कोशिश...

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मेरी सपनो को सजाने की हर कोशिश अधूरी रह गयी!

मुझमे और मेरी मंजिल में सिर्फ दो आंसूओ की दूरी रह गयी!!


Comments

  1. AnonymousJuly 24, 2011 at 10:59 PM

    nice lines. :)

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  2. SkywalkerJuly 24, 2011 at 11:38 PM

    wow Saru, this is first time I am visiting your blog and I will say you dont face any comment deficiency :)

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  3. jaynthbusiJuly 25, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    awesome...! sab k sab adhoore :(

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  4. magiceyeJuly 25, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    wah bahut khoob!!

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  5. J'DJuly 25, 2011 at 12:48 AM

    Saru, Its really heart touching... Loved it...

    Jay Dave

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  6. ArtiJuly 25, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    Superb!!! Loved it :)

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  7. BhavnaJuly 25, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    this is heart touchingly sad....

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  8. Sunil PadiyarJuly 25, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    Just two lines with a small snap - heart touchingly sad combo!

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  9. Nirvaan BaidJuly 25, 2011 at 3:33 AM

    painful indeed..if this happens..:(

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  10. AnonymousJuly 25, 2011 at 3:46 AM

    Won't try to put my expressions in words for this one.... Speechless.

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  11. induravisinghjJuly 25, 2011 at 4:09 AM

    Gr8 lines...i m speechless....

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  12. MukeshJuly 25, 2011 at 5:23 AM

    बहुत सुन्दर..
    ये आँसू खुशी के ही होंगे..........
    गम में आँसू तो स्वतः ढलते हैं..किसी प्रतीक्षा की आवश्यकता नहीं होती।

    भावपूर्ण रचना

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  13. Girl with a silver penJuly 25, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    This is heart breaking

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  14. Blasphemous AestheteJuly 25, 2011 at 6:13 AM

    उन दो आँसुओं को बह जाने दो, अपनी मंजिल को पा जाओ|

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  15. RachitJuly 25, 2011 at 8:27 AM

    कितनी सरलता से उन्होंने कह दिया हाल इ दिल.

    कमजोर कड़ी

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  16. SomsiJuly 25, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    Thank you for this useful information.

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  17. Thousif RazaJuly 25, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    so less lines yet so much emotion. i can feel what you wanna say, i cant put it in words but i feel it so deeply... great lines... :)

    take care and keep writing...........

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  18. Subhrashis AdhikariJuly 25, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    nice one...but rub off the tears n smile..:)

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  19. NehaJuly 25, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    True and emotional...

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  20. Spiritual SherpaJuly 25, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    Hats off...very well said...

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  21. A FineappleJuly 25, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    WOW..!!!!!!!!!
    amazing.. :) :)

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  22. Saru SinghalJuly 25, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    @some unspoken words- Thanks:)

    @Skywalker- Thanks Dear but please check my earlier posts.:(
    You will see how deficient I was...

    @jaynthbusi- Thanks Jaynth:)

    @magiceye- Thanks Deepak Sir.

    @Jay- :)

    @Arti- Thanks Dear:)

    @Bhavna- It is sad, I remember when I wrote it. Though, the reason was academic. I was 2 marks short of being in the rank holders list of CS.

    @Sunil Padiyar- I hope you liked it Sunil.

    @Nirvaan- True...

    @jojofeelings- Thanks :)

    @induravisinghj- Thanks Indu :)

    @Mukesh Kumar Mishra- Thanks and you said something very meaningful and deep. Sadly, these tears are for pain...

    @Girl with a silver pen- It is Dear...

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- This is very motivating. Your thoughts = Wisdom!

    @Rachit- Nicely said Rachit and I was not aware that you're a poet. The poem on college was too good.

    @Somsi- :)

    @Thousif Raza- :) Thanks Thousif...

    @SUB- Thanks, I am in fact laughing when you said to imagine ourselves the size of football stadium. Great post and waiting for the rest of it.

    @Neha- Thanks Neha...

    @India's no.1 blog- Thank you:)

    @Ms. Holla- :) Thanks.

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  23. Quirky WritesJuly 25, 2011 at 1:39 PM

    I'm late I guess. LOL. very beautiful lines I must say.

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  24. AvibrationJuly 25, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    It's much more subtle than 'Words'.

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  25. AngelJuly 26, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    Sars i didn't get the words below the pic but it's alright pics tells me whats in it ,certaintly i know so many unsung things behind ...it cuts me ! Nice really !

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  26. Hariharan ValadyJuly 26, 2011 at 2:24 AM

    I feel really bad that I can not read Hindi. I am missing something important.

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  27. ojaJuly 26, 2011 at 3:19 AM

    Really heart touching..
    and sooo emotional...
    :)

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  28. SuKupedia ™ :) :)July 26, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    Saru, your words are beautiful, what is more beautiful is the way you put it.. very touching.. havent read all of them, but the few I read are gr8.. especially the Dad one.. thank you for visiting my page and following :) :)

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  29. Beyond HorizonJuly 26, 2011 at 6:10 AM

    Tears do not flow easily, so if the distance can be reduced, let them flow to reach your destination...

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  30. PrabhavathiJuly 26, 2011 at 6:29 AM

    lovely

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  31. peachkinsJuly 26, 2011 at 8:13 AM

    love the photo. thank for dropping by

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  32. Saru SinghalJuly 26, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    @Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha:)

    @Avibration- Tears speak their own language and they speak subtly.

