Sars i didn't get the words below the pic but it's alright pics tells me whats in it ,certaintly i know so many unsung things behind ...it cuts me ! Nice really !
Saru, your words are beautiful, what is more beautiful is the way you put it.. very touching.. havent read all of them, but the few I read are gr8.. especially the Dad one.. thank you for visiting my page and following :) :)
@Avibration- Tears speak their own language and they speak subtly.
@Angel- Sorry for the language problem, it means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short.
@Hariharan Valady- Sorry Sir:) It means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short and I compared it to two tears. Two tears symbolizing that if I have persisted a little, my dreams would have been a reality.
@oja- Thanks Dear and welcome back...:)
@Sunita - The Me :) :)- Thanks Dear and Congratulations :)
very nice these two lines tell every thing ...... ! this is the best feeling of heart ......... The some word that tell us every thing .. lovely ........<3
atisundar panktiyan... agar koi puche ke do panktiyan jo apke dil ko choo le to mere jawab hoga ke ap "koshish" kavita ko padhen... saral aur sehaj shabdo ka uttam upyog...
I wrote the following in September. Sometimes, I feel I will forget the art of writing couplets because I am not writing at all this year. I strongly believe you have to practice to hone your craft. And I am not doing that. Perhaps I schedule a time to write a poem. Or I need better time management skills. Date Published 09/05/2023 मुझे उसके जाने का इतना अफ़सोस नहीं हुआ जितना इस बात का कि इतने सालों तक उसे रहने ही क्यों दिया Love, Saru
Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
फ़ुर्सत में मिलना मुझसे यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई देखना है तुम्हें एक टक शिकवे करने है तुमसे कई हज़ार जब नाराज़ हुए थे तुम मुझसे और जब छेड़ा था मुझे बीच बाज़ार चवन्नी-अठन्नी सा ढोंग मत करना मान लेना मेरे हर कहे को सुबकियाँ से काम मत चलाना बेहने देना ग़र आँसू बेहे तो सख़्त होने का दिखावा छोड़ आना नुक्कड़ वाले बनिये की दुकान पे सिद्दत से एक बार बोल देना कि गलती होती है इंसान से तुम मुझे छोड़ गए उसका तुम्हें कभी अफ़सोस हुआ है क्या मैं नहीं तुमसे पूछूँगी कि मेरे बाद मेरी तरह किसी को छुआ है क्या ना मैं इस युग की मीरा हूँ ना हो तुम मेरे घनश्याम बस इश्क़ है तुमसे बेपन्नह मुझे बाक़ी सब कुछ है मुझमें आम तुम भी सोचते होगे ना यह तीली सा इश्क़, ज्वालामुखी कब हुआ यूँ समझ लो तुम्हारे जाने के बाद तुम्हारे ख़याल ने दिन में 100 बार मुझे छुआ अब गणित में तो तुम अव्वल हो हिसाब लगा ही लोगे पर सोच के आना जनाब पिछले 15 सालों का हिसाब कैसे दोगे तो आना बस फ़ुरसत में यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं...
nice lines. :)
ReplyDeletewow Saru, this is first time I am visiting your blog and I will say you dont face any comment deficiency :)
ReplyDeleteawesome...! sab k sab adhoore :(
ReplyDeletewah bahut khoob!!
ReplyDeleteSaru, Its really heart touching... Loved it...
ReplyDeleteJay Dave
http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/
Superb!!! Loved it :)
ReplyDeletethis is heart touchingly sad....
ReplyDeleteJust two lines with a small snap - heart touchingly sad combo!
ReplyDeletepainful indeed..if this happens..:(
ReplyDeleteWon't try to put my expressions in words for this one.... Speechless.
ReplyDeleteGr8 lines...i m speechless....
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुन्दर..
ReplyDeleteये आँसू खुशी के ही होंगे..........
गम में आँसू तो स्वतः ढलते हैं..किसी प्रतीक्षा की आवश्यकता नहीं होती।
भावपूर्ण रचना
This is heart breaking
ReplyDeleteउन दो आँसुओं को बह जाने दो, अपनी मंजिल को पा जाओ|
ReplyDeleteकितनी सरलता से उन्होंने कह दिया हाल इ दिल.
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Thank you for this useful information.
ReplyDeleteso less lines yet so much emotion. i can feel what you wanna say, i cant put it in words but i feel it so deeply... great lines... :)
ReplyDeletetake care and keep writing...........
nice one...but rub off the tears n smile..:)
ReplyDeleteTrue and emotional...
ReplyDeleteHats off...very well said...
ReplyDeleteWOW..!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteamazing.. :) :)
@some unspoken words- Thanks:)
ReplyDelete@Skywalker- Thanks Dear but please check my earlier posts.:(
You will see how deficient I was...
@jaynthbusi- Thanks Jaynth:)
@magiceye- Thanks Deepak Sir.
@Jay- :)
@Arti- Thanks Dear:)
@Bhavna- It is sad, I remember when I wrote it. Though, the reason was academic. I was 2 marks short of being in the rank holders list of CS.
@Sunil Padiyar- I hope you liked it Sunil.
@Nirvaan- True...
@jojofeelings- Thanks :)
@induravisinghj- Thanks Indu :)
@Mukesh Kumar Mishra- Thanks and you said something very meaningful and deep. Sadly, these tears are for pain...
@Girl with a silver pen- It is Dear...
@Blasphemous Aesthete- This is very motivating. Your thoughts = Wisdom!
