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Monday, May 27, 2013

Yes, You Can!


Try and try again
Can't do much, 
Can't climb mountains for sure.
With my average calibre,
Path is very obscure. 

Fitness, technique, will,
All qualities I lack.
Even on plain roads,
I lose track.

I'll fail miserably
What's the point to try?
I'm a dwarf,
I can't touch the sky.

Wait...You're telling me,
I'll rise, if I set my mind at it.
As winners always brace,
They never quit.

"Death is nothing, but to live defeated and inglorious is to die daily" - Napoleon Bonaparte
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194 comments:

  1. very motivating! Lovely :)

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  2. So very true! Well written. The biggest mountains we have to conquer are often the ones inside of ourselves.

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  3. Very motivational & inspiring poem! Success will be achieved at last if you keep trying.
    Excellent! :)

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    1. True, all we have to do is never give up. Thanks for reading Gayatri :)

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  4. प्रयास करना कहाँ मना है..

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  5. inspiring .motivation...lesson for success

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  6. Very inspiring and motivational. Great to read if you're ever feeling down or discouraged. Well written, Saru!

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  7. Saru,this is a lovely poem,inspirational and motivating.

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  8. Winners never quit! That is the spirit, Saru:)

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  9. a pure motivator to start the day Saru !! thank u for the lovely read !

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  10. nice take on the topic saru... ^_^

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  11. Simple words, yet so powerful and inspiring. Loved it.

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  12. Very much Inspiring and motivating..... :) Technology News

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  13. perfect words, a perfect inspirational poem...and the quote goes so well with it di...amazing..:)

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  14. very inspirational indeed .. surely to pump someone not able to get on his feet again..!

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  15. I needed some motivation to get disciplined...this surely helped Saru.

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  16. Most of us are like that, think of us as average, just like others. But yeah everybody has that strength, just lack the motivation. Lovely words, but would have loved to see one more para in the end.

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    1. Yeah, even I think the same. Will re-post it with additional verse. Thanks for the suggestion Jenny! :)

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  17. Beautifully penned and very inspiring !

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  18. truly Inspirational with proper quote !

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  19. Fr negative thinker like me it is so motivational nd very beautiful poem.... Keep writing..!!!:)

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  20. Considering my current state of mind, I really needed this to pump myself up. Highly motivating. :) I will never quit until I reach my goal. Thank you, Saru. :)

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    1. You shouldn't. All my wishes are with you. :)

      Thanks for reading Akshay.

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  21. The message of 'Jonathan Livingston Seagull" in a nutshell

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  22. Nice inspiring read. A nice motivating piece to a soul who always underestimate his/her capability.

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  23. One more stanza saru, Dont leave it there. We all love to read u more n more. :)

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    1. Even I think so, I should have added more to it. Thanks for an encouraging comment.

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  24. Winners never Quit,Quitters never Win

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  25. very encouraging piece saru :) it surely does motivates one higher :)

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  26. Very well said Saru. It truly is motivation.

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  27. actually saru,,
    commitment and real hard work is the most needed qualities which would enable you achieve anything,, your poem shows exactly that...

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    1. Very true and thanks for reading Menaka :)

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  28. Ha, at a time when I've just written about the positive thinking needed to climb mountains or trek or just get over your fears, your poetry is something that I can totally relate to! Beautiful piece of inspiration!

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  29. beautiful poem...

    and nice quote...

    thanks saru

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  30. Very inspirational winners never quit

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  31. Very inspiring Saru! Another gem from you!

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  32. Only those who don't quit, will ever win. So true. :)

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  33. Beautifully written Saru! People can work miracles if they believe that they can.

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  34. Such a path changing lines .. true motivation and inspiration comes from such lines ! very well penned Saru !

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  35. This is how most of us feel.A good take on human condition!

