You are passionate about writing... and i can feel it through ur words. you live ur life through ur words, beliving them that they are true. They have life. I truly appreciate what you've written i went through the first page, and i have to say.With simple words you dont just touch our hearts, but make them stay there.
You've become one of my fav authors, and that is no easy feat ;)...
I hope u create more of such everlasting piece of literature with the same passion. :) keep it up. Glad to have found u :)
Saru...its the day for your blog. I just cant get out of it and read something else...I love poetry and I am enjoying reading thoroughly yours. I loved your pictures with poems too..they both tell me about you. Thanks for these beautiful words.
फ़ुर्सत में मिलना मुझसे यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई देखना है तुम्हें एक टक शिकवे करने है तुमसे कई हज़ार जब नाराज़ हुए थे तुम मुझसे और जब छेड़ा था मुझे बीच बाज़ार चवन्नी-अठन्नी सा ढोंग मत करना मान लेना मेरे हर कहे को सुबकियाँ से काम मत चलाना बेहने देना ग़र आँसू बेहे तो सख़्त होने का दिखावा छोड़ आना नुक्कड़ वाले बनिये की दुकान पे सिद्दत से एक बार बोल देना कि गलती होती है इंसान से तुम मुझे छोड़ गए उसका तुम्हें कभी अफ़सोस हुआ है क्या मैं नहीं तुमसे पूछूँगी कि मेरे बाद मेरी तरह किसी को छुआ है क्या ना मैं इस युग की मीरा हूँ ना हो तुम मेरे घनश्याम बस इश्क़ है तुमसे बेपन्नह मुझे बाक़ी सब कुछ है मुझमें आम तुम भी सोचते होगे ना यह तीली सा इश्क़, ज्वालामुखी कब हुआ यूँ समझ लो तुम्हारे जाने के बाद तुम्हारे ख़याल ने दिन में 100 बार मुझे छुआ अब गणित में तो तुम अव्वल हो हिसाब लगा ही लोगे पर सोच के आना जनाब पिछले 15 सालों का हिसाब कैसे दोगे तो आना बस फ़ुरसत में यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई
तुम किसी बड़े शहर की बड़ी इमारत और मैं नुक्कड़ वाली पान की दुकान तुम्हें महँगी चीज़े पसंद हैं और मेरे पास है चवन्नी-अठन्नी का सामान फिर भी तुम मुझे देखते हो कुछ तो बात होगी मुझमें और भी कई आशिक़ है मेरे ज़्यादा इतराना मत ख़ुद पे बस ये दिल साला बीड़ी सा सुलगता है जो तुझे एक बार देख लूँ समझ नहीं आता अपने छोटे बजट में क्या तोहफ़ा तुम्हें भेज दूँ इश्क़ बहुतो को ले डूबा हैं अब मैं कैसे किनारा करूँ तुझसे जो नैन लगाये हैं दिल कहता है ये कांड मैं दोबारा करूँ उँगलियों पे गिनती हूँ मैं घंटे फ़ोन पे लगाती हूँ अलार्म हाय, मैं रही मॉडर्न डे मीरा तुम किसन कन्हैया घनश्याम आओ कभी हमारी गली दिन, तारीख़, मौसम मत देखना सरप्राइज सा देना मुझे आने की खबर भी ना भेजना तुम जैसे अमीर से मुझ जैसे गरीब ने दिल लगाया है जितना तुम्हारा दिन का खर्चा है उतना मेरा पाँच महीने का किराया है पर इश्क़ पैसा नहीं देखता ना देखता है औक़ात मुझे तुम्हारी सादगी पसंद आई काश तुम्हें भी पसंद हो मेरी कोई बात
Music is my 19-year-old boyfriend who picked me up from college and took me to a different restaurant every Saturday - and - tucked my hair behind my ear as I ate sizzler. Music is also the sauve man I dated who listened to my 5-year plan - feeding my soul and body with a penetrating stare and his to-die-for smile. Music is also the man who betrayed me and left me in the lurch - and - made me fall every time I tried to take a step forward. Music is love, lust and betrayal all rolled into one. I have lived more in the songs I have listened to than through the highs and lows of life. In the dead of winter last January, I missed my bus and had to wait for another bus for 40 minutes in -15 degrees celsius. I shivered in sub-zero weather. With anger seething in my body, warmth was given by Ed Sheeran's Beautiful People . I wondered was Ed was singing for me? Because I don't fit in this world. Because, at that time, I could definitely use some help. Perhaps a ride. Perhaps enough mo
Lovely Words Saruji... Keep It Up... All the Best... Waiting for more words from you... :) <3
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this is so beautiful
ReplyDeleteAmazing thought Saru ji....
