I'm in Love

Ever lived a day with a shadow of hope,
After reading few lines in your horoscope.
Kept the smile throughout the day,
While essaying a normal bouquet.
Fitting perfectly in the body of songs,
In the drop of rain your 'self' belongs.
Feet tap with mist of fragrance in the air,
All this is happening at the beginning of my affair.


  1. Beautiful post, liked the new look of the blog :)

  2. Beautiful ! your words are so apt with this picture.

  3. beautiful pic to go with start of the affair

  4. the pic and the words ...just superb...

    do u have a new page look or is it just the morning mist in my eyes O_O

  5. hahaha...lovely! an excuse enough to be light and happy,anything for that!

  6. Very picturesque....
    A beautiful post for a tranquil day.

  7. Oh, how wonderful! And the picture is perfect to the text. You are goood:-))

  8. hehe....this was cute....loved it....spl the rhyme effct was amazin...:)

  9. The pic tells it all.Rhythmicly worded poem.Luv it.

  10. Saru! I can assure you that this will be an affair to remember!! Lovely lines and pic to go with it

  11. All this is happening, in the beginning of my affair... liked it very much:)

  12. Lovely words as always! And the picture is so apt and brings out the meaning superbly, just like your words :)

  13. its cute :) i like it... :)

    Take care and keep writing.....

  14. I was reading..
    I was smiling..
    i was blushing..
    i don't know why ;)

    Once again the beauty of your words touched my heart !

    I like your new template,nothing dynamic but so organised with positive vibes :)

  15. A love feeling...indescribable ! As always exceptional post. BTW , i copied this pic in my blog and Thank you !

  16. :) it was a mischievous one :)

    i am relying heavily on horoscopes these days...saru i like the new look of the blog :)

    The Blunt Blog

  17. I am in Love, Saru...What a wonderful poem... 'Ever lived a day with a shadow of hope,
    After reading few lines in your horoscope'
    how totally simple, natural and somthing that everyone can relate to..

    I am really happy today..u made my day!!

  18. Nice :) Love the new template...simple and perfect:)

  19. lice lines.. :) :)
    loved it as usual.. :)

  20. wonderful lines and beautiful template.. :)

    Weakest LINK

  21. Love the new look of your blog...look so classy and elegant! Just like this post...and the picture is damn suiting!

  22. Nice beginning of affair, together with lucid and pleasant atmosphere... :)

  23. "In the drop of rain your 'self' belongs." Loved this in particular.

    Something very nice about the short poems - they the tug the heart. :)

    Wishing you a good week ahead!

  24. Now..who wouldn't want to be in love..with someone who can express it so beautifully.. :) :D

  25. So beautiful and heartfelt again. It made wanna fall in love all over again :)

  26. So cute!!! :) if you are really in love, congrats darling! Falling in love is best phase of love.

  27. Change is awesome . Loved the words .

  28. Love is In Air.... :)
    Awesome Creation


  29. Its a kool post Saru... 'beginning of affair!!', the finish is superb and the picture suits too good. I think you have a similar pic of urs :)

  30. Ah - the excitement and beauty of new love! Fabulous writing.

  31. wow.. you just started blogging. Seems like you have been doing it for ages :-)
    Touching hearts of people with your words.. thats what you surely must be doing.

  32. Awww, you remind me "Love is beautiful". I must tell you that you're so awesome when it comes to spreading love in the air.
    Awesome work Saru :)

  33. now this made me smile. Good work Saru. You have always proved me that you are an awesome poet.. and I agree


  34. lovley
    So heart-touching piece.....wonderful!

  35. So very lovely, Saru! Your poetry always captures the emotions of the picture that I sometimes wonder what came first, the pic or the poem? :)

    Loving the newly decorated blog! :)

  36. Well versed even in simplicity :) brought the picture to life through ur words itself :D Loved it!

  37. lovely...:) perfect song for a rainy day...:)

  38. Beautiful post... And nice pic too !!

  39. Love makes things just so beautiful, like this post :)

  40. Lovely post, Saru! Simple yet very cute :) I have been smiling all through.

  41. there is song and dance :)
    i like...i like!

    My Third Eye

  42. "Feet tap with mist of fragrance in the air,All this is happening, in the beginning of my affair."

    great romantic line to pen down.

  43. the pen filled with lot of love and scribbling something with keep our beloved one in our mind is a poem.. u proved that...

  44. That's the advantage of falling in love; I think the girl is enjoying her affair with this 'Loverman'. My advanced regards for their future marriage.
    nicely written lines; ur words make the reader feel the esctacy of love.

  45. Reading this post made me happy. Also made me want to get wet in the rain and hols hands with someone special.. But let's not get carried away Zeba

  46. @Aakash Kokz- Thank you Aakash.

    @Kitty- Thanks Kitty...

