Few Steps...

The rain was your hands, covering my body
Wind your fragrance which has touched me already
So those few steps between us conveyed no meaning
As we stood in front of each other
When it was raining…
Each drop of rain was your love for me
The distance kept us bonded but feelings were free
You told me everything
Although we were apart
I was feeling your warmth in my heart
Then those few steps between us couldn’t stop us from doing
What we wanted to do
And was proved that
You love me and
I love you…
After few years when we will search memories down the lane
I will lean on your shoulder and complain
Give me my days back and my smile
Then after walking for so many miles
Those few steps will be the only reason to tell you
That I always missed you in the rainy season...


  1. Very expressive and touchy writeup.

  2. No one can judge anything relating to rain better than a mumbaikar!

  3. monsoons bring on the romance!

  4. @Magiceye- True, it does. Love your post of evening clouds.

  5. Well written !
    One day I may quote your lines in my pictures!
    keep in touch !
    (Really I got several ideas to photograph the love,rain...thanks!)

  6. @Prasanth Iranikulam- Thanks a lot! Waiting to see your pictures, which by the way are awesome. I loved the picture of your village...

  7. Romantic!
    and asks for visualization.

  8. @swaarth- Rain is synonymous with romance, isn't it! Thanks Dear...

  9. Wow Saru, so romantic
    love the lines

  10. Seems like you were in a romantic mood while writing this.. :) Nice one.. And yup! rains have something spl in it!!!
    *lost in thoughts* :P

  11. @Sunil Padiyar- Yeah, I was...Thanks for admiring it :)

  12. Another set of lovely words depicting your emotions so well..
    enjoyed reading it.

  13. @Shaifali- Thanks again Shaifali:)

  14. It's awesome! Inspired me to write something...thank u :)

  15. @shveta- I will be looking forward to read it.:)

  16. wow... thrilling, loveable,.. first two line says ALLLLLLLL,... u r so romantic :)

  17. Expressive, though I was expecting a real touching ending, which I did not feel that much. But that does not take away the credit from the beautiful prose.

  18. Another great one from you Saru :)) so thoughtful chosen words blended in pure bliss with a dash of foreseeable nostalgia :) great one...

  19. @Animesh Ganguly- You're right Animesh, I wrote this one in my teens and I think I was not that mature in my writings that time. Thanks for liking it...

    @India's no.1 blog- Thanks Dear, your appreciation lifts my spirit:)

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