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  36. That my motto of life..Try try try until you get it. Its always a motivating thought. You write very nice and words touch the hearts of reader as its like you said what I feel. GOOD, KEEP IT UP,GURL. :)
    New post up on http://modonika.blogspot.in
    M♥

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    1. Thank you dear, glad you connect with my writings. :)

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  37. Very inspiring and motivating. "When you want to succeed as much as you want to keep breathing, that day you shall have achieved all"

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    1. I love this quote. Thanks for reading Soumabha :)

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  38. How true! We all face situations like these when we are down and feel like giving it up but some golden words if we remember: Try, try and try - and that is all it would take to succeed. :)

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    1. We have to keep it in mind, always. :)

      Thanks for reading Arti!

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  39. Nothing is impossible for the person with the right attitude, right material support and a bit of luck at the right time. :)

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  40. Lovely...reminds one of the quotation that i love a lot...Success is only for those who never give up to failures...!!!

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    1. True, very true. Thanks for reading :)

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  41. Your post is very inspiring. No matter how uphill the task is, it can be accomplished with unflinching determination.

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  42. Can't agree more. Life is all about change, to become better. One needs to keep trying every day to improve like the waves of the ocean constantly try to win against the land.

    Nothing is impossible. If Arunima - a volleyball player who lost her legs when she was thrown out from train - can climb everest, is there anything impossible?

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    1. Yes, I was amazed at her achievement. I guess, it's all in the mind. We chalk our success there. Thanks for reading Sabya :)

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  43. Inspiring! The biggest mountains are conquered only by little steps :)

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  44. inspirational and motivational poem.

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  45. good one...can be read at low times ....again and again...

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  46. this is what i call a "writers write-up" and motivating the readers too never to lose hope...
    very well written mam... enjoyed a lot and learned a lot... keep writing more such type of poems...

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    1. I will and thank you for reading Ashish :)

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  47. Truly inspiring Saru! Lovely poem :)

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  48. Yes. We definitely can. We should believe in ourselves. I wouldn't mind calling it a day when I feel I'm not able to do something, rather than when someone else tells me I can't.

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  49. Belief is sometimes bigger than willpower, I guess! Nice one Saru :)

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  50. lovely poem Saru..
    a simple feeling which we all share... at one or the other point.


    Even on plain roads,
    I loose track...

    hehe so true... sometimes I feel that way.

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    1. You are so like my husband :)

      Thanks for reading Jyoti.

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  51. Very Inspiring! these days, I need it :)

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  52. I liked these line very much "Fitness, technique, will,
    All qualities I lack.
    Even on plain roads,
    I loose track." and no doubt climax is beautiful...

    Keep rocking!

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    1. Thank you Mithlash and welcome back :)

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  53. Hi Saru,

    Nice poem, I like the quote in the end. Reminds me, it is not a failure till you give up :)

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    1. Hi Vinay, what you said is true, winning is more in our minds.

      Welcome here :)

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  54. Hey saru.. Just stumbled on your blog via Indiblogger... your poems are beautiful buddy... would be going through more :-)

    Here's my personal blog - http://mysocialcanvas.blogspot.in/2013/07/the-accused.html

    and another one is a commercial entity www.stylerug.net

    Do let me know if you like anything on any of it :-)

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    1. Hi Sandeep, Thanks for the encouragement and welcome here. Would love to read your work.

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  55. Powerful.
    Love your blog, will visit more often. :)

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  56. As winners always brace,
    They never quit.... totally believe in this.. nice poem

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  57. ..very very inspiring Saru.. :)

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  58. Very inspirational Saru. This words are really required for me, going through the path of ups and downs as an entrepreneur...:)

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    1. May you succeed in all your endeavors, Ranjana. :)

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  59. Happened to read your 'Yes, I can'
    Interesting . . . Yes you can !

    -aekaanthan

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  60. sucsess & failures are for materilistic peoples,in spirituality it is conected with so many factors such as your PRARBDHA.

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    1. On that level, it doesn't matter at all.

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  61. Creativity and intense thinking . Nice share.

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  62. My first visit . Very well weaved in.

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  63. i agree... you just describe it in such a beautiful manner it touches the heart...but for sure u write from ur heart...;)

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    1. Thanks for a generous compliment and welcome here. :)

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  64. Simple words with lot of strength...beautifully written :)

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  65. awesome lines especially the last two lines have added an extra touch to the title itself.. lovely read!! :)

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