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Monday, February 6, 2012

All Dressed Up - II


All dressed up...I was walking by your side,
Comforting myself in your eyes.
Should you come near my skin?
For my thoughts have taken a stride.
With femininity I hunched on,
Your lips were on mine.
I read your movements...As I am your girl,
This all makes our love divine.
You lifted me in your arms,
For this…I have no words.
I inhale your passion...I exhale it too,
To feel you inside my body was not enough.
With my dress on the bedside now,
Can I say something to you?
No matter how I look,
I love dressing up for you!!!

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206 comments:

  1. When love is in the air, poetry is ought to happen. I wrote this poem in 2009 for the love of my life – My husband.

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    1. AWWW SARU! He is indeed very lucky! :)

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    2. he is damn very lucky to have you!!!

      very romantic indeed. i must share this with my wife. she will love it !

      regards
      rahul

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    3. soooooo romantic....lucky man i must say...lovely...:)

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    4. @AKILA VENKAT- I will ask him, if he feels lucky(keeping the fingers crossed for a yes)...:)

      @rahul aggarwal- Hope she likes it....:)And thanks for your comment...:)

      @vaisakhi- Thanks dear...:)

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    5. B'ful words and nicely portrayed!!:)

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    6. hey Saru,

      my wfie .. she liked it .. no .. she loved it :-)

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  2. Sensual... Sexy... Awesome... It just gave me goosebumps:):)

    Yeah!!! I'm the first one to comment.. It's an honor;);)

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    1. Thank you Swati...Sorry for the comment being second. I guess you and Jidhu posted at the same time...a second here and there...

      But, your comments are always treasured in my heart. You are a great friend. Lucky to have you...

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  3. lovely,erotic,sensual,expressive,passionate and above all it came straight from ur heart

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  4. Dressing up for your partner is the most delightful part about love-making. And partners should consciously acknowledge that!

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    1. I agree...I am lucky in that ways...:) Thanks for your comment Sandy...:)

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  5. It felt like it came right from the heart, a bit raw filled with emotions, it made a very good read. Good going...

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  6. Saru, So much sensuality and romanticism in so few lines! I feel so good to read these words early morning as I just begin my day:)I can see the love is in the air now as Valentine day approaches:) All the best!

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    1. We are smitten by the V-Day. It's nearly a week away and love is surely in the air. Though, I will be posting something in Hindi for that occasion.

      Thanks for liking this one, Sir...:)

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  7. So much passion and sensuality oozing out. Very romantic poem. :) When love is in the air, poetry is ought to happen. Very much agreed. :)

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    1. Thanks Akshay. BTW, what are your plans for V-Day?

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    2. Oh, I will be all alone this V-Day, like always. I am not very lucky in love. :(

      I wish you and your hubby have a wonderful V-Day :)

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    3. I wish you find someone soon for lifetime. Thanks for your wishes Akshay :)

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  8. I LOVE this one, Saru! It has a familiarity to it. Perhaps you've shared it before on your site? I recall reading a beautiful couplet you penned when I first joined your blog last year. Hope I'm not confusing the two. It left an indelible impression and so does this one!! Thank you for sharing and I hope and your husband have a LOVEly V~day :-)

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    1. You have a great memory. It was a quartet with the same title. The subject is same but treatment is different in both these posts. Though, this one is original. Thanks for liking it and acknowledging the beauty of earlier one.

      Thanks for your wishes too. You too enjoy the day...:)

      As I always say, I love typing mistakes. It reflects spontaneity.

      Love
      Saru

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  10. Thanks fr quoting Wife's heart in WORDS.Delish again - even if shared once more!

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  11. dressing up is seductive too! have a lovely valentine's!

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    1. Indeed it is...Thanks for your wishes Sir...

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  12. So much in so few words. I like the way you close your poems.

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    1. Delighted to know that...Thanks for your comment:)

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  13. so sensuous Saru & romantic. kya baat hai!! loved it

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    1. See, I am such a good wife Sujatha. I cook, do all household chores and write poetry for him...

      Thanks for liking the poem...:)

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    2. haan yaar lakhon mein ek! roz roz nai bante aapke jaise! very lucky guy :)

      now i am curious about his that one poem he wrote for u

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    3. Sujatha, it is such a kiddish poem. I hope he doesn't read this comment. But, I was bowled over by his simplicity and emotions for me...:)

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  14. I second Sujatha...my thoughts exacto...this one is romantic to the core n sensuous :)

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  15. Totally passionate.. Aww I so miss my husband now.. have to share this with him :-) Lovely as usual!

