Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you.
Like that cigarette slowly burning between your fingers, I burn too. Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you. The only difference - you can buy your addiction - but I can't win over you in a million years. The only similarity - you crush both cigarette butts and my hopes multiple times a day under your feet. You are one cruel b*****d. Oh man, why I still love you so very much? I think about that a lot sober. There has to be a reason for this unwavering, almost God-like devotion towards you. For the life of me, I can't find an answer to that question. I don't know why I want to walk barefoot on a black beach with you. Watch the sunset - and - watch your features turn into a beautiful silhouette. As the evening would sink into darkness and we will lay on the beach to watch the stars and crescent moon - I want to smell the salty ocean on your skin. Then when you will try to light that f*****g Goldflake and put it between your lips, I will th
Lovely composition ! Have posted my comment on the link!
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly written Saru. Every word captured the greed perfectly!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully rendered Saru. Some people ought to stop counting their money and start looking at the reality on the otherside. Congratulations on your publication dearie. Many more such feathers to add to your cap. God bless you.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! Well-deserved entry. :-)
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed greed brilliantly. Congrats Saru, :)
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed. :) And, congratulations :)
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Saru !
ReplyDeleteAmazing I will say
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Saru :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem. The need to always want more than what we require, makes us greedy and thereby we forget to enjoy what we have in hand!
Congratz Saru!
ReplyDeleteAwesome and congrats Saru
ReplyDeleteExactly ! True words ! congrats Saru ! U are being famous
ReplyDeleteCongrats Saru !
ReplyDeleteLOvely! Congrats SaruSmith!
ReplyDeleteCongratulation , this poem is worth it,
ReplyDeleteCongrats Saru
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Saru and a beautiful composition.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Saru.... Beautiful written....:)
ReplyDeleteEvery human being must understand this... An eyeopener! Congrats! TC! Keep smiling and happy writing :)
ReplyDeleteLove the quote about the ego. Spot on.
ReplyDeleteWe never realize that we are not better, and sometime worse. Well written Saru
ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much! :)
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