I Am Not Alone
Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
What an ending! Wonderful!
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This is what I call creative genius! Kudos!!
Ghosh. So deep and amazing. I nearly cried. :/
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That's so much said in such few words. Brilliant work, once again, Saru.
Very intense.
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Sad. I love the way you write intense stories in precise words.
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ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
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