Sars i didn't get the words below the pic but it's alright pics tells me whats in it ,certaintly i know so many unsung things behind ...it cuts me ! Nice really !
Saru, your words are beautiful, what is more beautiful is the way you put it.. very touching.. havent read all of them, but the few I read are gr8.. especially the Dad one.. thank you for visiting my page and following :) :)
@Avibration- Tears speak their own language and they speak subtly.
@Angel- Sorry for the language problem, it means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short.
@Hariharan Valady- Sorry Sir:) It means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short and I compared it to two tears. Two tears symbolizing that if I have persisted a little, my dreams would have been a reality.
@oja- Thanks Dear and welcome back...:)
@Sunita - The Me :) :)- Thanks Dear and Congratulations :)
very nice these two lines tell every thing ...... ! this is the best feeling of heart ......... The some word that tell us every thing .. lovely ........<3
atisundar panktiyan... agar koi puche ke do panktiyan jo apke dil ko choo le to mere jawab hoga ke ap "koshish" kavita ko padhen... saral aur sehaj shabdo ka uttam upyog...
Sometimes I want to scream at the top of my lungs in a crowded place out of sheer loneliness. And sink on the concrete floor with my head tucked between my knees. I want someone to look into my empty eyes and read my story. Then comfort me with a hug. But I stand quietly in the corner of this posh restaurant smiling politely at the couples walking into it with their fingers interlocked. They wait for their table. I wait for mine. In the meantime, I stand there alone, a thousand thoughts run a marathon inside my tiny head. What have I done to deserve it -- is one such thought. Sometimes I talk to others. Those who appear to have it all. After 15 minutes of easing into the conversation, I find they are no less miserable. If I'm a Siberian desert - cold and barren, they are Sahara - few people come to visit them - a very few walk with them under the scorching circumstances. Deep down, we are all lonely. Terribly lonely. We all seek one person with whom we can share that
Like that cigarette slowly burning between your fingers, I burn too. Because you are addicted to Gold Flake and I am addicted to you. The only difference - you can buy your addiction - but I can't win over you in a million years. The only similarity - you crush both cigarette butts and my hopes multiple times a day under your feet. You are one cruel b*****d. Oh man, why I still love you so very much? I think about that a lot sober. There has to be a reason for this unwavering, almost God-like devotion towards you. For the life of me, I can't find an answer to that question. I don't know why I want to walk barefoot on a black beach with you. Watch the sunset - and - watch your features turn into a beautiful silhouette. As the evening would sink into darkness and we will lay on the beach to watch the stars and crescent moon - I want to smell the salty ocean on your skin. Then when you will try to light that f*****g Goldflake and put it between your lips, I will th
It was a ruthless day when I discovered my real identity. As a teenager, I struggled through hot girls, rich girls, and famous-for-nothing girls. I often felt like a lost puppy in the crowd of bitches. Amidst the ting-tong of Doordarshan commercial, finally, one day I found answers to all my questions. My ray of enlightenment was none other than - Nirma Soap Ad. This karmic journey started the day my cousin infused the thought that a soap defines you. He bathed with Dettol as he was a cleanliness freak. And I should choose a soap that fits my character. When I gleefully jumped at being Liril Girl, he looked with disdain. With one hand he pointed at Preity Zinta’s poster and with other towards the mirror. I nodded. I had no dimples or shorts to be that cool. Even the bottom of my skirt was triple folded to adjust my growing height and our middle-class income. On that day of summer vacation, my arduous journey began. If there is a soap that my fits my short-rounded-desperate
nice lines. :)
ReplyDeletewow Saru, this is first time I am visiting your blog and I will say you dont face any comment deficiency :)
ReplyDeleteawesome...! sab k sab adhoore :(
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Superb!!! Loved it :)
ReplyDeletethis is heart touchingly sad....
ReplyDeleteJust two lines with a small snap - heart touchingly sad combo!
ReplyDeletepainful indeed..if this happens..:(
ReplyDeleteWon't try to put my expressions in words for this one.... Speechless.
ReplyDeleteGr8 lines...i m speechless....
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुन्दर..
ReplyDeleteये आँसू खुशी के ही होंगे..........
गम में आँसू तो स्वतः ढलते हैं..किसी प्रतीक्षा की आवश्यकता नहीं होती।
भावपूर्ण रचना
This is heart breaking
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Thank you for this useful information.
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nice one...but rub off the tears n smile..:)
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@some unspoken words- Thanks:)
ReplyDelete@Skywalker- Thanks Dear but please check my earlier posts.:(
You will see how deficient I was...
