I Am Not Alone
Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
True -- persistence and determination will get you a long way if you're given the chance.
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DeleteThat was a lofty poetic sixer, Saru:) It crossed over the fence!!!Just lovely!
ReplyDeleteI am bowled over with your beautiful comment. Thanks Sir :)
Deletesixer of a poem! true! chance and confidence are two pillars of success :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Ankita!
DeleteLike the lady who commented before me said 'THIS IS A SIXER OF A POEM'. Brilliant Saru!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Red!
DeleteYour poem surely says a lot about the formula of success!
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DeleteGreat Saru..SIXER it is..indeed...:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna.
DeleteCricket and life's lessons. How well you write. Also, I love your creative photos.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Rachna!
DeleteSuperb one
ReplyDeleteThank you, Vinisha!
DeletePositively beautiful Saru :)
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DeleteThat was a classic shot to six. Great one Saru and of course much much better than helicopter shot! ;)
ReplyDeleteLOL, thanks Krishna.
DeleteIt is indeed a sixer. Persistence is important but people often want everything in one stroke. Beautifully penned, Saru.
ReplyDeleteThat never happens, hard work is the key. Thanks for reading, Kiran,
DeleteThis is unique ! For a second, I thought that you wrote about Dhoni ! :)
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DeleteNicely words, Saru.
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DeleteSo Impressive, I'd love to learn it. Thanks for sharing this.
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DeleteWonderful verses Saru..Lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nagini.
DeleteI hope it works for me.
ReplyDeleteA Poem on Cricket ... this is definitely out of the box and so wonderfully unique :-) Being a big Cricket fan, I loved this a lot :-)
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear that. Thanks for reading, Amrit.
DeleteSaru, you have perfectly captured the thoughts and emotions of every such cricketer who despite being talented may not have got a chance to show it :). Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aseem.
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