पश्मीना अल्फ़ाज़


Rahul Sharma, Santoor, Music
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This is how I felt after listening to it.
जहाँ भी मैं जाती हूँ
चुपचाप करते हैं आवाज़!
पाक़ बेफिक्रे से,
तेरे पश्मीना अल्फ़ाज़!!

पानी की सिलवटो में,
बहती हूँ कुछ इस तरह!
हर बूँद में हो जैसे,
एक नया आगाज़!
और साथ - साथ बहते हैं,
तेरे पश्मीना अल्फ़ाज़!!

गुज़र जाते हैं,
कई दिन, कई महीने!
चाहे  कोई हो मेरे आस पास,
भीड़ में भी रखते हैं मुझे महफूज,
तेरे पश्मीना अल्फ़ाज़!!

अकेली नहीं इस शोर में हूँ मैं उदास!
हर पल साथ देते हैं तेरे पश्मीना अल्फ़ाज़!!

Comments

  1. honestly it takes me a long time to read hindi ( m very bad in it ) ... but it was worth it :).. Wonderful!

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    1. Thank you Naba for making the extra effort and liking it :)

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  2. And I just got swayed. beautiful.

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  3. पाक़ बेफिक्रे से,
    तेरे पश्मीना अल्फ़ाज़ !!

    सुन्दर शब्द. दो तीन बरस पहले राहुल शर्मा क्लेमसन आये हुए थे तो पास से सुना था उनका संतूर वादन. बहुत अच्छा लगा था.

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    1. WOW, I wish I could attend one of his concerts.

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  4. I really had to google so many words.. shame on me. But now I know the meaning of every line and it's is like a pleasant breeze, this song. Reminded me of pashmena stole, so soft and so warm.

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  5. Wow Saru...awesome...loved it

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  6. बहुत खूब!
    last two lines are awesome :)

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  7. thats really soulful, lovely lyrics..they have some sort of misty feel to them!

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  8. wah wah wah wah! tere pashmeena alfaaz! :)

    Well! What does it mean by 'pasmeena'? ;)

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    1. LOL, Gayatri...Woh costly wali shawl jo sirf bade showrooms mein milte hai :D

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  9. Wow...Saru this is the first time...pashmina alfaaz...lovely. Beautiful composition and hey I once did a post on sounds and poetry. I asked a question at the end of the post as to how to describe that particular voice and how it makes me feel. Thank u for giving me that word.
    Btw have done one post recently...may I have the pleasure of ur company there???

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    1. Wonderful! I love this phrase, after a long time I was able to find one. Sure, would love to read it :)

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  10. I too am not good in Hindi...but, could understand the essence of it. Well done.

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  11. Wow.. Super fantastic word line... Mja aa gya padke.. Truely awesome.. Keep writing..

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  12. पश्मीना अलफ़ाज़...........
    saru just loved this............absolutely delicate...

    love-
    anu

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  13. हर वक्त के साथी है ये पश्मीना अलफ़ाज़ !

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  14. सुन्दर शब्दों की माला!

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  15. Pashmina alfaaz, silken. It is a pleasure to read such good quality Hindi -- Urdu, Saru!

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    1. Thanks Rachna for a beautiful compliment. :)

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  16. And I just time traveled. :)

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  17. Beautiful ! This is going to linger in my mind for a while now. :)

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  18. Bahut badhiya Saru. Bahut hi badhiya ! very poignant ..

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  19. Your poems have always scared me Saru. And this one is right up the charts.
    Put simply, it is a beautiful composition. KEep it up.

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    1. Tatsat, please stop getting scared with love. It's high time you start loving the concept of love. Glad you liked it :) Thanks for the encouragement.

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  20. Wow wow wow once more you amazed me thanks bringing in a sense of inspiration always

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    1. Glad! Brad, you write beautifully in both the languages, I wonder you need inspiration. :)

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  21. bahut hi khoobsurat...aapke pashmeena alfaaz padh ke mere paas tareef ke shabd nai hai :)

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  22. subhanallah, Rahul Sharma ke santoor wadan si hi mohak rachna

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  23. very well expressed. sometime some words render long lasting effect on our soul and mind. I dont know why i am constatantly being reminded of a justin bieber song here..."You leave me breathless with your words" :)

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    1. That is a wonderful song. Thanks for reading. :)

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  24. It's been a long time I read something so pure...
    Loved it!! <3<3

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  25. Wow That is nice..Really reading it in hindi makes it more awesome...

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  26. सरू सिंघल जी बहुत अच्छी कविता है ।

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  27. कितने सुंदरता से मन के भावों को व्यक्त किया है ....!!
    बहुत सुंदर रचना ....!!

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  28. Lovely song! :) beautiful....

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  29. Wow thats a very soothing music and your poem is equally well composed!

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  30. You leave me under a spell of your gentle words-pashmina alfaaz-what a beautiful term!

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  31. sorry Saru. my Hindi is not that good.

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  32. loved it...really beautiful thoughts saru...

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  33. Aap ke alfaaz bahut naazuq hain...kaagaz par mat utaariyega, sakht ho jaayenge!

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  34. Beautiful Alfaaz !!

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  35. Saru , simply beautiful !! ek ek line dil ko chu gaya !!

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  36. Time traveler is a great work by him ! nice lines.

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  37. music breaks you free from everything..
    it's a bliss :)

    Loved the music... a fine piece !!

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  38. I was reading word by word Saru... Awesome indeed! Nice lines..

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  39. I don't know hindi Saru :( But lovely music !

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  40. The music was good. And blame my Hindi if I did not get what exactly you wanted to convey, but I am happy with what I could understand from what I read :-)

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    1. Glad you made the extra effort Ashwini :) Thanks for reading!

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  41. Beautifully woven, Saru. It is simply.. beautiful. :)

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  42. Pashmina alfaaz .. such a beautiful phrase :)

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  43. Very much liked these lines..
    पानी की सिलवटो में,
    बहती हूँ कुछ इस तरह !
    हर बूँद में हो जैसे,
    एक नया आगाज़ !

    Truly awesome. :)

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  44. Excellent Alfaaz...big fan of yours, Saru!

    Do take sometime out to go through my verses on my blog entries...Please provide your inputs to make this amateur piece of art better.

    Ankit's Vivacious Memoirs

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    1. That's a huge compliment. Thanks Ankit and would love to read your blog.

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  45. बहुत खूब , शब्दों की जीवंत भावनाएं... सुन्दर चित्रांकन
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