Inglorious Lovers

Draw a line, will ya?
I'll never cross, you never step outside of it.
Like those caged souls,
Just trying to fit in.
You continue to love me still,
I will die with your name in my heart.
Be in a cage all our lives,
Sphering why people kept us apart?
Or break-free, shall we?
Run away from this world to create ours.
You, me and twenty two doves,
Dancing in maiden showers.
People gotta say what they say,
Let's entertain them with a scandal.
Wet kisses, passionate hugs, no regret,
Too much heat for them to handle.
You be my Darcy,
Let me entice you like Marilyn Monroe.
Morning burns into evening,
Night burns into dawn ever so slow.
Inglorious, scandalous, infamous,
People will call us names.
Let's plot some carnal sins together,
Let passion run in our veins.
What will I love the most, you know?
By the end of this roller coaster ride.
We will have our own Mills & Boon story,
In which lovers never left each other’s side.

Comments

  1. Let's entertain them with a scandal// that's right :D
    loved the passion running in your verses

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    1. Hehehe... I love those who do what they want without caring about the world.
      Thanks for reading, Raj. :)

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  2. Sounds like a mills and boon story indeed;) Love the romance running all along the verses and specially beeline you be my Darcy. Waiting for my Mr. Darcy :p

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  3. I read it last night and the lines were haunting me :)

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    1. Oh, I hope in a good way. :)

      #FeelingRestlessThough

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  4. Nice verses Saru.How you make them contemplate on eating the forbidden apple!

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    1. Hehehe... The forbidden fruit is quite interesting, you see. :P

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    1. To each his own. Only thing - don't make decisions to please people.

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  6. Each love story is special. Let others scandalize. Loved the message conveyed Saru... :-)

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  7. Saru thats a fun poem. I like the idea of scandalizing others. Only thing, i think Darcy was not a big displayer of passion. Do you agree?

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    1. Nothing to do with passion. Darcy is one of the most desired men from literature.

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  8. you, me and twenty two doves - wow.. would love to know the significance of twenty two doves :)

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  9. Morning burns into evening,
    Night burns into dawn ever so slow.
    Inglorious, scandalous, infamous,
    People will call us names.
    Let's plot some carnal sins together,
    very passionate indeed

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  10. Never read M&Bs...but this tremendous poem reminds me of something inexplicable...Simply loved it!

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  11. Loved each & every line Saru!!
    I am so amused by the way you craft such pieces...any tips to share :P

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    1. Just write what you feel and thanks for reading Hemant.

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  12. Lovely lines....in the best of relations people are just themselves...doing whatever they want....being happy together...bliss....glorious lovers

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  13. Lovely poetry........

    Ply check my new post....

    https://selfdrivetrips.wordpress.com/2015/04/09/one-day-road-trip-ideas-from-delhi/

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  14. Hi Saru,

    That was filled with passion and romance to the core. So, it looks like you adore Monroe quite a lot. I had a poster of Monroe in my graduation hostel room handed down to me by my senior. Loved this piece.

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog

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    1. I can imagine a hostel room with her poster. Thanks for reading Jay and welcome back. :)

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  15. romantic...the pic is so M&B types..i read a few of those during college..

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    1. I haven't read any. I started one but could read only 3-4 pages. No my type. Thanks for reading my poem dear. :)

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  16. That's a passionate love story intricately woven into a lovely poem :).

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  17. Flirts with SIN,,,,Blissful and beautiful...

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  18. Well written poem Saru.Loved the way you have woven.

    Cheers,
    Sriram & Krithiga

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