Sing a rain song...

Hold me,
Twirl those arms around my waist.
Tap your feet to the symphony,
Kiss me gently on my face.

Our senses will fade a little,
As we'll step into trance.
With lips interlocked,
Heart doing a happy dance.

Coloring me all red,
Heat in the body will flow.
Transporting me to a far off land,
With fine wine and French chateau.

Wait a bit longer,
Let's not rush.
With rain steaming my body,
I can never have enough.

There has to be something first,
Something that never goes wrong.
Rain, kiss, love, passion,
And a rain song.

So, what's your favorite rain song? Here's mine ~


*Image Source - Here

Comments

  1. phew....need an cold shower now! :D.....How about....Kaate nahi katthe ye din ye raat Mr India 1987 :)

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    1. That's really beautiful and Sridevi looked stunning in that song.

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  2. Dekho Na - Song - FANAA - Aamir Khan | Kajol two of my fav.....Saru, yeh tune accha nahi kiya sawere sawere yeh post daal kar....haaye ab yeh din kab dhalegi :)

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  3. romantic rain :D .. wonderful poem !

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  4. Ahaa ! So romantic.... Beautiful Poem Saru.....Lovely.... :)

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  5. Although I'm not a big fan of rain songs because the roads get all clogged up and hence you aren't left with many spaces to embrace your beloved, which I don't have even otherwise. But this eclogue had a perfect rendition and made me enjoy the rains even without being in them. :)

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  6. Just when I think, I am over romance, you do this! :)

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  7. very romanticccccccccccccc :) and that is a lovely song ..

    my favourite song hmmmmm

    yeh daulat bhi le lo
    shauharat bhi le lo ..

    ..............

    magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka sawan .. wohs kagaz ki kishti woh barish ka paani

    Bikram's

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    1. It's a good song but not exactly a rain song. What do you think?

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  8. this poem is as romantic as this song!

    <3

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  9. Very romantic poem Saru :) I was singing this song only today in office since morning :D

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    1. That's a lovely coincidence. Wait, for whom you were singing this song to?

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  10. Ur poem is as sizzling as the Bollywood song i must say. i guess prolly it's my age or else i would've said i like Saawan ke jhoolay paday as my fav or Rhimjhim ghire sawaan but these days when it rains the song that always comes to my mind is that one from the movie Junoon (1978) Ghir aayee kaali ghataa matwaali saawan kee aayee bahaar re saawan kee aayee bahhar re, bela chameli kee kaliyaan mehak gayee, bela chameli....heck i started off. It was sung by Preeti Saagar i suppose . Cheers to monsoon and by saying this i am beckoning it to come and start raining in Delhi...:)
    Btw the one that Bikram shared is also another one Woh kagaz kee kashti woh baarish ka paani....hahahaha i guess humari umara mein aisa hee hota hai shayad hahahaha :) :) :)

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    1. Hahaha... I guess we love songs that were popular in our teenage days. My favorite will look ancient to kids these days. Btw, I love rhimjim ghire sawan.

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  11. That was really passionate Saru! I hope it keeps pouring:)

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    1. I hope so too. It's really hot here these days.

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  12. Ah...you make it all sound so magical. I WANT!

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  13. nice poem, my favorite rain song is Rimjhim-Rimjhim,Rumjhum-Rumjhum from 1942 A Love Story

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  14. Ohhh! such a magical rainy poem Saru ..wonderful..:-)

    I love so many rain songs...the naughty,sensuous ones ... :-P :-D tip tip barsa is also in my list... :-)

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      Glad you like the poem.

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  15. awww how beautiful.. The rain definitely does that to me :) lovely imageries and so so romantic :D

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  16. Rain is always sensuous and you gave such an evocative expression to that!

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  18. Hot stuff there. My fav rain song is Rimjhim gire saawan sulag sulag jaaye mann!

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  19. ऎसी रचनाएँ रोमांचित कर जाती हैं... एक अलग प्रकार का रोमांच होता है.

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  20. Amazing poetic snaps of deep romance .jk

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  21. Rain and romance go hand in hand and you captured beautifully

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  22. I am very much old fashion. I will go with singing in the rain.

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  23. Amazing poem! :) The rain brings with it so many emotions!

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  24. The song is a consolation since the actual rains are shunning us (in Delhi, at least).

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  25. lovely, romantic, beautiful poem...
    this poem is a perfect example of "romanticism"...

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  26. very nice!!! I would like some wine and a French Chateau too :)

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  27. Ah! I love romantic ones :)
    Good one :)

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  28. I love so many Bollywood rain songs! Loooong list, Saru :)
    Nice poem!

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  29. Beautiful and romantic poem ! Btw nice choice of rain song and mine is a Tamil song " Thenmerku paruvakatru" rain song...see it in YouTube and you will love it as well :)

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    1. I listened to the song and it was good. Couldn't understand the lyrics though.

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  30. I love rain songs..my favorite is "Saawan barse tarse dil". :') Beautiful Saru.

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    1. Couldn't get it. Have to Google. Thanks for reading, Pooja.

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    2. Got it, it's so soulful. Love the lyrics.

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  31. very sweet romantic song!! The Mohra song is actually pretty sensual in comparison!

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  32. you drenched us with romance...

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  33. I read this poem on your fb wall and reading here too! Very romantic one Saru!!

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  34. Now this is one of those poems that I wish I could have written, but then, only the versatile Saru Singhal could have woven words so beautifully :-)

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    1. Thanks Amrit. Bowled by your generous compliment.

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  35. Such a magical and romantic poem. Loved it. :)

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