemant. I am happy that someone has liked it. This is my worst hindi poem if I go by stats...:(
Deletethis is so beautiful saru..
ReplyDeletethink it would be rite up ther wid ur best ones..
u've written it sooo well!! awesum work :)
No, the stats beg to differ. But thankfully there are people like us who really like it. Thanks a lot for appreciating it.
DeleteSoulful! One of your best works in Hindi. It captured the true essence of Judai :):)
ReplyDeleteThanks Harsha. :) :) :)
Deleteशुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ReplyDeleteख़ुदा भी न जाने कब उसने ये इबादत बनाई !
MAASHA-ALLAAH! :O
Thank you Akila. :) :) :)
DeleteI wonder how ppl write so beautifully in Hindi. Absolutely lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ria and where are you these days?
DeleteBeautiful as always Saru.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sonia.:)
Delete:) i found it romantic the last couple of lines beautiful
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Thanks Bikram.:)
DeleteBrilliant Piece Saru..!!! Loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Dear:)
Deletebeautiful Saru...as always !
ReplyDeleteThanks Rahul!
Deletegood use of words........like it
ReplyDeleteThanks Chetan!
Deleteबहुत ही सुन्दर एवं सारगर्भित रचना । मेरे नए पोस्ट "अमृत लाल नागर" पर आपका बेसब्री से इंतजार रहेगा । धन्यवाद ।
ReplyDeleteThanks Sir...:)
Deleteबहुत उम्दा, बहुत खूब !
ReplyDelete"शुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ख़ुदा भी न जाने कब उसने ये इबादत बनाई !"
दिल को छू गयीं ये लाइने .
Thank you so much for appreciating these lines. :)
DeleteAbsolutely wonderful poem, Saru!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir!
DeleteI am not the best judge of Hindi. It is soulful and i enjoyed it
ReplyDeleteThanks Shamsud :)
Deleteवो काफ़िर है जो लब से उल्फ़त को करे बयाँ,
ReplyDeleteये नियामत तो मेरे हर अंग में है समाई !
ummdaaa...bahut khoob likha aapane
Thanks and these are my favorite lines from this poem too. :)
DeleteSuperb.. as usual!! ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vineet :)
Deleteआओ अब कि कदमों की आहट से घूंज उठे शेहनाई !
ReplyDeleteसही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई !
वाह! दिल की गहराइयों को छूते हुए शब्द हैं...
Thanks a lot. :)
DeleteNice one. Reading a Hindi poem after 15 years. Last read one back at school. So bit of a struggle to read.
ReplyDelete:) A special thanks for reading dear...:)
DeleteLovely, as usual!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera!!!
DeleteLovely, hindi poems are always beautiful and gives that desi effect..!! :) aah such an adorable language!
ReplyDeleteIt is such an adorable language. Thanks for reading Gayathri.
Deleteमिलने की घड़ी आई,अब सही ना जाये जूदाई
ReplyDeleteLovely line...:)
DeleteBeautiful as always Saru......love it
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Seema:)
DeleteHi Saru,
ReplyDeleteIt was sheer pleasure to go through your words. They are so meaningfully woven. Being a fantastic poet which u are, it will be my great delight to have my poems reviewed by you. Do read them, ofcourse at your leisure.
Thanks for such a lovely comment Anupam and I would love to read your work.:)
DeleteIt's amazing how whenever you write about love each time, you make it sound fresh and novel :-)
ReplyDeleteYou just made my day. One of the best comments I have received till date...:)
DeleteBeautifully written lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you!!!
DeleteWah wah!
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
Deletevery nice poem saru.....keep it up..
ReplyDeleteThanks for the encouragement!!!
DeleteWah Khoob ! Bahut sundar pharmaish.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
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Deletei loved this line in your poetry शुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletenice one!! :)
ReplyDelete:) Thanks :)
Deletevery beautifully written ---
ReplyDeleteवो काफ़िर है जो लब से उल्फ़त को करे बयाँ,
fabulous lines
Thanks a ton !
DeleteLovely and beautiful poem...got few hiccups while reading 3rd and 4th line ......Keep rocking Saru:)
ReplyDeleteI know some words are lil offbeat in this one. Thanks for reading dear:)
Deletemaza aa gya..
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written Saru... I read it almost thrice :P
Thank you Jyoti :) :) :)
Deletenice dear:)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteBeautiful lines, soulful and heart touching.. wow, Saru :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Arti:)
Deletebeautiful .. liked the "words" :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali and welcome here:)
DeleteVery romantic poem Saru. "wo kaafir hai jo lab se ulfat ko karein bayaan" loved it.
ReplyDeleteAapke alfaaz me ek ummeed hai.
Thank you so much Mak. :) :) :)
DeleteTo be honest some of the words were beyond me :) but even then the depth of the poem is simply awesome..lovely play of words stitched together with amazing finesse...hope to see much more of these from you :)
ReplyDeleteSome words are offbeat Prayukth. Thanks for appreciating the poem and for an encouraging comment. :)
Deleteआओ अब कि कदमों की आहट से घूंज उठे शेहनाई !
ReplyDeleteसही न जाए अब तो एक पल भी जुदाई !
......waah bahut khoob saru lovely post mujhe bahut pasand aayi . hardik badhai . labjo ke alfaj ,......waah
Thank you so much Shashi. I think many liked this line...:)
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Deletebeautiful poem
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Thank you SM...:)
Deleteसुन्दर कविता दोस्त बधाई |
ReplyDeleteThanks:)
Deleteकदमों की आहट से घूंज उठे शेहनाई... very intense, very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anuradha :)
DeleteThanks a ton Kajal...:)
ReplyDeletenice one.. emotional types :)
ReplyDeleteThanks:)
DeleteWow,... yetanother beauty! :) Loved it!
ReplyDeleteLovely! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mi and good to see you back...:)
DeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! I am reading hindi poems after a long time and the usage of excellent poetic words have totally awakened my senses :) Great Job!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear and welcome here:)
Deleteशुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ReplyDeleteख़ुदा भी न जाने कब उसने ये इबादत बनाई !
Excellent lines....
Thank you Deepak:)
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ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletevery soulful
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana and welcome here!
DeleteWah...wah. Woh kafir hai jo labsa se ulfat ko kare bayaan- beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kiran!
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ReplyDeleteशुरू होती है फलक से, फ़ना बस एक झलक में,
ख़ुदा भी न जाने कब उसने ये इबादत बनाई !
वाह ! क्या गज़ब की पंक्तियाँ लिखी हैं ! लगता ही नहीं कि ये पंक्तियाँ ज्यादातर अंग्रेजी में लिखने वाली किसी कवियत्री ने लिखी हैं ! बहुत सुन्दर सारू जी
Shukriya!
Deletevery beautiful!
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DeleteUrdu+Hindi = A SUPER COMBO-PACK !
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