#YouAreMine

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This is my second story on hashtag #YouAreMine
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  1. Harsh Wardhan JogJanuary 4, 2016 at 11:48 PM

    तू प्यार करे या ठुकराए,
    हम तो हैं तेरे दीवानों में.

    चाहे तो हमें अपना ना बना,
    हम तो हैं तेरे परवानों में !

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  2. Writefully YoursJanuary 5, 2016 at 10:32 PM

    Sweet :)

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  3. Aiswarya MoodadiJanuary 6, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    Nice one Saru!

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  4. ManiparnaJanuary 6, 2016 at 12:11 PM

    Short and sweet... :-)

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  5. UnknownJanuary 6, 2016 at 12:27 PM

    This is so sweet. Very beautifully penned dear. :)

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  6. Yogesh JoshiJanuary 6, 2016 at 1:21 PM

    Awesome one Ma'am... :)

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  7. Purba chakrabortyJanuary 6, 2016 at 2:28 PM

    aww....this is so romantic :) <3
    It's always a treat to read your hashtag stories dear.

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  8. sunaina sharmaJanuary 6, 2016 at 6:43 PM

    aha....that is a sweet fight.....:)

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  9. AnanyaJanuary 7, 2016 at 12:35 AM

    Awww soo cheesy ..luv it Saru
    Happy 2016 !


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  10. Amit AgarwalJanuary 7, 2016 at 1:01 AM

    Lovely!

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  11. ParulJanuary 7, 2016 at 1:29 AM

    How sweet :) :)

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  12. Yogi SaraswatJanuary 7, 2016 at 1:49 AM

    Beautiful words Saru ji !!

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  13. Anjali SengarJanuary 7, 2016 at 2:01 AM

    Aww! I can feel love in the air :)

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  14. Kokila guptaJanuary 7, 2016 at 3:07 AM

    Lovely, like that childhood story! Do you remember Saru ?

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  15. KalpanaJanuary 7, 2016 at 5:30 AM

    Hahahaha - what an adorable thought.

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  16. Anupam Chakraborty (Go And Wander)January 7, 2016 at 6:07 AM

    So sweet :-)

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  17. Chaitali BhattacharjeeJanuary 7, 2016 at 8:55 AM

    It's like two shots from one arrow.

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  18. RakeshJanuary 7, 2016 at 11:22 AM

    So cute and beautiful story! Loved the concept!

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  19. shraddha singhJanuary 7, 2016 at 11:28 AM

    Hahaha.. lovely
    actually its too cheesy.. if i imagine the expression of that lady then it must be liking bursting into a blushfull smile.

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  20. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 7, 2016 at 11:21 PM

    Such a sweet and adorable end to a fight! :)

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  21. Tarang SinhaJanuary 8, 2016 at 7:41 AM

    Nice! No, really, it is. This concept, #HashTagStories, is interesting and so creative! A serious matter said beautifully here.

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  22. joshi danielJanuary 8, 2016 at 10:40 AM

    this one is awesome :)

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  23. RajJanuary 8, 2016 at 9:36 PM

    Ah.... so cutely funny. Beautifully written. :) You are a master of this amazing concept.

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  24. Jyotsna BhatiaJanuary 10, 2016 at 5:16 AM

    That's cute :)

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  25. Shoma AbhyankarJanuary 10, 2016 at 9:30 AM

    Wah wah and wah wah for Harshwardhan Jog too.

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  26. Saru SinghalJanuary 14, 2016 at 11:46 AM

    @Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

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  27. Vishal BheerooJanuary 14, 2016 at 12:20 PM

    Love is what we crave for. Just love the sprinkle of humor:)

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