Love, Not Anymore



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  1. Lovely writing Saru! A flow of emotions....

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  2. Very nice.
    Do not cry. Makes it all the more emotional.

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  3. A fight between mind and heart will most possibly end in tears...The ending brought chills in me Saru. The 2nd stanza is so meaningful. Love it Saru.

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    1. Glad you liked it, Vidhya. :)

      Thanks for reading.

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  4. Reflects the pain so beautifully. A beautiful piece as always.

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  5. Memories, the last day in wild prairie
    Knocks on my window pane
    Ushers a wild smile on my lips
    But never eases off my pain
    nice words ! straight from Heart

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  6. Oh, those memories! Lovely writing.

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  7. " You are my lover, now and forever
    We can never be friends"- so true!
    enjoyed your craft Saru :-)

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  8. Didn't know pain could be expressed so beautifully :)

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  9. emotional and quite bold one! I liked the ending :)

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  10. Hi Saru
    Beautiful poem: captures the essence of moments that lovers undergo. :)

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  11. Very lovely writeup Saru... You always rock...

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  12. it was so amazing Saru, I am not able to choose which of the line is my favorite. It touched me truly mesmerizing poem...touched the right chords.

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    1. Thank you for your generous comment, Shweta. :)

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  13. Beautiful! Liked how you've penned it using the right words.
    The second para is just wonderful, the whole poem indeed is. :)

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  14. Beautiful Saru....super poignant

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  15. Very touching poem Saru.....well expressed.....:)

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  16. The emotions of the protagonist remind me of U2's song "With or Without You"

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  17. What a beautiful poem Saru!! As always, of course.

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  18. Such sadness, deep loss in love.

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  19. another beautiful composition, heart touching poem

    Humsafar

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  20. A pure rendition of love! Touching!

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  21. Very poignant Saru... it touched my heart... beautiful words cried out loud for that one thing called true love...amazing...

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  22. Nicely expressed Saru..as always... :-)

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  23. the ways of the heart .. never understood .. beautiful but sad poem


    Bikram's

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  24. beautifully written saru! latest on my blog http://ankitaranotra.blogspot.in/2014/08/have-you-been-swept-by-als-ice-bucket.html

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  25. I rattle inside.... beautiful
    never friends....yes some people can either be lovers or strangers never friends

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  26. What an emotional poem! You have expressed pain beautifully, Saru.

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  28. How do you come up with such rhyming beauties ... the pain and love so beautifully described ... another gem of a poem, and I am not surprised. After all, when you are the poetess, gems flow like raindrops :D

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    1. Hehehee... You are too extravagant with your compliments.

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  29. Beautiful, though painful...and so real!!!

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    1. Thank you, good to hear from you after a long time.

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  30. some times i wish to write like this but cant :(
    so beautiful !

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  31. I loved the second and the third para...suddenly makes it all real. Different from other love poems which focus on more rose tinted aspects of love. This was a tale of a terrible self realization...2 lost souls, beautiful!

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    1. Lets forget that I have written it. I feel this is true. You want someone back only if they want to and love you. And I do believe once lovers can never be friends. Thanks for reading.

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  32. True, they just do what life offers.

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  33. Beautiful .... specially liked the third stanza... :)

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    1. Thanks for gracing the blog, Kokila. Glad you liked it. :)

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  34. Loved it, The beauty of your poems esp when they come to the climactic part is absolutely lovely :).. Enjoyed this one :)

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  35. I just had tears in my eyes after reading this....An excellent piece of work..

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