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Monday, December 24, 2012

ये लफ्ज़...


मुद्दत से दबा के रखा था,
अब बेरोक जुबा पे आते हैं !
थोड़े नमकीन, थोड़े आवारा से,
कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर जाते हैं !

उसकी आहट पे परेशान होंअब वो दिन गये,
धीरे-धीरे हर बार अब कुछ नया कह जाते है,
थोड़े हसीनथोड़े आवारा से,
कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर जाते हैं !

उलज़ गई कल मैं बातोँ के जाल में,
मेरी बेबसी पे भी गुस्ताख कहाँ शरमाते है,
थोड़े  बेखॊफ़थोड़े आवारा से,
कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर  जाते हैं !

छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!

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72 comments:

  1. Wow! Truly conveys how routine things are special as well :)
    Lovely,really!

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  2. Words ,लफ्ज़, will never fail you, Saru:) Beautifully penned!

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    1. Thank you Sir for a beautiful comment, it's very encouraging as well :)

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  3. OMG u r such a good poet...loved this poem...छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
    मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!...awesome...

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    1. Flattered, thanks for reading Shashank. :)

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  4. छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
    मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!

    Good One Saru!!!

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    1. Thank you Anupam, Glad you liked the ending couplet.

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  5. Every time..you rock with ur poems....

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  6. Hey Saru, you've not only played with the words but won the game...Cheers and Merry Christmas!!! :)

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    1. That was a sweet comment Priti. Merry Christmas to you and yours. :)

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  7. कितना कुछ कह जाती आँखें,
    सूखी ही बह जाती आँखें।

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  8. Ah! Nice, refreshing, short n sweet! :)

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  9. Hehe! This is lovely! :) Closing lines are brilliant.

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  10. they do say that Eyes tell the truth always :)

    Bikram's

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  11. This one is killer :) And the last lines in bold are just bang on..

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    1. Thank you Sonia and congrats on the Engagement :) God Bless!

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    1. Thank you Rahul and good to see you after a long time...

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  13. मैं रुसवा हूँ , मैं तनहा हूँ
    उस चांदनी रात का एक दिलकश लम्हा हूँ
    अल्फाज़ नहीं मेरे पास तारीफ करने को
    ये जज़्बात ही काफी है जो बहुत कुछ कह जाते हैं......
    .
    these lines from my side dedicated to u and ur great poem...
    Simply Awesome creation!

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  14. Wah-wah, wah-wah! Well, it doesn't fit with your blog, coz lafzon ke sahare hi to aap sab kuch kehte hain! ;)

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    1. Bilkul Sahi!!! :) Glad you liked reading it Gayatri. :)

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  15. sometimes its easy to let eyes say the truth coz finding the perfect words ain't easy everytime...
    Beautifully composed...

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    1. Yeah, eyes can speak more effectively. Thanks for reading and finding it beautiful!

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  16. GOod display of emotions...and very good use of urdu words..liked it

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    1. Glad you liked it Chetan. Thanks for reading too :)

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  17. Beautiful! You played nicely and sweetly with the words and I liked these lines " उलज़ गई कल मैं बातोँ के जाल में,
    मेरी बेबसी पे भी गुस्ताख कहाँ शरमाते है,
    थोड़े बेखॊफ़, थोड़े आवारा से,
    कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर जाते हैं !"

    Keep Rocking! :)

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    1. These are my favorite too, though many liked the ending couplet. Thanks for your encouragement. It's always a pleasure to have you here :)

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  18. A hindi entry after long. Worth the wait, I will say..
    Been reading on blogger after long. :-)
    A happy new year in advance.. :)

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    1. I don't remember when I last logged in the reading list of blogger. I looks so jam packed now. It's good to have you back and wish you a happy and prosperous New Year.

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  19. Saru your words do not betray you--they convey a lot!!!

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  20. The Google Translate isn't working, but I can just imagine how lovely your words are.

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  21. खूबसूरत नज़्म।
    "उलझ गई कल मैं बातोँ के जाल में,
    मेरी बेबसी पे भी गुस्ताख कहाँ शरमाते है"

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  22. Hi Saru,

    Bohot khoob likha hai.
    "ulajh gayi kal main baaton k jaal mein". Irshaaad :) :) :)
    Keep it up.

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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    1. Glad you liked it Jay. Hindi poems have their own charm. Thanks for reading. :)

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  23. lovely one :)

    http://saurabhchawla2345.blogspot.in/2012/12/reincarnation.html

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  24. छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
    मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!
    बहुत सुंदर एहसास .....

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  25. Ahh so beautiful. You know how much I love your Hindi poems, I have been waiting to read a poem in Hindi since a long time and finally my wish has been fulfilled. :D

    Although, at first I found it slightly tough to grasp the meaning of the words (mostly due to my limited knowledge in Hindi), but after I read it a few times, I just fell in love with it. :):)

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    1. I was thinking of writing the meaning of few words as a footer to the post but then thought it would take away the beauty of this poem. However, after reading your comment, I think I should do it in future.

      Thanks for making the effort to read it and I'm so happy that you liked it. :)

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  26. वाह वाह ! क्या बात है |
    बहुत अच्छी लगी आपके कलम से निकली आपके लब्जों के बोल |
    बहुत सुन्दर |

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  27. Everytime I read one of your poems, I become more and more confident to say that you are one of the best poets I personally know! :) God bless.. And a Happy and a poetic new year :)

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    1. You just made my day Binu. You know how much I admire your style of writing. Thank you very much and Wish you and your family a very happy new year, specially to your lil angel :)

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  28. Bohat khoob. Itne kam shabdo mein bhi kitni gehrai hai.

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  29. लफ्जों का साहारा का सहारा तब जब वो सामने न हो, नहीं तो आपके छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा से पुर्णतः सहमत हैं , खुबसूरत रचना।

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