The Hit Formula
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My poetry is not for foreplay. It's for after sex.
My poetry is not for foreplay. It's for after sex. When you'll light the Marlboro and move to your side of the bed, my poems will be the breath of fresh air in a room filled with smoke. But do not underestimate me. My poems won't be sweet, gentle or mellow. They will be brazen, brutal and bold. I will present them on a sharply-edged knife. The blood on the knife will be hot. Fresh from the wounds I don't allow to heal. You will take a drag from Marlboro - but served with my sinful words - you will feel as if you've snorted cocaine. You will not get high, though. You will see the world in a different light. Murky lanes leading to posh hotels, board rooms and high-rise apartment buildings. In one of those aesthetically decorated rooms, you will see a man f*****g someone's life just for a little pleasure. You will see him getting hard on someone's misery. A woman pleasuring herself while watching a wrecked home that she takes all credit for. To watch
True -- persistence and determination will get you a long way if you're given the chance.
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DeleteThat was a lofty poetic sixer, Saru:) It crossed over the fence!!!Just lovely!
ReplyDeleteI am bowled over with your beautiful comment. Thanks Sir :)
Deletesixer of a poem! true! chance and confidence are two pillars of success :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Ankita!
DeleteLike the lady who commented before me said 'THIS IS A SIXER OF A POEM'. Brilliant Saru!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Red!
DeleteYour poem surely says a lot about the formula of success!
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Deletesure shot formula :)
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DeleteGreat Saru..SIXER it is..indeed...:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna.
DeleteCricket and life's lessons. How well you write. Also, I love your creative photos.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Rachna!
DeleteSuperb one
ReplyDeleteThank you, Vinisha!
DeletePositively beautiful Saru :)
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DeleteThat was a classic shot to six. Great one Saru and of course much much better than helicopter shot! ;)
ReplyDeleteLOL, thanks Krishna.
DeleteIt is indeed a sixer. Persistence is important but people often want everything in one stroke. Beautifully penned, Saru.
ReplyDeleteThat never happens, hard work is the key. Thanks for reading, Kiran,
DeleteThis is unique ! For a second, I thought that you wrote about Dhoni ! :)
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DeleteNicely words, Saru.
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DeleteSo Impressive, I'd love to learn it. Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading!
DeleteSome patience, some inspiration and some momentum is all what it takes. Very nice formula :-)
ReplyDeleteI hope it works for me.
DeleteWonderful verses Saru..Lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nagini.
DeleteA Poem on Cricket ... this is definitely out of the box and so wonderfully unique :-) Being a big Cricket fan, I loved this a lot :-)
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear that. Thanks for reading, Amrit.
DeleteSaru, you have perfectly captured the thoughts and emotions of every such cricketer who despite being talented may not have got a chance to show it :). Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aseem.
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