..............and it is said chase the butterflies(dreams)as a child chases them, full of laughter, enthusiasm, sparkle in the eyes, untiringly and without getting bored. Lovely poem Saru.
Hi Saru, These are two lines of a poem I remember, I do not know by whom. "Try out those wings and head for your star, no matter how far it may seem, go for the finest and best that you are, and dream the most wonderful dream." Loved your words. Practical and magical at the same time.
Ya true with the right mix of planning and enthusiasm. :) I like this quote by Langston Hughes “Hold fast to dreams for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly.” -Langston Hughes
फ़ुर्सत में मिलना मुझसे यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई देखना है तुम्हें एक टक शिकवे करने है तुमसे कई हज़ार जब नाराज़ हुए थे तुम मुझसे और जब छेड़ा था मुझे बीच बाज़ार चवन्नी-अठन्नी सा ढोंग मत करना मान लेना मेरे हर कहे को सुबकियाँ से काम मत चलाना बेहने देना ग़र आँसू बेहे तो सख़्त होने का दिखावा छोड़ आना नुक्कड़ वाले बनिये की दुकान पे सिद्दत से एक बार बोल देना कि गलती होती है इंसान से तुम मुझे छोड़ गए उसका तुम्हें कभी अफ़सोस हुआ है क्या मैं नहीं तुमसे पूछूँगी कि मेरे बाद मेरी तरह किसी को छुआ है क्या ना मैं इस युग की मीरा हूँ ना हो तुम मेरे घनश्याम बस इश्क़ है तुमसे बेपन्नह मुझे बाक़ी सब कुछ है मुझमें आम तुम भी सोचते होगे ना यह तीली सा इश्क़, ज्वालामुखी कब हुआ यूँ समझ लो तुम्हारे जाने के बाद तुम्हारे ख़याल ने दिन में 100 बार मुझे छुआ अब गणित में तो तुम अव्वल हो हिसाब लगा ही लोगे पर सोच के आना जनाब पिछले 15 सालों का हिसाब कैसे दोगे तो आना बस फ़ुरसत में यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई
तुम किसी बड़े शहर की बड़ी इमारत और मैं नुक्कड़ वाली पान की दुकान तुम्हें महँगी चीज़े पसंद हैं और मेरे पास है चवन्नी-अठन्नी का सामान फिर भी तुम मुझे देखते हो कुछ तो बात होगी मुझमें और भी कई आशिक़ है मेरे ज़्यादा इतराना मत ख़ुद पे बस ये दिल साला बीड़ी सा सुलगता है जो तुझे एक बार देख लूँ समझ नहीं आता अपने छोटे बजट में क्या तोहफ़ा तुम्हें भेज दूँ इश्क़ बहुतो को ले डूबा हैं अब मैं कैसे किनारा करूँ तुझसे जो नैन लगाये हैं दिल कहता है ये कांड मैं दोबारा करूँ उँगलियों पे गिनती हूँ मैं घंटे फ़ोन पे लगाती हूँ अलार्म हाय, मैं रही मॉडर्न डे मीरा तुम किसन कन्हैया घनश्याम आओ कभी हमारी गली दिन, तारीख़, मौसम मत देखना सरप्राइज सा देना मुझे आने की खबर भी ना भेजना तुम जैसे अमीर से मुझ जैसे गरीब ने दिल लगाया है जितना तुम्हारा दिन का खर्चा है उतना मेरा पाँच महीने का किराया है पर इश्क़ पैसा नहीं देखता ना देखता है औक़ात मुझे तुम्हारी सादगी पसंद आई काश तुम्हें भी पसंद हो मेरी कोई बात
My poetry is not for foreplay. It's for after sex. When you'll light the Marlboro and move to your side of the bed, my poems will be the breath of fresh air in a room filled with smoke. But do not underestimate me. My poems won't be sweet, gentle or mellow. They will be brazen, brutal and bold. I will present them on a sharply-edged knife. The blood on the knife will be hot. Fresh from the wounds I don't allow to heal. You will take a drag from Marlboro - but served with my sinful words - you will feel as if you've snorted cocaine. You will not get high, though. You will see the world in a different light. Murky lanes leading to posh hotels, board rooms and high-rise apartment buildings. In one of those aesthetically decorated rooms, you will see a man f*****g someone's life just for a little pleasure. You will see him getting hard on someone's misery. A woman pleasuring herself while watching a wrecked home that she takes all credit for. To watch
Perfect analogy. Will keep in mind. :)
ReplyDelete..............and it is said chase the butterflies(dreams)as a child chases them, full of laughter, enthusiasm, sparkle in the eyes, untiringly and without getting bored. Lovely poem Saru.
