I stretch my fingers, But mind says 'No'; Voice of my loved ones, Trails me as an echo. Persuading my heart, To sway away from phone; Keep it down, You live in a different time zone. Different time zone, I fumble in my thoughts. Morning, noon and night; I am out of sorts. It's perfect here, Too perfect for me, Like dead flowers adorned as a potpourri. Drowning in the timeline, Submerging in seven vast oceans. No distance in the world, Can cause this massive erosion. A part of me, my soul, Never left my house courtyard. If ever you want to collect me, my pieces, You know where to start.
Good thought. Would have been a better one if it was for another gender :). Just my opinion !
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comment by Prateek. Too good thought as usual.
ReplyDeleteVery well written thought..:)
ReplyDeleteI have always been a fan of your words. Every single one of them packs so much meaning and so much depth. :)
ReplyDeleteMay be some day scientists can explain that Why and How any other person becomes as important for one that she looses her most precious thing for him
ReplyDeleteVery concise and powerful!
ReplyDeleteShort,truth and applicable for "he " also.
ReplyDeleteSo true. Very well said. Such relationships are not worth keeping.
ReplyDeleteSo true words, Saru!
ReplyDeleteA very thought-provoking one :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm. Thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteNice soulful verses Saru
ReplyDeleteSo true words Saru ji !!
ReplyDeleteThought-provoking!
ReplyDeleteTrue and thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant. Nothing should be kept at the cost of one's dignity.
ReplyDeleteThat is sad ...
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Great insight in few words. Totally agree with you Saru.
ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much for reading.
ReplyDeleteSaid it all in few words!
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