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Monday, June 1, 2015

Kiss me baby one more time


Dear Love,

It rained yesterday evening. I was relieved by the first showers of the season, but my respite turned into restlessness during the night. Weather was humid, the circular movement of pedestal fan swayed memories back and forth to the day you kissed me. Each swirl of fan took me to those stairs where you held me by my waist. I was confused, did I try to get away or I melted right into your arms? I am not sure. How it happened has faded, but not how I felt. I guess they are right about the first kiss.

I turned sides endless times. Each time I closed my eyes to gather the sequence of that moment, a strong surge engulfed me. I drowned in swivet that dried my throat and left my body aching for it one more time. I still remember the salty fragrance of your body, your off-white t-shirt and the intoxicating taste of your mouth. Later, I picked up my phone and checked our college photo in which Priya tagged all of us on Facebook. It was just after that kiss Priya clicked it outside the cafe. I didn’t have the courage to look at you. You were smiling, was it because of the kiss?

If yes, then you should smile that way more often. Hope you know what I mean.

Yours,

*Image Source - Here and I know the picture is a bit cheesy. :)

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72 comments:

  1. Satu, the first kiss!! Its freshness and sweet fragrance is everlasting.

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  2. Well, this kept me spell-bound! You should write romance more often! Loved it :)

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    1. Thank you, thank you. Now I am truly motivated to write in the genre. :)

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  3. uhmm! Slurpy! the first kiss. :)

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  4. Oooh! That was hot. Trust me. And I loved the image. :P

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    1. Thanks for voting for my choice of image. :)

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  5. Cheesy yes but so sweet. loved reading the post.It brought back memories and feelings!

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  6. na the picture ain't cheesy :) and I loved the letter :) super!!

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  7. I second Shweta ..the picture isn't cheesy, dynamic it is. :-) And the letter, is like you have written it just the day after ,,okay at the most a week after.

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    1. Hehehe... I wish. I went to girl's college and I envied all my friends who went co-ed.

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  8. Oh! Yes..first kiss... a feeling no one could ever forget... :-)

    I love the picture... :-)

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    1. Thank you, I guess only I thought it was cheesy.

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  9. It was beautiful, i read it twice.
    it made me remember many beautiful memories.
    Thanks and hugs.

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  10. Ahhh. Those sweet memories.

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  11. Such a beautiful letter. Loved reading it and the picture is so perfect to go with the letter :)

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  12. Yeah -- you should write more romance. ;)
    Great job, Mrs. Singhal. :)

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  13. first kiss is always have a special meaning in life. always . nice writeup Saru ji

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  14. Woman in love! picture is indeed a bit cheesy.

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  15. All firsts are wonderfully unforgettable...howsoever awkward though:):)

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  16. No one can beat you when it comes to romantic poetic prose.
    This was sizzling yet soft.

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    1. Coming from you, I am thrilled. Thanks Alka.

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  17. Loved it :-), the way you we try to recollect special moments like these :-)

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  18. Oh, why did it end....I completely relived that "first kiss"moment. Your writing prowess created a vivid imagery; this is a sticky one for all lovers, old, new, and wannabes. When the strokes are thoughful and tender, only subtelty remains and the rest ( cheesy ) volatilise....I loved it!

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    1. Thank you Susmit, that's one splendid comment. :)

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  19. Loved it, especially the part "did I try to get away or I melted right into your arms?":
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  20. hehehe, this was so cute and really described the emotions of a first kiss. :)

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  21. What a lovely blog post, so well written.

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  22. Well written...capturing the inherent charm of the "firsts" of the life :)

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  23. Romantic one :) Hope he gets in touch with her, Saru!

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  24. Cute post, my dear.....I really relate to your words, darling <3

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  25. Ohh.. This is an interesting read Saru.. Are you trying to test the waters by exploring areas very few have dealt with? Just asking yaar..

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    1. I love writing such posts. They are honest in expression and relatable to many. Btw, which area are you talking about?

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  26. You have captured all the emotions in ones first kiss quite beautifully :).

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  27. Once again, you dwell into love and romance so easily.. First love, first kiss.. always hard to forget. Exciting post Saruji!!

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    1. True that, firsts are always special.

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  28. ooooooooooooooohhhhh this just gave me goosebumps Saru:-) Simply awesome and romantic :-)

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    1. Thanks Swati and good to see you here after a long time. :)

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  29. Aww this was so lovely and romantic.. straight from the heart :)

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