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  1. Swati BatraJuly 19, 2016 at 12:55 AM

    Emotional and then a Shock

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  2. Pranju chakrapaniJuly 19, 2016 at 3:25 AM

    the words "after his first murder" gives away a lot to the story. His first murder when he was not that calm...

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  3. Devilish AngelJuly 19, 2016 at 4:51 AM

    Well expressed...

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  4. CifarJuly 19, 2016 at 5:34 AM

    superb story telling in this small piece, brilliant

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  5. Vishal BheerooJuly 19, 2016 at 6:05 AM

    Powerful and weaved brilliantly:)

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  6. Tarang SinhaJuly 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM

    Ewww...cruel twist!

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  7. BikramJuly 20, 2016 at 4:59 AM

    oooh that is BAD... he should be shot...

    Bikram's

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  8. Sujatha SathyaJuly 21, 2016 at 3:16 AM

    Didn't expect that end. Nice title...reveals nothing

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  9. RajlakshmiJuly 21, 2016 at 7:15 PM

    woa now that's a twist. The title sounds apt after reading the story :)

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  10. AnonymousJuly 26, 2016 at 1:36 PM

    wow ! what a twist !

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