ReplyDeleteso pure and beautiful.. :)
ReplyDeleteA suggestion : try to avoid posting so many posts on a single day.
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so true...beautifully written...
ReplyDelete@Jay- Thanks Jay and keep visiting.
ReplyDelete@Jidhu Jose- Few of my words are inspired by your great photography.
@magiceye- Thanks for appreciating, your words encourage me a lot.
@induravisinghj- :)
@Rachit- I am glad you like it and thanks for your suggestion:)
@SUB- :) The search for comfort ends there, I guess. Thanks.
Amazingly beautiful :)
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ReplyDelete@Ayushi B & Santosh Bangar- Your words mean a lot!
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ReplyDeletenice saru........ as usual!! :-)
ReplyDelete"ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
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WOW..!! u might hav heard it a 100 times.. its superb.. :) :)
ReplyDelete*In the arms of someone you love, you’ll find the best resting place."...couldnt agree more..:)
ReplyDelete@Rajnish Tiwari, Sunil Padiyar & Sneha Sunny- Thanks.
ReplyDelete@Sujatha Sathya- One of my favorite songs.
@Ms. Holla- This thought is so wonderful:)
@India's no.1 blog- :)
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully worded. Emotions conveyed so well. Loved this post. :)
ReplyDeletevery touching
ReplyDeletekahin,,.. kaashh... but very true...
ReplyDeletecool words :) loved them!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely stunning... just a weaver of words!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted!!!
ReplyDeleteSimple but with depth!
ReplyDeleteSo true...Beautiful thought Saru....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines!!
ReplyDeletekeep the spirits up.
ReplyDelete@deepazartz- Thanks Dear.
ReplyDelete@Spicy Sweet- Thanks for capturing the emotions. :)
@a girl's diary- Thanks a lot!
@Bhargav- I wish everyone find their resting place. :)
@jaynthbusi- Delighted, thanks! Wish could attach a nicer picture:)
@Dibakar Sarkar- Thanks for such a wonderful compliment.
@Red Handed- Thanks, I'm still learning the art...
@Angel- Yeah, Even I admire words with depth. Liked your recent post so much.
@Neha- Thanks:)
@Vyankatesh- Thats the beauty of a couplet, few words portraying beautiful emotions.
@Katan Patil- Yeah, compliments keep the spirits up :)
fall in love with ur words at the very first read. truly beutiful!
ReplyDeleteYou are passionate about writing... and i can feel it through ur words. you live ur life through ur words, beliving them that they are true. They have life. I truly appreciate what you've written i went through the first page, and i have to say.With simple words you dont just touch our hearts, but make them stay there.
ReplyDeleteYou've become one of my fav authors, and that is no easy feat ;)...
I hope u create more of such everlasting piece of literature with the same passion. :) keep it up.
Glad to have found u :)
Take care and keep writing..........
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ReplyDelete@ayushrastogi- Thank you so much. :):)
ReplyDelete@Thousif Raza- Being someone's favorite is very difficult. I am so thrilled after reading your comment. You made my day. Thanks!:)
@Kumar Kusumesh- Thank you Sir.
touching ...and ....Beautiful lines!!
ReplyDelete@संजय भास्कर- Thanks, I am delighted when someone is touched by my words!
ReplyDeleteThis could also be the thoughts of a baby unborn to the mother I felt :) Lovely musing!
ReplyDelete@Leo- That's a very nice perspective, now your words are inspiring me. Thanks Dear.
ReplyDeleteWarmth of love :)
ReplyDelete@Beyond Horizon- :)
ReplyDeletesoo lovely and touching..:)
ReplyDelete@oja- Thanks Dear:)
ReplyDeleteOhh my god, how can you write so well!
ReplyDeleteI feel so much connected, awesome :)
@Animesh Ganguly- Again, I can't thank you enough...:)
ReplyDeleteMy apologies for I missed on sucha lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteThese words, they were so warm. Fab one, Saru :)
@Risha Kalra- No need to apologize dear, I am touched that you're reading my old posts as well...Thanks
ReplyDeleteSaru...its the day for your blog. I just cant get out of it and read something else...I love poetry and I am enjoying reading thoroughly yours. I loved your pictures with poems too..they both tell me about you. Thanks for these beautiful words.
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I could almost visualize!Lovely
ReplyDelete@Shaifali- Thanks a lot dear, I am on cloud nine after reading all your comments:)
ReplyDelete@Rahul- Thank you Sir, you appreciate my work so nicely...:)
Ahh what can I say, I know how beautiful a feeling it is.. :)
ReplyDeleteSo nice to read your older posts, Saru :)
Thank you Akshay:) It's always great to hear what you say. Thanks for gracing this blog.:)
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