    @sm- I agree...:)

    @SuKupedia :) :)- Thanks Sunita. Yes, changed the template. Hope you like it!

    @A grain of sand- True Stuti, anything for that:)

    @Ankur- Thank you Ankur.

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    @vaisakhi- Thank you Vaisakhi, loved your recent poem as well...

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    @The life-a-holic- Deepthi, this picture is so beautiful. Thanks for the comment...

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    @Reicha Ahluwalia- I know why, you're so in love...And, thanks for the comment!

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    @Sameera- Thanks Sam...You too have a rocking week ahead...

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    @Anand- Thank you so much Anand and I do have a similar picture...:)

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    @Mayank- I'm speechless...:)

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    @Lady*♥*Fiona- Words come first and then a tiring journey of searching a picture begins...:) Thanks for liking it and liking the new look!

    @Mr.Jovita- :)

    @swati- Thanks Sweetheart:)

    @Leo- Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment...

    @India's no.1 blog- You can sing it then as it rains so much in your city:)

    @Binu Thomas- Thank you dear...

    @Manali- Thanks a lot Manali:)

    @Sridhar- Thank you Sridhar...

    @Harsha- When someone smiles reading such words, we can imply something is going on...:) :) :)

    @Rohit Sareen- :) :) :)

    @Neeraj Kumar- Thank Neeraj!

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  47. I feel the butterflies in my stomach...reminds me of the early days of my love...:)

  48. Ha ha! It means that your poetry was so lovely and beautiful. :):) For now there is no room for any other implications. :):)

  49. Such a nice feeling, lovely! Wonderfully written Saru... :)

  50. Here's a blog award for you :)


  51. The "body of songs" is a joyous affair to celebrate :) Very nice.

  52. yet another award for you girl! :D


  53. cute post filled with lots of love in the pen.loved it

  54. visited your blog after one month...lost my account on blogger..you seem to have made changes to your blog..looking good.

  55. Aw..sweet....well I really like the new layout of your blog. <3

  56. The beginning of an affair is so different..people walk on cloud nine. You have captured the feelings well. Reminded me of the Kuch Tu Hua hai song from Shahrukh movie "Kal ho na ho"

    Nice layout of the blog!!

  57. Hello.
    It's easy at the beginning of an affair. The hard part is maintaining the love.

    Very nicely penned & your image fits a person in love perfectly.

    Thanks for sharing & for commenting on my latest post:
    The Evening Zephyr

  58. Nice Lines...


  59. *SMILES* .. refreshing :) Nice one saru jee.. as always. And yeah, liked your new blog design.. (Sorry, I saw it today, couldn't read blogs since few days... )

  60. The blog looks great. Nice poem- short ans sweet.

  61. Sweet little poem.Picture is too good Saru.

  62. nice one.. love the last two lines.. :)

  63. nice one Saru. Even i always check my horoscope for the day :D

  64. wow... so cool...
    good words... flowing with love... :)

  65. First time here.. I love your words.. Beautiful poem and if I have to mention then 5 and 6th line are too good.. Love it..

    Someone is Special

  66. "We are in Love"..

    A charming package of feelings.. (Tour):)
    'Trust' rendered without limitations & communications..
    Yea! 'We are in love' of your Words as reflected through the calender of 84 pages comments..
    Best of luck Saru.


  67. short sweet lines to cherish

  68. this is such a lovely lovely poem!! i loved the part you said about finding yourself in the raindrop!! infinitely cool!! :)

  69. Hey....saru... how are you doing?? This was a lovely piece...

    I've an award for you...(probably not the first one for you!!!) See the link: http://sunnysneha93.blogspot.com/p/awards.html

  70. Loved the last 3 lines. Beautiful poem Saru :)

  71. Beautiful writing saru, like the way you write..

  72. good..interesting..
    you should also write what happens when you are trying to be in an affair..

    loved the last line

  73. Sweet and beautiful.
    Thanks for the nice post.

  74. Small and sweet Poem... Awesome Work... :)


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    @bemoneyaware- I love that song, it's a perfect one for such feelings:) Thank you!

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  76. Wow!!! the way you crafted the very first part of every love-story, is jus awesome !!! So wht's nex...Does the aroma still continue or.....
    Beautifully done!

  77. @Veby- It does continue...:) Thanks for a lovely comment:)

  78. I loved it...Nicely done. No word is a filler in this poem. Fantastic write. Thanks for sharing

    1. Thank you Shamsud, means a lot coming from you!

  79. You make me smile...yeah get it:) "In the drop of rain your 'self' belongs."

    1. Thank you Bhavana and that's so sweet of you...:)

  80. Replies
    1. There is...I think there must be some compatibility problem. Thanks for reading and appreciating the poem.

  81. wonderful post...I liked it so much...

  82. Loved the post :)


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