Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you.
Like that cigarette slowly burning between your fingers, I burn too. Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you. The only difference - you can buy your addiction - but I can't win over you in a million years. The only similarity - you crush both cigarette butts and my hopes multiple times a day under your feet. You are one cruel b*****d. Oh man, why I still love you so very much? I think about that a lot sober. There has to be a reason for this unwavering, almost God-like devotion towards you. For the life of me, I can't find an answer to that question. I don't know why I want to walk barefoot on a black beach with you. Watch the sunset - and - watch your features turn into a beautiful silhouette. As the evening would sink into darkness and we will lay on the beach to watch the stars and crescent moon - I want to smell the salty ocean on your skin. Then when you will try to light that f*****g Goldflake and put it between your lips, I will th
Whow.. Its Really awesome... Love it... Keep It up Saru... :)
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No words Saru.. It is just magical.. Takes you in a different world all together..
ReplyDelete@Jay & @Swati- As I always say my job is done if you like my Words. Thanks :)
ReplyDeletebeautifully soulful!
ReplyDeletePowerful couple of lines, very well written... Have a wonderful week ahead:)
ReplyDeletewow...awesome....that will linger in my memory for a long time...
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ReplyDeleteReally well written Saru..
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ReplyDelete@Everyone- Thanks for such great words.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Saru,
ReplyDeleteI dint know u are a poet.
@Anonymous- I am not a poet, I just enjoy writing.
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ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteSo few but so strong. Loved them.
ReplyDeletewords may be few but its strong and deep... and that makes poetry a success..
ReplyDeleteWooow so intense..!
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Superb!
ReplyDelete@Umm Mymoonah- I am not great, just pen down few things with all my heart...Thanks.
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@Sameera- Thanks a lot dear...
@Zeba- Thanks and welcome here...:)
@Shesha Chaturvedi- True dear, power of poetry...:)
@Ankitha- Thanks Ankitha:)
@jayendrasharan- Yeah, it's like even when he is dreaming, he is dreaming about you...Thanks!
@Mithlash- Thank you!
Wow! That is just so awesome!!! Loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Akanksha:)
DeleteThose are very beautiful words, Saru.
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Thanks. That's why I said it is really close to my heart.
DeleteIt is magical Saru!!! Awesome.. Just fell in love with it...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Swati:)
DeleteThis one is fantastic! absolute delight
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam :)
DeleteWowyy Wow Saru Di.. Just 2 lines but so much intense:) U are right its gonna stay with me in my memories for long time:)
ReplyDeleteAwww...thanks Sonia. You know I love these lines, narcissist me :)
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