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Monday, September 24, 2012

To You, With Love...


The day, I trusted my life with you, 
The day, I said, I do.
My heart shed a happy tear,
And I shunned all my fears.
Brick by brick, smile by smile,
This voyage took us many miles.
You always reckon what's inside,
Even when I try to hide.
Sinking together in these mellow ties, 
Let's promise each other.
As good a father you will be, 
You'll help me being a good mother.
You are my pillar of strength, 
The roots of my family tree.
Together we'll paint a picture, 
Picture perfect it will be.

Finding you seems like a fortune,
This world is now so new.
We all have our own angels,
And I have found my angel in you.

*This is a work of fiction.
**Image Source - Here


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184 comments:

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    1. wow saru lovely post .......very nicely express

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    2. @Mithash and @shashi purwar - Thank you :)

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  2. Lovely poetry Saru,and hope this picture remains fresh as ever:)

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  3. So nice ...
    subtle ...yet so profound ...!!
    Loved it ...!!

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    1. Thanks and it is a work of fiction, I will accept the congratulations for future :)

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  5. Awesome Saru and hope your family tree grows more and more..:)congrats!!

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  6. Each line makes one go awwwww Saru! Its brilliant! Congrats!

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    1. Awww for such a sweet comment and congratulations accepted for future :)

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  7. lovely.....picture perfect and word perfect! Very very nice, a worthy piece to celebrate 1 lakh hits! Congrats!!

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  8. Oh, how romantic is this:-) Just lovely

    Happy week to you!

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  9. If it is, what it looks, then heartiest congrats :)

    Great words :)

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  10. Lovely, and so soulful! :):) I agree with a comment above, each line makes one go aww! :)

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  11. Lovely poem Saru, made me smile all the way! :) Awesome lines, each one.. Could feel the love :)

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  12. Thats amazing Saru.. Wonderfully written and apt! i wanted to ask you something and then I read its a work of fiction. Hence, I keep my words to myself :)

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    1. LOL. I added that line after receiving so many congratulations. Thanks for reading and liking it :)

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  13. Nicely written.
    Felt good reading it. :)

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  14. I must say your husband must be very happy while reading this :) May god bless you with love always & you keep smiling! :)

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    1. He was very happy, I dedicated this poem to him. Thanks for the sweet wishes Gayatri :)

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  15. oh yes .. paint the picture .. paint the TOWNNNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

    beautiful romantic poem , loved reading it

    Bikram's

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  16. How beautiful di:) Well, the last line *This is a work of fiction broke my heart :( I was so ready to congratulate u :) Just loved it..

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    1. Oh! don't worry you can congratulate me when the time comes as we will always be in touch. Thanks for reading, you are too sweet :)

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    2. Sweetness naturally oozes out when I am in a more sweeter company :) Yes we will always be in touch:) Love u <3

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  17. i am out of words to capture the beauty of your work...congratulations.

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  18. Quite beautiful. Well done!

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  19. awwwwwww...... this is such a lovely poem . A truly beautiful poem just full of love ...

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  20. I got a pleasant feeling while reading this poem....So sweet and romantic!

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  21. Ahh such a beautiful and romantic poem. Pure and innocent - the way it should be. :)

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  22. wooow .. so beautiful...

    once more i fell in love with your poetry .. every lover should read this masterpiece ..!

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    1. I wish and hope they like it too. Thanks for reading and a sweet comment! :)

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  23. Beautiful poem, Saru!
    *This is a work of fiction:)

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  24. Beautiful...Loved it....there's nothing as precious as love, togetherness and understanding!

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    1. True, nothing more precious than these feelings. :)

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  25. Awww...what a lovey poem, simply heart touching! Yeah, it is "work of fiction". :-)

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  26. *this is work of fiction ...LOL
    i hope your hubby will see the disclaimer ..
    but...this is some awesome poem :) loved it :)

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    1. He saw that and I had to add it, I was getting a lot of congratulations. Thanks for reading the poem.

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  27. Beautiful poem .... it is simply so romantic <3

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  28. Awww!!!
    This would please any...romantic or otherwise! :)

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  29. Beautiful lines Saru,your thought flow & expression are wonderful.

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  30. Finding you seems like a fortune,
    This world is now so new.
    We all have our own angels,
    And I have found my angel in you.


    Lines to remember forever. :) Awesome poem indeed. :)

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    1. Glad you liked those lines. Thanks for reading Dibiya :)

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  31. u really needed to put that last comment :p

    beautiful writing...so romantic...

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  32. That is exactly what we all are looking for right :-). We are in search of our angels, and there is no greater happiness and joy on finding them :-). Awesome :-)

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    1. Yeah, true, very true and thanks for reading :)

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  33. awww..the emotions flow naturally. Let me congratulate both of you r for your love and togetherness, and wish you peaceful and wonderful times ahead in life. May God bless you both ♥
    Very nice :)

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  34. Been away from blogverse for a year... good to be back..!! and read your poems..!! great to know that you are still rocking..!! Nice poem to say the least.. and I hated the postscript that its a work of fiction.. !! (No reader cares, they are happy to be in a fantasy land..)