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@magiceye- Thanks Deepak Sir.
@Jay- :)
@Arti- Thanks Dear:)
@Bhavna- It is sad, I remember when I wrote it. Though, the reason was academic. I was 2 marks short of being in the rank holders list of CS.
@Sunil Padiyar- I hope you liked it Sunil.
@Nirvaan- True...
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@Rachit- Nicely said Rachit and I was not aware that you're a poet. The poem on college was too good.
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@SUB- Thanks, I am in fact laughing when you said to imagine ourselves the size of football stadium. Great post and waiting for the rest of it.
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I'm late I guess. LOL. very beautiful lines I must say.
ReplyDeleteIt's much more subtle than 'Words'.
ReplyDeleteSars i didn't get the words below the pic but it's alright pics tells me whats in it ,certaintly i know so many unsung things behind ...it cuts me ! Nice really !
ReplyDeleteI feel really bad that I can not read Hindi. I am missing something important.
ReplyDeleteReally heart touching..
ReplyDeleteand sooo emotional...
:)
Saru, your words are beautiful, what is more beautiful is the way you put it.. very touching.. havent read all of them, but the few I read are gr8.. especially the Dad one.. thank you for visiting my page and following :) :)
ReplyDeleteTears do not flow easily, so if the distance can be reduced, let them flow to reach your destination...
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ReplyDeletelove the photo. thank for dropping by
ReplyDelete@Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha:)
ReplyDelete@Avibration- Tears speak their own language and they speak subtly.
@Angel- Sorry for the language problem, it means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short.
@Hariharan Valady- Sorry Sir:) It means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short and I compared it to two tears. Two tears symbolizing that if I have persisted a little, my dreams would have been a reality.
@oja- Thanks Dear and welcome back...:)
@Sunita - The Me :) :)- Thanks Dear and Congratulations :)
@Beyond Horizon- Beautifully said...:)
@Prabhavathi- Thanks.
@peachkins- Thanks Dear!
i have a weakness towards hindi and i use to write a lot but no more now. However I have your blog :D like it.
ReplyDeleteKeep Rocking,
Prasant
Saru - in Gujrati will mean 'nice', so is your post.
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So awesome and meaningful, please keep writing
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Badalate hain sabhi ke din kahani ye purani hai.
@Animesh Ganguly- Thanks Animesh:)
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beautiful lines
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Regards,
Prasant
Lovely. :)
ReplyDeletevery nice these two lines tell every thing ...... !
ReplyDeletethis is the best feeling of heart ......... The some word that tell us every thing ..
lovely ........<3
@LHInsights- Thanks Prasant and See how wonderfully your post is working...
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@sapne-shashi.blogspot.com- Words tell so much Shashi...Thanks a lot!
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@varsha- Beautiful:)
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सारु जी हिंदी में इतना अच्छा लिखती हैं आप ?!
आपसे निवेदन है , अधिक नहीं तो कभी कभी हिंदी रचनाएं भी पोस्ट किया कीजिए …
मंगलकामनाओं सहित
राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार
Ati sundar Ati sunar!!!..
ReplyDeleteKavita kafi achhi hai...
whoever will read will realize his/her broken dream!!!...
Do pankti, sapne ko sach karne ke liye bhi ho jaye!!..
Irshaad.. Irshaad!!...
@Rajendra Swarnkar : राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार- Definitely Sir and thanks for admiring it:)
ReplyDelete@Akhtar- Sure, in my next hindi post:) Thank you...
Mind blowing. You did great job.
ReplyDeleteAnd the pictures says everything too.
Saru, AWESOME is the word. :) I am browsing through your poetry to have some lovely time online. :)
ReplyDeleteEven though there are two lines in this quote, the words have great meaning which is very touchy.
ReplyDelete@Kam- Thanks for liking it!
ReplyDelete@Harsha- Thanks a lot Harsha, you made my day:) XOXOXO
@DASHAMI'S COLLECTION- Thanks dear and welcome here!
atisundar panktiyan...
ReplyDeleteagar koi puche ke do panktiyan jo apke dil ko choo le to mere jawab hoga ke ap "koshish" kavita ko padhen...
saral aur sehaj shabdo ka uttam upyog...
Shukriya. :)
DeleteHow did I miss this one? Really beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deleteकोशिश करे कोई ये भी कुछ कम नहीं,सपनो की दुनिया तो यु भी अधूरी है!!
ReplyDeleteमंजिले यु भी यहाँ किसको है मिलती,अधूरी ख्वाहिशो का ही नाम जिंदगी है!
Bahut khoob!
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