    @Angel- Sorry for the language problem, it means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short.

    @Hariharan Valady- Sorry Sir:) It means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short and I compared it to two tears. Two tears symbolizing that if I have persisted a little, my dreams would have been a reality.

    @oja- Thanks Dear and welcome back...:)

    @Sunita - The Me :) :)- Thanks Dear and Congratulations :)

    @Beyond Horizon- Beautifully said...:)

    @Prabhavathi- Thanks.

    @peachkins- Thanks Dear!

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  33. LHInsightsJuly 27, 2011 at 2:30 AM

    i have a weakness towards hindi and i use to write a lot but no more now. However I have your blog :D like it.

    Keep Rocking,
    Prasant

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  34. UnknownJuly 27, 2011 at 3:32 AM

    Saru - in Gujrati will mean 'nice', so is your post.

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  35. Saru SinghalJuly 27, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    @LHInsights- Thanks and I am using your tips:)

    @अतुल प्रकाश त्रिवेदी- Thank you Sir.

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  36. UnknownJuly 27, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    So awesome and meaningful, please keep writing

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  37. NisheethJuly 28, 2011 at 3:14 AM

    Don worrry.. Remember this quote.

    Sitam ka had se badh jana Tabahi ki nishani hai,
    Badalate hain sabhi ke din kahani ye purani hai.

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  38. Saru SinghalJuly 28, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    @Animesh Ganguly- Thanks Animesh:)

    @Nisheeth- Wow, beautiful words, Love it...

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  39. संजय भास्‍कर July 28, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    beautiful lines

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  40. Saru SinghalJuly 29, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    @संजय भास्कर- Thanks Again :)

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  41. SangeetaJuly 29, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    Really Heart Touching...

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  42. Saru SinghalJuly 29, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    @Sangeeta- Thanks Dear:)

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  43. DR. ANWER JAMALJuly 30, 2011 at 10:17 AM

    Nice post .

    you are invited Bloggers' meet weekly , manday.
    http://www.hbfint.blogspot.com/

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  44. Saru SinghalJuly 30, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    @DR. ANWER JAMAL- Thanks a lot and thanks for the invite...

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  45. LHInsightsJuly 31, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    @SS
    glad that you are using the tips :D good luck and really like the way you are managing your blog . awesome :D

    Regards,
    Prasant

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  46. ArpitJuly 31, 2011 at 12:58 PM

    Lovely. :)

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  47. shashi purwarAugust 1, 2011 at 2:00 AM

    very nice these two lines tell every thing ...... !
    this is the best feeling of heart ......... The some word that tell us every thing ..
    lovely ........<3

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  48. Saru SinghalAugust 1, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    @LHInsights- Thanks Prasant and See how wonderfully your post is working...

    @Arpit Rastogi- Thanks Arpit

    @sapne-shashi.blogspot.com- Words tell so much Shashi...Thanks a lot!

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  49. varshaAugust 3, 2011 at 6:17 AM

    raah ka roda na samajh in ashk ke katron ko
    naadan,har manzil ki neenv inse he to hai :)

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  50. Saru SinghalAugust 3, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    @varsha- Beautiful:)

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  51. Rajendra Swarnkar : राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकारAugust 5, 2011 at 2:45 PM

    दो आंसूओ की दूरी

    बहुत सुंदर …


    सारु जी हिंदी में इतना अच्छा लिखती हैं आप ?!
    आपसे निवेदन है , अधिक नहीं तो कभी कभी हिंदी रचनाएं भी पोस्ट किया कीजिए …

    मंगलकामनाओं सहित
    राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार

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  52. AkhtarAugust 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    Ati sundar Ati sunar!!!..
    Kavita kafi achhi hai...
    whoever will read will realize his/her broken dream!!!...

    Do pankti, sapne ko sach karne ke liye bhi ho jaye!!..
    Irshaad.. Irshaad!!...

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  53. Saru SinghalAugust 8, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    @Rajendra Swarnkar : राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार- Definitely Sir and thanks for admiring it:)

    @Akhtar- Sure, in my next hindi post:) Thank you...

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  54. KamAugust 15, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    Mind blowing. You did great job.
    And the pictures says everything too.

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  55. HarshaOctober 25, 2011 at 4:54 AM

    Saru, AWESOME is the word. :) I am browsing through your poetry to have some lovely time online. :)

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  56. UnknownOctober 28, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Even though there are two lines in this quote, the words have great meaning which is very touchy.

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  57. Saru SinghalOctober 28, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    @Kam- Thanks for liking it!

    @Harsha- Thanks a lot Harsha, you made my day:) XOXOXO

    @DASHAMI'S COLLECTION- Thanks dear and welcome here!

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  58. Ashish KumarJuly 17, 2014 at 12:59 AM

    atisundar panktiyan...
    agar koi puche ke do panktiyan jo apke dil ko choo le to mere jawab hoga ke ap "koshish" kavita ko padhen...
    saral aur sehaj shabdo ka uttam upyog...

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  59. Amrit SinhaAugust 16, 2014 at 11:59 AM

    How did I miss this one? Really beautiful :-)

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  60. PushkarAugust 22, 2014 at 1:07 AM

    कोशिश करे कोई ये भी कुछ कम नहीं,सपनो की दुनिया तो यु भी अधूरी है!!
    मंजिले यु भी यहाँ किसको है मिलती,अधूरी ख्वाहिशो का ही नाम जिंदगी है!

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