I stretch my fingers, But mind says 'No'; Voice of my loved ones, Trails me as an echo. Persuading my heart, To sway away from phone; Keep it down, You live in a different time zone. Different time zone, I fumble in my thoughts. Morning, noon and night; I am out of sorts. It's perfect here, Too perfect for me, Like dead flowers adorned as a potpourri. Drowning in the timeline, Submerging in seven vast oceans. No distance in the world, Can cause this massive erosion. A part of me, my soul, Never left my house courtyard. If ever you want to collect me, my pieces, You know where to start.
Lovely composition ! Have posted my comment on the link!
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly written Saru. Every word captured the greed perfectly!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully rendered Saru. Some people ought to stop counting their money and start looking at the reality on the otherside. Congratulations on your publication dearie. Many more such feathers to add to your cap. God bless you.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! Well-deserved entry. :-)
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed greed brilliantly. Congrats Saru, :)
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed. :) And, congratulations :)
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Saru !
ReplyDeleteAmazing I will say
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ReplyDeleteAwesome and congrats Saru
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ReplyDeleteLOvely! Congrats SaruSmith!
ReplyDeleteCongratulation , this poem is worth it,
ReplyDeleteCongrats Saru
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Saru and a beautiful composition.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Saru.... Beautiful written....:)
ReplyDeleteEvery human being must understand this... An eyeopener! Congrats! TC! Keep smiling and happy writing :)
ReplyDeleteLove the quote about the ego. Spot on.
ReplyDeleteWe never realize that we are not better, and sometime worse. Well written Saru
ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much! :)
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