Last Piece Of Bread


My poem 'Last Piece Of Bread' is published in The Book Club's Magazine. Please click on the link below to read it. 
Last Piece Of Bread

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  1. Lovely composition ! Have posted my comment on the link!

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  2. Brilliantly written Saru. Every word captured the greed perfectly!

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  3. Beautifully rendered Saru. Some people ought to stop counting their money and start looking at the reality on the otherside. Congratulations on your publication dearie. Many more such feathers to add to your cap. God bless you.

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  4. Congratulations! Well-deserved entry. :-)

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  5. You have expressed greed brilliantly. Congrats Saru, :)

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  6. Very well expressed. :) And, congratulations :)

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  7. Great writing Saru !

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  8. Congratulations Saru :-)

    Wonderful poem. The need to always want more than what we require, makes us greedy and thereby we forget to enjoy what we have in hand!

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  9. Exactly ! True words ! congrats Saru ! U are being famous

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  10. Congratulation , this poem is worth it,

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  11. Congratulations Saru and a beautiful composition.

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  12. Congratulations Saru.... Beautiful written....:)

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  13. Every human being must understand this... An eyeopener! Congrats! TC! Keep smiling and happy writing :)

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  14. Love the quote about the ego. Spot on.

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  15. We never realize that we are not better, and sometime worse. Well written Saru

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