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Monday, August 10, 2015

love a man who listens...


love a man who listens
your worries, your silence, your dreams
love a man who knows
what having you means

hold and kiss his rusty hands
they will build you a castle so big
his sweat and love will shine through
brick by brick

love a man who speaks
his feelings, his pain, his fears
love a man who wants to be with you
years after years

soothe his parched soul gently
weave a silken knot-free bond
your relation will sail high tides
be ever so strong

love a man who sees
through your fake smile
love a man who cares
to hold your hand for a while

no riches will tempt you
glittery-shiny-gold-white
he will be there for you
morning, noon and night

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47 comments:

  1. This is such a beautiful poem Saru.. I wish I could write this one..!!! Every sentence, every line was so me..

    Cheers

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  2. so nicely said :) a great poem :)

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  3. Beautiful lines. Heart warming poetry..

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  4. nice one :) the roots of care and understanding will keep the tree of love alive..

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  5. great creation mam... beautifully penned...

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  6. OMG i am in love with your blog..Great great posts.. love them.. :)

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  7. Absolutely! Wish all women thought like that:)
    A great poem!

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  8. True..for their is ony joy than being with ppl who cares about you

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  9. Right Saru, will choose such rusty hands and a parched soul anyday over all the riches in the world !
    I am always an admirer of the simplicity of complex expressions .. Effortlessly done by you .

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  10. OMG.Lovely Lines by Sweet Saru.
    Truly a joy forever.

    Cheers,
    Sriram & Krithiga

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  11. Beautiful poem Saru. Straight from the heart.
    But where do you get such customized men? ;)

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  12. Don't know.

    I thought I was like that. Then I got married. Now I don't even listen to what my conscience says. Hahahah.

    Very beautiful! And, as Amit said... Wish all women (read my wife in my case) thought that!

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  13. This is a lovely, romantic poem. Really when anyone gets such a man, no jewels can ever look tempting! The love itself becomes a precious jewel then :)

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  14. Love advice in verse.
    So sweet.

    My favourite stanza :
    love a man who sees
    through your fake smile
    love a man who cares
    to hold your hand for a while

    Love that part!

    Nice, Saru. :)

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  15. Awesome poem Saru :) Each word is reflecting expectation of every girl from his man..

    "Tu mera hero"

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  16. love a man who sees
    through your fake smile
    love a man who cares
    to hold your hand for a while

    True definition of Love !!

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  17. The beauty of this lies in the hearfelt words so beautifully rhymed! Lovely Saru:)

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  18. A Classic with all elements of true poetry. I love it :)

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  19. A man who listens to your silence...loved it !! :)

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  20. Beautiful.! I have found my man & this fits him so well ;)

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  21. I think men wish same in women , a masterpiece of a poem

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  22. Yes so true.. I so much respect my man cos he always has the patience to listen to my silly stories as well...

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  23. Lovely poem, true lines, simply amazing, Saru. :)

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  24. So romantic! It reflects what every girl wants. :)

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  25. I do.

    And with this, my heart goes away to him :)

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  26. Soul stirring indeed, so beautifully weaved dear.. loved your inherent expressions <3

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  27. One of the best poems i have read these days

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  28. Simple yet strong.
    Short yet deep.
    Loved every word of this poem. Keep writing :)

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  29. love is so simple yet so strong. Lovely.

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  30. Love love love this. Could connect instantly!

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  31. Love it :) I wish such men did exist though :)
    good work as always :D Take care

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  32. Beauty lies in the words of a poet! :) What else I should say to tell you how much I loved your poem :)

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  35. awww such beautiful verses ... dreamy too :)

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  36. Keep writing such inspiring ones

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  37. Beautiful lines--a point where souls meet each other and live forever.

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  38. Nice...This is the kind of love that men seek as well...

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  39. Its beautiful Saru ! Think I read your FB post on this.

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  40. Wonderfully written Saru. Always nice to find someone who would listen to us out of genuine interest and not for namesake :-)

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  41. @Somali - ROFL! And, I don't know where we get such men, but I am customizing mine. :P

    @Everyone - Thanks for your generous feedback. :)

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  42. What a lovely poem Saru :D. I am sure whoever finds such loving partners are really lucky :).

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