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Monday, May 25, 2015

Tiff, No More...



Do you feel bad after fighting with me?
Like a corner of your heart is sad
Like you are just drifting in daily chores
Like all the good just turned bad

In those hapless moments
Amidst emotional deluge strong
I unweave our conversations
Reckoning what exactly is wrong

I rearrange happy memories
Aligning it to love and care
Smiling intermittently with moist eyes
In those moments of total despair

I skim through years
And one thing always stands out
You've always sprinkled cheer
To my phases of drought

To my rain, my sunshine
My warmth and cool breeze
Inseparable we are
Don't ever fight with me please

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78 comments:

  1. Fighting is a beautiful part of love, isn't it?
    Liked the emotions of the poem :)

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    1. It is, for sure.

      Thanks for reading, Ravish.

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  2. Tiff A way to remember the good old days , the beautiful old romance , the lovely chit chat, process of knowing each other .....

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  3. Sometimes a little tiff enhances the love... ..isn't it? just like masala papads on a monsoon evening... :-D

    Loved the way you've written it...wrapped in love and emotion... :-)

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    1. Hahaha... What's life without some spice?

      Thank you so much for a lovely comment. :)

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  4. If the after effects are so romantic, then some amount of tiffs are good Saru. :-)

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    1. Hahaha... I love that patch-up phase. I get a lot of pampering. :)

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  5. You can not truly be in love without an occasional tiff. If you never fight, you are just pretending.

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  6. Very very beautifully expressed. Thank you so much for sharing.

    Ami @thrillingtravel.blogspot.in

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  7. You've really captured those awful feelings after a fight.

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  8. "I rearrange happy memories
    Aligning it to love and care"
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    "I skim through years"....Wow!

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    1. Thank you Sir. People rarely appreciate the beauty of phrases.

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  9. Such a sweet and beautiful poem! Loved it :)

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  10. beautiful poem!
    www.docdivatraveler.blogspot.in

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  11. Lovely emotions penned beautifully in this "lovely" poem.

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  12. This one is lovely:). Loved it !

    I so can relate to it

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  13. This makes me want to never ever fight. But the woman in me wont let it!
    How adorable was this saru. Sorry for not visiting this blog regularly. was away :)

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    1. It's always good to hear from you, Red. You don't have to apologize, we know you were busy. :)

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  14. So beautiful. Can relate to it a lot :-)

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  15. Fighting is inevitable, but the making up is so much fun too. :) Lovely words.

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    1. I agree, though I never make an effort :P

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  16. "I rearrange happy memories".... If such beautiful is the aftermath..little tiffs are good. Just loved the emotions running through the verses. Wonderful poem Saru. :)

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    1. Tiffs are good. They unearth myriad of emotions. Thanks for reading, Dipanwita.

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  17. "unweave our conversations" Wow! Love and fights go together!

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  18. Deep sentiments transformed into words. Liked the flow of the poem:
    "To my rain, my sunshine, My warmth and cool breeze, Inseparable we are, Don't ever fight with me please!!"

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  19. Love gets stronger after fights. :D

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  20. May we sprinkle cheer on lives of others....no fighting....fights happen when we don't understand the other person's point of view, when we take others for granted....

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    1. Right, with understanding and respect we can eliminate it to a great extent.

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  21. Wow! Loved your poem on fights. So true how all good just turn bad... and how reuniting brings cheer and sparkle in us... Like always beautiful, Saru! :)

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    1. Fights add spice to boring days, but sometimes we end up with this empty feeling. Thanks for a lovely comment, Shesha.

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  22. tiffs are kind of normal in every relationship...nicely written

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  23. Lovely expression of love even in a fight, Saru:)

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  24. thats such a cute poem esp the last line...introspection brings thoughts in order that we cant see when we are upset and in rage...love always :)

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    1. Right, we need such introspection every now and then :)

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  25. Beautiful emotional poem Saru. Yes, fighting is good and bad, isnt it :)

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  26. This is so so sweet .... wow ... loved it a lot ^_^

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  27. Beautiful poem

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  28. What a beautiful portrayal of emotions! Loved it.

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  29. What a sweeet poem ending with such an innocent request!!! Great to read you again, Saru. How have u been doing, dear?

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    1. I am doing good and good to see you back :)

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  30. I feel the same way. Nice.

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  31. Lovely poem. What is love with a few tiffs? I always believe that the ones we fight with are the ones we truly love :).

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    1. I am one of those, I can fight with selective people who I think are close to me.

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  32. beautiful poem once again Saru.. when there's love n trust between them, still at times they cannot avoid a fight. a fight, a storm to begin with, but at the end, it's like a soothing rainbow that fills us up with smiles and glee.

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    1. Wow, that's one lovely way to put it. Thanks!

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  33. Such a beautiful poem. I felt as if I am watching a short movie. :)

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  34. Good one Saru! Well used words as always :-)

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