Musings - I

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My soul wanders all night, for it has no solace,
Wish could sleep in your eyes, for I have no better place!

*A couplet is so intense; it conveys everything in few words. Also, it lingers in your memory for a long time.


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  1. J'DJuly 6, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Whow.. Its Really awesome... Love it... Keep It up Saru... :)

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  2. swatiJuly 6, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    No words Saru.. It is just magical.. Takes you in a different world all together..

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  3. Saru SinghalJuly 6, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    @Jay & @Swati- As I always say my job is done if you like my Words. Thanks :)

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  4. magiceyeJuly 6, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    beautifully soulful!

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  5. ArtiJuly 6, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    Powerful couple of lines, very well written... Have a wonderful week ahead:)

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  6. Subhrashis AdhikariJuly 7, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    wow...awesome....that will linger in my memory for a long time...

    Cheers!
    SUB

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  7. Saru SinghalJuly 7, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    @Magiceye, @Arti & @SUB- Thanks for admiring!

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  8. UnknownJuly 7, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    Wow! evocative indeed

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  9. ojaJuly 8, 2011 at 12:56 AM

    Really well written Saru..
    :)

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  10. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    super :)

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  11. Mehjabeen ArifJuly 8, 2011 at 4:06 AM

    WOW.. Beautiful words :)

    I am new here and absolutely love ur space.. and following u for more wonderful creation of urs..

    Do visit me as time permits
    http://comeletseat.blogspot.com

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  12. Quirky WritesJuly 8, 2011 at 6:52 AM

    beautiful...

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  13. Saru SinghalJuly 8, 2011 at 1:49 PM

    @Everyone- Thanks for such great words.

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  14. AnonymousJuly 8, 2011 at 3:24 PM

    Very nice Saru,

    I dint know u are a poet.

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  15. Saru SinghalJuly 8, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    @Anonymous- I am not a poet, I just enjoy writing.

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  16. Umm MymoonahJuly 9, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    Wow! You write all these, you are really great!

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  17. Dhiraj ThakurJuly 11, 2011 at 1:20 AM

    Wow it's really gud...:)

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  18. SameeraSeptember 18, 2011 at 11:04 PM

    Lovely!

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  19. ZebaSeptember 19, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    So few but so strong. Loved them.

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  20. Shesha ChaturvediSeptember 20, 2011 at 5:36 AM

    words may be few but its strong and deep... and that makes poetry a success..

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  21. AnkithaSeptember 22, 2011 at 10:19 AM

    Wooow so intense..!

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  22. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    beautiful...to be in love..to stay in one's heart..there no better place than to rest in eyes..so true


    http://jayendrasharan.wordpress.com

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  23. MithlashOctober 1, 2011 at 12:44 AM

    Superb!

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  24. Saru SinghalOctober 1, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    @Umm Mymoonah- I am not great, just pen down few things with all my heart...Thanks.

    @Dhiraj Thakur- :)

    @Sameera- Thanks a lot dear...

    @Zeba- Thanks and welcome here...:)

    @Shesha Chaturvedi- True dear, power of poetry...:)

    @Ankitha- Thanks Ankitha:)

    @jayendrasharan- Yeah, it's like even when he is dreaming, he is dreaming about you...Thanks!

    @Mithlash- Thank you!

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  25. AkankshaAugust 3, 2012 at 11:39 AM

    Wow! That is just so awesome!!! Loved it. :)

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  26. Akshay Kumar GAugust 3, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    Those are very beautiful words, Saru.
    A text message you sent to your hubby after he proposed to you, makes it all the more beautiful and romantic. Loved it. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalAugust 5, 2012 at 10:55 AM

      Thanks. That's why I said it is really close to my heart.

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  27. swatiAugust 3, 2012 at 1:41 PM

    It is magical Saru!!! Awesome.. Just fell in love with it...

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  28. Shamsud AhmedAugust 3, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    This one is fantastic! absolute delight

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  29. SoniaAugust 9, 2012 at 6:47 AM

    Wowyy Wow Saru Di.. Just 2 lines but so much intense:) U are right its gonna stay with me in my memories for long time:)

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    1. Saru SinghalAugust 12, 2012 at 4:47 PM

      Awww...thanks Sonia. You know I love these lines, narcissist me :)

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