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Wonderful one Saru. Its really soulful and true. Indeed silence is a girl's loudest cry.
Indeed and wish we get more men to understand that. :)
A very powerful silence ....i must say ....!!just loved it ...!!read it many times ...!!
Thank you so much Anupama :)
its hurtful :( love d way u write...express..n jst nail it indeed!!
Glad you like it Palak :)
Beautifully expressed Saru. Sometimes life leaves you with such questions whose answers are really hard to find. When you do things right, It haunts badly.
Yes, it does. Sometimes life gives us hard time, emotionally. Thanks for reading Nihar :)
A touching one.. but I loved the two lines in bold at the end...the crux!
Great and I love the beginning of the poem. Thanks for reading dear :)
this moment when I am reading it, I was asking the same question to myself- what went wrong? I have no clue... perhaps resorting to silence would give me some clue..
You should try talking, well a good conversation may be. It helps to clear the clouds.
Good one, Saru!
Thank you Rekha :)
Saru, Very touching and poignant! For last thirty minutes I am reading this touching poem again and again. It is really soulful. Loved it.
Super excited to read your comment Ma'am. Thanks for a beautiful comment.
Oh, the heartbreak! Well written.
Thank you Fiona :)
Sometimes we really have no clue as to what went wrong:)nice writing Saru!
There are many such incidents in my life. Thanks for reading, Sir.
Touched the heart Saru. Very nice. The pain well brought out.
Thank you Jas :)
Silence is girls loudest cry.... So true... Expressed beautifully...
Thank you Manjulika :)
The final lines were great.....overall a good poem...but this is not your best work :/
It's hard to compete against myself :PIt's just a free verse written in less than 10 minutes.
Beautiful!those intense feelings that comes within and we remain clueless after ..what went wrong! I relate to this ... you said that all.Best wishes :-)
Oh! Not a happy feeling to know that you can relate to it. Stay happy, Stay blessed!
Beautiful and every word rings so true of a broken heart.
Ouch! That hurts Punam, isn't it?
Thank you :)
Soulful. What went wrong..I have no clue. I have had many instances where I have asked myself this and I still remain clueless.
We all have much such incidents. I wish we have some magic to figure it out.
Deep meaning, soulful.
Thank you Praveen.
what words...yeah tugs the heart like a sad song. And so true as u have said...silence is the loudest cry but wonder why it fails to impact...
Yeah, it always fail to make an impact. I guess, things are taken for granted.
wonderful resonating poem
"Silence is the loudest cry " but only few of them understands well,find yourself lucky if you have one around you ...rest of them neither understands your silence nor your words...Wonderfully penned....
Yeah, most understand none of the expression. Thanks for reading!
When a girl avoids you, it means she is deeply hurt. Great! :)
soulful .. can feel the silence .. !
:) :) :)
a heart touching poem! Beautifully written and expressed too!
Thank you Saurabh!
Deep and intense, I loved the oxymoron - silence and loudest cry - gives the poem such a beautiful punch.
Thank you Arti! :)
well love prefers keeping in dilemma .. when it is and when no more .. Saru you are amazing !! :)
Yeah, love is a tricky thing. Thanks for the second line :)
This is beautiful!!
Lovely poem..brings out the angst.
Lovely one... Silence is really golden :)
Beautifully woven words..... How to praise this piece, i have no clue! :P
Nice Poem I am guessing spontaneous and heartfelt I presume... good loved it, but saru, but a silent woman is also more like miracle for men..... Kidding :) :P :P
LOL, yeah it's kinda true. But when we are silent, you are in big trouble Mr :)Thanks for reading and welcome here!
It's really beautiful composition packed with emotion. Silence is always louder than sound.
Thank you Sir.
Very nice poem. We never realize our mistakes to correct them.
Sadly, we don't and if we do, it's too late.
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I really loved the way u started .....Purple days of life,Faded to azure blue.What went wrong?I have no clue.Beautiful :)
Thank you and welcome here :)
touched .. what went wrong no clue.. . it is so true that sometimes relationships drift so much apart that there is no clue how it all started in the first place...
