#NotAPhoenix

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  1. Kishor KumarFebruary 4, 2016 at 11:10 PM

    Sometimes some relations can never be mended and better left alone. Nice touchy lines.

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  2. Alka GurhaFebruary 5, 2016 at 12:11 AM

    But she was searching, hoping....

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  3. UnknownFebruary 5, 2016 at 10:08 AM

    Much realistic and heartwarming... but hope never ends! Wish she could get a little piece of coal amidst those ashes.

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  4. Purba chakrabortyFebruary 5, 2016 at 3:42 PM

    Amazing! Beautifully weaved, Saru :)

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  5. RachnaFebruary 5, 2016 at 8:53 PM

    Lovely! You excel at this format, Saru.

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  6. Abhijit RayFebruary 6, 2016 at 2:52 AM

    Life thrives on hope not hopelessness.

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  7. sunaina sharmaFebruary 6, 2016 at 7:10 AM

    Sad...

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  8. UnknownFebruary 6, 2016 at 9:41 AM

    Sad but better to end a relationship when there is no hope left in it.

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