@Rachit- Nicely said Rachit and I was not aware that you're a poet. The poem on college was too good.
@Somsi- :)
@Thousif Raza- :) Thanks Thousif...
@SUB- Thanks, I am in fact laughing when you said to imagine ourselves the size of football stadium. Great post and waiting for the rest of it.
@Neha- Thanks Neha...
@India's no.1 blog- Thank you:)
@Ms. Holla- :) Thanks.
I'm late I guess. LOL. very beautiful lines I must say.
ReplyDeleteIt's much more subtle than 'Words'.
ReplyDeleteSars i didn't get the words below the pic but it's alright pics tells me whats in it ,certaintly i know so many unsung things behind ...it cuts me ! Nice really !
ReplyDeleteI feel really bad that I can not read Hindi. I am missing something important.
ReplyDeleteReally heart touching..
ReplyDeleteand sooo emotional...
:)
Saru, your words are beautiful, what is more beautiful is the way you put it.. very touching.. havent read all of them, but the few I read are gr8.. especially the Dad one.. thank you for visiting my page and following :) :)
ReplyDeleteTears do not flow easily, so if the distance can be reduced, let them flow to reach your destination...
ReplyDeletelove the photo. thank for dropping by
ReplyDelete@Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha:)
ReplyDelete@Avibration- Tears speak their own language and they speak subtly.
@Angel- Sorry for the language problem, it means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short.
@Hariharan Valady- Sorry Sir:) It means- All my efforts to decorate my dreams fall short and I compared it to two tears. Two tears symbolizing that if I have persisted a little, my dreams would have been a reality.
@oja- Thanks Dear and welcome back...:)
@Sunita - The Me :) :)- Thanks Dear and Congratulations :)
@Beyond Horizon- Beautifully said...:)
@Prabhavathi- Thanks.
@peachkins- Thanks Dear!
i have a weakness towards hindi and i use to write a lot but no more now. However I have your blog :D like it.
ReplyDeleteKeep Rocking,
Prasant
Saru - in Gujrati will mean 'nice', so is your post.
ReplyDelete@LHInsights- Thanks and I am using your tips:)
ReplyDelete@अतुल प्रकाश त्रिवेदी- Thank you Sir.
So awesome and meaningful, please keep writing
ReplyDeleteDon worrry.. Remember this quote.
ReplyDeleteSitam ka had se badh jana Tabahi ki nishani hai,
Badalate hain sabhi ke din kahani ye purani hai.
@Animesh Ganguly- Thanks Animesh:)
ReplyDelete@Nisheeth- Wow, beautiful words, Love it...
beautiful lines
ReplyDelete@संजय भास्कर- Thanks Again :)
ReplyDeleteReally Heart Touching...
ReplyDelete@Sangeeta- Thanks Dear:)
ReplyDeleteNice post .
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@DR. ANWER JAMAL- Thanks a lot and thanks for the invite...
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ReplyDeleteglad that you are using the tips :D good luck and really like the way you are managing your blog . awesome :D
Regards,
Prasant
Lovely. :)
ReplyDeletevery nice these two lines tell every thing ...... !
ReplyDeletethis is the best feeling of heart ......... The some word that tell us every thing ..
lovely ........<3
@LHInsights- Thanks Prasant and See how wonderfully your post is working...
ReplyDelete@Arpit Rastogi- Thanks Arpit
@sapne-shashi.blogspot.com- Words tell so much Shashi...Thanks a lot!
raah ka roda na samajh in ashk ke katron ko
ReplyDeletenaadan,har manzil ki neenv inse he to hai :)
@varsha- Beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteदो आंसूओ की दूरी
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुंदर …
सारु जी हिंदी में इतना अच्छा लिखती हैं आप ?!
आपसे निवेदन है , अधिक नहीं तो कभी कभी हिंदी रचनाएं भी पोस्ट किया कीजिए …
मंगलकामनाओं सहित
राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार
Ati sundar Ati sunar!!!..
ReplyDeleteKavita kafi achhi hai...
whoever will read will realize his/her broken dream!!!...
Do pankti, sapne ko sach karne ke liye bhi ho jaye!!..
Irshaad.. Irshaad!!...
@Rajendra Swarnkar : राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार- Definitely Sir and thanks for admiring it:)
ReplyDelete@Akhtar- Sure, in my next hindi post:) Thank you...
Mind blowing. You did great job.
ReplyDeleteAnd the pictures says everything too.
Saru, AWESOME is the word. :) I am browsing through your poetry to have some lovely time online. :)
ReplyDeleteEven though there are two lines in this quote, the words have great meaning which is very touchy.
ReplyDelete@Kam- Thanks for liking it!
ReplyDelete@Harsha- Thanks a lot Harsha, you made my day:) XOXOXO
@DASHAMI'S COLLECTION- Thanks dear and welcome here!
atisundar panktiyan...
ReplyDeleteagar koi puche ke do panktiyan jo apke dil ko choo le to mere jawab hoga ke ap "koshish" kavita ko padhen...
saral aur sehaj shabdo ka uttam upyog...
Shukriya. :)
DeleteHow did I miss this one? Really beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deleteकोशिश करे कोई ये भी कुछ कम नहीं,सपनो की दुनिया तो यु भी अधूरी है!!
ReplyDeleteमंजिले यु भी यहाँ किसको है मिलती,अधूरी ख्वाहिशो का ही नाम जिंदगी है!
Bahut khoob!
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