Yes, it happens... :(
Great words .
Your post reminded me of something I read somewhere:The Fish says "I cant see my tears because I am in the Water"Water says: "I cant feel your tears because you are in my heart"We may hide our pains, but never can we lie to people who care for us the most. Words are not needed for them to know how we are.
Well said Jiggyasa. When things are not meant to be, silence and words are mere excuses. Thanks for a beautiful comment.
very touching & sentimental .
Thank you Ma'am :)
To try and not getting it ur way..Loved this one!
Emotions and hurt deeply poignant!
Silence is a girl's loudest cry...loved it!!Beautifully expressed!
Thank you Kriti!
प्रभावी !!!शुभकामना आर्यावर्त
one word WOW
A small poem but having a lot of depth, very well written.
Thank you Suhas :)
Very nicely written. In this increasingly noise world, we have forgotten the virtue of silence. We have forgotten that someone can also convey by being silent.
Right Sabya, we don't know and we even don't try. Good to see you here after a long time. :)
So many things pass into the void and leave us without a clue. This one made me think.
Well said Damyanti!
Brilliant work! Brevity, truly, is an art and u master it. The vocab was top notch as well..Reminded me of one of my own old works, in Hindi...similar train of thought..http://me-and-my-darkside.blogspot.com/2011/07/blog-post.html
I know only one thing and that is brevity. It's funny when I take part it contests and writing challenges, only thing I check and feel little jealous is the length of others' posts. I can't elaborate :PWould love to read it, in fact reading it right now.
This is so beautiful! And these: From swivet in my words,To our passionate rendezvous. Memoirs still enchant,Dull evenings of all seasons.LOVED these lines! :)
We always have same favorite. I also love the beginning of it. Swivet is one of my favorite words. Glad you liked it, welcome back :)
lovely! and to that girl I would say, it would do to know it's not ur fault girl...
A break-off poem. What went wrong - cool yaar!
Nothing like that!
Very touching poem Saru! A person is so lucky when someone could read their silence too as they read their words.
True that! :)
Beautifully expressed!! I felt in love with this poetry right from the first lines "Purple days of life,Faded to azure blue" :) :) Loved it!! Wish men would understand this silence of a woman...frankly i think it our greatest strength, yet often it is misread...
It is indeed our greatest strength. Thanks for reading dear :)
As always, soulful, poignant and endearing. Saru, I wish I could write as beautifully as you.
I wish I could write like you, Sonia. :)
Loved it...:) Reading your post after a long time, loved every line of it...:)
Welcome back Prashanth! You were missed :)
Beautiful..Silence indeed speaks louder. Being a girl I know this, silence is powerful as well. It works every time for me :p ;).I particularly liked- "And I find happiness in the residue." :D
It works for everyone, I guess. Thanks for reading Namrata.
Wow Saru... touching poem !!!
Thank you Sneh!
The last line touched a chord with me. Beautifully written.
The depth of your work is always prodigious. Amazing, like always. :)
Coming from you, that's a huge compliment. Thanks! :)
Amazing. Could totally relate! :)
lived it :) loved it..
Thank you Ankita :)
Very deep and mournful thoughts. My fav lines:If it's still fresh and I find happiness in the residueThen what went wrong? I have no clue.I can connect to this...Ankita took my words already....PS: it was a long way scrolling down for an eager reader to jot down her comments :) - The appreciation is endless.
Seriously, can't understand why few things end. They made us happy, they make us happy, even in the residue. I am speaking generally, not only for love stories. Thanks for reading Vidhya and for a lovely comment. :)
Very nice poem:-)the background art is done by you? or you write a poem on random art ..please let me know how can i do it
I search for free backgrounds on net. Glad you like the poem.
Simply wonderful Saru!
Its touchy line or realization "What went wrong? I have no clue "really nice saru! :)
Thank you, dear :)Welcome back!
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