Musings - I

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My soul wanders all night, for it has no solace,
Wish could sleep in your eyes, for I have no better place!

*A couplet is so intense; it conveys everything in few words. Also, it lingers in your memory for a long time.


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  1. Whow.. Its Really awesome... Love it... Keep It up Saru... :)

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  2. No words Saru.. It is just magical.. Takes you in a different world all together..

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  3. @Jay & @Swati- As I always say my job is done if you like my Words. Thanks :)

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  5. Powerful couple of lines, very well written... Have a wonderful week ahead:)

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  6. wow...awesome....that will linger in my memory for a long time...

    Cheers!
    SUB

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  7. @Magiceye, @Arti & @SUB- Thanks for admiring!

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  9. Really well written Saru..
    :)

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  11. WOW.. Beautiful words :)

    I am new here and absolutely love ur space.. and following u for more wonderful creation of urs..

    Do visit me as time permits
    http://comeletseat.blogspot.com

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  13. @Everyone- Thanks for such great words.

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  14. Very nice Saru,

    I dint know u are a poet.

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  15. @Anonymous- I am not a poet, I just enjoy writing.

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  16. Wow! You write all these, you are really great!

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  19. So few but so strong. Loved them.

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  20. words may be few but its strong and deep... and that makes poetry a success..

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  22. beautiful...to be in love..to stay in one's heart..there no better place than to rest in eyes..so true


    http://jayendrasharan.wordpress.com

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  24. @Umm Mymoonah- I am not great, just pen down few things with all my heart...Thanks.

    @Dhiraj Thakur- :)

    @Sameera- Thanks a lot dear...

    @Zeba- Thanks and welcome here...:)

    @Shesha Chaturvedi- True dear, power of poetry...:)

    @Ankitha- Thanks Ankitha:)

    @jayendrasharan- Yeah, it's like even when he is dreaming, he is dreaming about you...Thanks!

    @Mithlash- Thank you!

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  25. Wow! That is just so awesome!!! Loved it. :)

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  26. Those are very beautiful words, Saru.
    A text message you sent to your hubby after he proposed to you, makes it all the more beautiful and romantic. Loved it. :)

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    1. Thanks. That's why I said it is really close to my heart.

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  27. It is magical Saru!!! Awesome.. Just fell in love with it...

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  28. This one is fantastic! absolute delight

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  29. Wowyy Wow Saru Di.. Just 2 lines but so much intense:) U are right its gonna stay with me in my memories for long time:)

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    1. Awww...thanks Sonia. You know I love these lines, narcissist me :)

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