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Monday, October 7, 2013

Come, this November...



You lit that fire
Inside me, of course
I burn myself in it 
Twice a day, if not more
I comb my hair, I dress my eyes
And press my toes on bare floor

Impure desires spark
Passion in my body
Wrapping my arms around
I sway away
I miss you, I love you
I need you, just like yesterday

To fast-forward time
I hum an old melody
Sprinkling some hope
On my weary heart
I shuffle the memories
Sequencing it to the very start 

Been awfully long
Since we shared a cup of tea
Been long enough
For me to remember
Come, My Love
Come, this November...

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112 comments:

  1. The pining for love is brought out well.

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  2. Come November, may this sweet wish be granted. Nice post Saru!

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. There's a beautiful rhythm in it....i was singing rather than reading this one... :)

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  4. Oh! The longing for a loved one...
    The passion & eagerness leaps out from your words, Saru.
    I can feel the pain...

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    1. Glad you can connect. Thanks for reading, Anita.

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  5. The love bug seems to have bitten a lot of bloggers including the profound poetess ! Lovely rhythm and words, Saru:)

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    1. @Rahul Sir - LOL! Glad you liked the rhythm.

      @Found in Folsom - Imagine, we both are laughing on the mention of love, something is surely wrong with us, Latha. :)

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  6. Wow, my friend
    Write, like this forever!

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  7. Any intended recipient will come running Saru. It's that soulful :)

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    1. I wish it happens with someone who is waiting that hard. Thanks for a beautiful comment.

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  8. So full of emotions. Lovely piece of writing.

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  9. This was magical and beautiful Saru :)

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  10. Cute! :-) I can sense the earnestness and yearning to meet a loved one!

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  11. PERFECT!! The way you bring out the beauty of every emotion through your words....perfect!!
    Saru, your words Sing.

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  12. wow Saru..it's so beautiful..the way you have described the pain the wait..it leaves you with misty eyes.... it's full of emotions and yearning for your loved ones...

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  13. Awww...That's a very sweet poem :)

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  14. it's so beautifully written... :) I hope someone comes my way too, this november! :)

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  15. A touching and sentimental poem.

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  16. Longing and love....Beautiful Saru :)

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  17. The first paragraph was superb...You played with words the way only Saru can

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  18. "Press my toes on bare floor" - got me! Lovely!

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    1. Oh! you do that. Thanks for reading Sakshi.

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  19. the love bug bit you too? me too!! lovely lines!!

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  20. sweet poem. liked the first stanza :)

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  21. Beautiful Saru! You have begun to weave magic with every single words.

    www.numerounity.com

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  22. Lovely words and it was soulful :)

    Liked these lines more :

    'I hum an old melody
    Sprinkling some hope
    On my weary heart
    I shuffle the memories' :)

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  23. Beautiful! Full of longing to meet the beloved!

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  24. Exactly how do you come up with such beautiful thoughts ??? Beautifully written :) Love it Saru

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    1. Awww...thanks for a lovely compliment. And, how do I come up...have no idea. :)

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  25. Written eloquently, expressed beautifully :) it truly makes a person feel alive Saru :) Awesome work here :) keep rocking :)

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    1. Thanks Saurabh, your comment just made my day :)

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  26. Loved the rhythm in this one. Loved the feelings too. :)

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  27. Such soulful longing, that desire to meet someone special... wow! Very beautiful :)

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  28. Simply wow! Felt the pain and the longing and loved "I comb my hair, I dress my eyes
    And press my toes on bare floor" these lines. What a beautiful capture of actual reactions.

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  29. A poem describing the longing for love! And in some cases, yearning for love.. Wonderfully written Saru :)

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  30. each word of this poem resonates in the heart

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    1. Glad to know that and thanks for reading.

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  31. Such a heart touching post...loved it completely! Well done Saru.. :)

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  32. Very nice, I liked the opening lines (along with rest of the poem)
    "You lit that fire
    Inside me, of course
    I burn myself in it "

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  33. Love is in the air...hai na Saru? ;-)

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  34. November air sure does have some love in it, doesn't it?

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  35. Honestly I can neither write poetry nor do I enjoy it. But your words just pull me in strange ways. Beautiful this is Saru.

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    1. It's a huge huge compliment. You just made my day, thanks :)

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    1. Thanks Gayatri and welcome back after a long time. :)

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  37. I shuffle the memories
    Sequencing it to the very start ...

    Wow wow wow... I get a twich in my heart when I read you.. You will always remain my inspiration..

    Waiting for more such master pieces..

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    1. How I missed your comment? Thanks for such a lovely feedback. <3

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