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    1. Oh! I had to add the disclaimer, I was getting a lot of congratulations. Welcome back and thanks for a beautiful comment.

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  35. wonderful creation... superlike... :)

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  36. ..sweet and beautiful.. :)
    sometimes the good things are so much repeated that an article looks pretty average.. but the same subject has been dealt with beautifully by you..

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    1. Thank you Pratik for such a wonderful comment. :)

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  37. And they lived happily ever after..... Just what I like!

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  38. Had the disclaimer not been there at the end, I would have continued dreaming along with the lines in the post :)
    Nicely written Saru :)
    Keep posting :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thank you Jay but I had to add that disclaimer, I was getting a lot of congratulations :)

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  39. Cute lovely poem :)

    I really wish more and more people dream positive and have the strength and honesty to keep the dreams and promises.

    Love :)

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    1. I wish so too and world will be such a beautiful place then.
      Thanks for reading...❤

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  40. Lovely. I can relate to this. :)
    Fiction? I was hoping there you had 'news' for us.

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    1. Good to know that you can relate and it is a fiction for the time being for me. And yes, the picture is so beautiful.

      Thanks for reading dear :)

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  42. WOW! Lovely emotions, touches a sweet chord! Very very beautiful, Saru :)

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  43. So damn beautiful -i am in love with this post -its such a cutee one :) :)

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  44. A love poem with a practical touch instead of making it all airy-fairy and dreamy.Nice.

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  45. At the end u say "it is a work of fiction" was it intended to be that way to add that touch of humour?

    btw..so beautifully written!!

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    1. Humor? Sorry, I didn't understand your question. :(

      Thanks for reading.:)

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  46. Oh My Saru! I guess this is what it means to be in true unconditional love. To be of one another for ever. Lovey words. We all wish to attain that some day!

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    1. I wish too. These happy poems are so beautiful, world looks a better place after reading them. Thanks for reading Jenny!

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  47. beautifully put:) i really like the repitition of words in certain consecutive lines.
    "Brick by brick, smile by smile,
    This voyage took us many miles." really goood:)

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  48. This is definitely not fiction. So beautiful and Amen to that. God bless :D

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    1. It is a fiction for me, for time being. Thanks for your wishes Ghazala :)

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  49. Excellent poem, simple and sensible.

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  50. Loved the lines.... beautiful... :)

    http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

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  51. Your poetry makes me to want to fall in love all over again. Very beautiful

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  52. short, sweet and a lovely post mam. .!!

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  53. Love and togetherness cannot be expressed more poetically and soulfully. It was beautifully simple and yet simply beautiful. Your words bring a smile in everyone’s heart. This poem is a lovely tribute to you two lovely people. :)

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    1. Glad you liked it. At times, simple words are more profound than heavy vocabulary.

      Thanks for reading Raj :)

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    2. You don't have to ever thank me for reading. :) If you write something, then I will definitely read it. In fact I have to thank you for writing and giving me the privilege to read. :)

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    3. Awww...thats so sweet of you. On a serious note, your comment is very motivating and inspiring. :)

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  54. Poetry Perfect! This is a gem post Saru :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. Thank you so much and welcome back. :)

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  55. How romantic Saru-jee :) Lovely...

    P.S: Is it really a work of fiction? :)

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  56. lovely.
    presented emotions beautifully.

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  57. Superab saru di ... Very well exectued !!
    Liked it !!
    Way2express~

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  58. Beautiful poem Saru! You expressed the emotions really well:)

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  59. Why fiction? I thought it was perfect for your hubby :). Great one as always.

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    1. Actually, I got a lot of congratulatory messages after posting this poem. So, added the disclaimer. Thanks for reading Rachna :)

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  60. Hey Saru; that was really nice.very emotional and touching.

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  61. Thanks saru for wonderful and impressive thought...I used it to impress my GF...and it worked very well...Thanks ....

    MALAV

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    1. WOW! Happy to know that :) Stay together and Stay Blessed!

      Thanks for reading.
      Saru :)

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  62. Beautiful...Simple and Powerful.

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  63. "Together we'll paint a picture,
    Picture perfect it will be."

    love it.. love it.. <3
    and more than nythin, love the title..

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    1. I dedicated this to my Husband. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading it.:)

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  64. You wrote this..but I read it as my words. Best in life is a good partner. Well written Saru..

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  65. This is beautiful! So wonderful to read such lyrical words in today's times! God Bless!

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  66. WOW, LOVELY! JUST TOO GOOD! :)

    http://howdypancakes.blogspot.in/

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  67. Happy New Year, Saru. What a beautiful post to read and end the year. Love is all that we have:)

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    1. True that and thanks for reading Vishal.

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  68. There is magic in the way you mince words; it grabs attention and connects me :-)

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