ReplyDeleteAhha ! GREAT :)
ReplyDeleteNice analysis of situations and well written as always !
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Saru! Just like the butterflies (dreams). :-)
ReplyDeleteWell said... Chase your dreams like butterflies :)
ReplyDeleteyou are right..I love that line..dreams are like butterflies..
ReplyDeleteHmm, sensible theory
ReplyDeletenicely said :)
ReplyDeleteSo true!
ReplyDeleteah! beautiful! and i second what kalpana says!
ReplyDeletethat makes sense...the last line is a quote in itself.
ReplyDeleteTrue that!
ReplyDeleteYou've to chase them with passion.
ReplyDeleteNeither too hard, nor leaving it to chance,
Why do you say... "Neither too hard"???
Ritz..
Sometimes we try too hard and loose perspective. For fresh ideas we have to be calm and enjoy the journey.
Deletewow it is inspiring :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely and Inspiring.. :)
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, you bet!
ReplyDeletewell versed !
ReplyDeletewell said :)
ReplyDeleteDream can also fly :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the lines.
You aid it all in so few words, Saru!
ReplyDeleteButterflies are delicate & colorful and so are Dreams!
ReplyDeleteMy we catch them! :)
Wow! beautiful !!
ReplyDeleterightly said :-)
ReplyDeleteVery true Saru :)
ReplyDeleteVery well said.
ReplyDeleteWell said ! True that :)
ReplyDeleteLovely thought
ReplyDeleteVery well said. :)
ReplyDeleteQuite inspiring.
ReplyDeletewell expressed and so true!
ReplyDeleteWell said. And dreams like butterflies are so difficult to catch, one can spend time just looking at them!
ReplyDeleteShort and stately
ReplyDeletebeautiful..!!
ReplyDeleteperfect!!
ReplyDeleteSo true!
ReplyDeleteSimply awesome!
ReplyDeletebeautiful words ...keep up your writing !!
ReplyDeletemagical!! :-)
ReplyDeleteQuite idealistic explanation! Nice line Saur!
ReplyDeleteHi Saru, These are two lines of a poem I remember, I do not know by whom. "Try out those wings and head for your star, no matter how far it may seem, go for the finest and best that you are, and dream the most wonderful dream." Loved your words. Practical and magical at the same time.
ReplyDeleteNice lines Saru . Precise !!
ReplyDeletesuper
ReplyDeletemotivating and uplifting :) and true :)
ReplyDeleteExactly!
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely thought. Truth written in every sentence!
ReplyDeleteWell written Saru!!
ReplyDeletevery well written .. motivating .....simply speechless ....
ReplyDeleteGreat lines! :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant.
ReplyDeleteJust when I was unknowingly repeating the phrase 'follow the butterflies' in my mind for no reason. Loved it!
Very true...good one
ReplyDeletePerfect...
ReplyDeleteSo true...love the lines.
ReplyDeleteTrue and perfect lines poetess :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful analogy Saru... I remembered the "Holding the sand" analogy in Dil Chahta hai (Yes, I love that movie) :D
ReplyDeleteshort, simple and efficient one... very nice mam...
ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views.
ReplyDeleteYa true with the right mix of planning and enthusiasm. :)
ReplyDeleteI like this quote by Langston Hughes
“Hold fast to dreams for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly.”
-Langston Hughes