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Lovely writing Saru! A flow of emotions....
Thank you, Sir.
Very nice. Do not cry. Makes it all the more emotional.
A fight between mind and heart will most possibly end in tears...The ending brought chills in me Saru. The 2nd stanza is so meaningful. Love it Saru.
Glad you liked it, Vidhya. :)Thanks for reading.
Reflects the pain so beautifully. A beautiful piece as always.
Every word is an expression Beautiful composition
Memories, the last day in wild prairieKnocks on my window paneUshers a wild smile on my lipsBut never eases off my painnice words ! straight from Heart
Thanks a lot!
Oh, those memories! Lovely writing.
" You are my lover, now and foreverWe can never be friends"- so true!enjoyed your craft Saru :-)
Humbled, thanks for reading.
Didn't know pain could be expressed so beautifully :)
Thank you Latha. :)
emotional and quite bold one! I liked the ending :)
Hi SaruBeautiful poem: captures the essence of moments that lovers undergo. :)
Thank you Bikash and welcome here!
i love the last line, nice
Very lovely writeup Saru... You always rock...
Thank you, thank you :)
it was so amazing Saru, I am not able to choose which of the line is my favorite. It touched me truly mesmerizing poem...touched the right chords.
Thank you for your generous comment, Shweta. :)
Beautiful! Liked how you've penned it using the right words. The second para is just wonderful, the whole poem indeed is. :)
Thank you :)
Beautiful Saru....super poignant
Very touching poem Saru.....well expressed.....:)
AN OCEAN OF EMOTIONS!
The emotions of the protagonist remind me of U2's song "With or Without You"
That's a lovely number!
What a beautiful poem Saru!! As always, of course.
Such sadness, deep loss in love.
another beautiful composition, heart touching poemHumsafar
A pure rendition of love! Touching!
Very poignant Saru... it touched my heart... beautiful words cried out loud for that one thing called true love...amazing...
Thank you so much :)
Nicely expressed Saru..as always... :-)
pure expressions..well written
the ways of the heart .. never understood .. beautiful but sad poem Bikram's
Very true, we can't never understand it.
I know the feeling..touchy!!
Oh, sorry to hear that.
beautifully written saru! latest on my blog http://ankitaranotra.blogspot.in/2014/08/have-you-been-swept-by-als-ice-bucket.html
I rattle inside.... beautifulnever friends....yes some people can either be lovers or strangers never friends
What an emotional poem! You have expressed pain beautifully, Saru.
Ah. Another mind-heart conflict! Sometimes people admire others for being strong in tough situations, for all we know they might not have had any other choice~!
True, they just do what life offers.
Beautiful poem! Thus sharing the sunshine award with you Please see this post. Thanks! :) http://tarangsinha.blogspot.in/2014/08/blogging-is-bliss.html
Thanks for the award Tarang. Really honored! :)
How do you come up with such rhyming beauties ... the pain and love so beautifully described ... another gem of a poem, and I am not surprised. After all, when you are the poetess, gems flow like raindrops :D
Hehehee... You are too extravagant with your compliments.
Beautiful, though painful...and so real!!!
Thank you, good to hear from you after a long time.
some times i wish to write like this but cant :(so beautiful !
Thank you and I think you can :)
I loved the second and the third para...suddenly makes it all real. Different from other love poems which focus on more rose tinted aspects of love. This was a tale of a terrible self realization...2 lost souls, beautiful!
Lets forget that I have written it. I feel this is true. You want someone back only if they want to and love you. And I do believe once lovers can never be friends. Thanks for reading.
Beautiful .... specially liked the third stanza... :)
Thanks for gracing the blog, Kokila. Glad you liked it. :)
Loved it, The beauty of your poems esp when they come to the climactic part is absolutely lovely :).. Enjoyed this one :)
Thanks Vinay! :)
I just had tears in my eyes after reading this....An excellent piece of work..
Oh, that's bad. :(
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