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    1. Please share and tell us whether he likes it or not...Thanks for the comment Jenny:)

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  16. Smiles..
    its very lovely !!
    so many strong emotions clubbed together :)

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  17. Awwwwwww...!!! Goosebumps!!!! Marvellous!!!

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  18. ohh! thats really a romantic one !

    :)

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  19. Passion,romance both in one!! Its too cute Saru!! Your husband must be delighted that you write such beauties for him!

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    1. I have to ask him...And thanks for liking it Upasana...:)

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  20. Pure love, nothing else....:) God bless you both...:)

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  21. Wow dis is so soulful.. Every word in dis poem shows the divine love for him. Lucky he :):):)
    I loved every word of urs:)

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    1. Awww...Thanks a ton Sonia for loving it...:)

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  22. Aww! Soulful yet sensual. :):) Very cute lines for your husband. As Prashanth said, it's pure love :)

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  23. beautiful saru.. :)
    subtle yet full of passion..

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  24. For this…I have no words.
    I inhale your passion...I exhale it too,
    To feel you inside my body was not enough. .......very beautiful passion saru , very romantic touching .................lovely poem . love ur passion .......:):):):) fully express .:)

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  25. "No matter how I look, I love dressing up for you".. This is the thing which struck me then, and struck me now too! :D:D
    Lovely poem Saru and lucky husband ji of yours!! :D :D

    Loved it <3

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    1. It always strikes me whenever I dress up for him. Thanks for liking the poem Mi and sorry for a long absence on your blog.

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    2. <3 <3 <3 You're such a sweetheart!

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  26. Simply Amazing. Loved every word! Your rhymes have a heart of their own Saru! So candid, so true and so flowing. He's fortuitous to have you.
    I don't need to say I'm really inspired. :)

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    1. What can I say...Thanks a ton Rachit for such a lovely comment.
      Honestly, I think your work is an inspiration. I just write random lines.

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  27. now that is saucy and romantic and BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLL ...

    Bikram's

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  28. Love is all about making your better half happy; obviously it is the look that matters the most so why not dress to your sweetheart's choice...........Nice work !!!!

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    1. Yeah, dressing up is a good gesture to keep the romance alive. Thanks Ram for liking it!

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  29. Words Designer! Marvellous,
    Well blended, an extra mile in terms of excitement:)
    Best wishes..

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    1. Awww, thanks Sir. 'Word designer' I won't forget this term ever...:)

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  30. ECSTATIC !
    such passion is at times so difficult to put in words
    and then you come and do it so brilliantly.
    Lovely words Saru.

    Lucky HIM :)

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    1. Speechless...It feels so good when someone has as great company as you. You act as an inspiration to write better. Thanks a ton dear.

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  31. very sensual n romantic ! wow ! :))

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  32. This is so romantic and passionate!! Loved it.

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  33. Wow this little poem is superb,scintillating & sensuous !

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  34. There is something so compelling in your words that just mesmerizes the reader. So beautifully romantic! :)

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    1. When someone who writes as brilliantly as you says something like this...I feel humbled...Thanks Raj...:)

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    1. hiiiii....
      a surprise awaits u...do visit my blog http://elli-itsmylife.blogspot.in/ and read the post titled 1st Versatile Blogger Award;)

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    2. Thanks a lot for it Elli...:) :) :)

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  36. Aww, such a lovely composition! It was so so sweet. Love is indeed really sweet if your lover is so loving.
    "I love dressing up for you." Loved it. :)

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    1. Love is indeed very sweet if you a good partner...Thanks a ton for your comment Akriti...:)

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  37. iisshhhhhh *blinking blinking* romantic romantic :)

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  38. This is called a candid expression, and whatever u wore, the man in your life will love u for what u are, not for the dress..:)

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    1. I wish so Ruchi...Thanks for your comment dear...:)

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  39. Saru, this was what my husband had to say :-)

    "Hey Saru, really liked it !! superb fluency in poem to elucidate romance :-) "

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    1. So sweet of you to share it with him. And pass on my big big thanks to him...
      *Humbled*

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  40. these words inspire bachelors ;)

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  41. Excellent poem. I like the new look of your blog too

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  42. :D I had the VIP pass for this one ;)

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  43. You husband is indeed a very lucky man.
    You have penned some amazing lines on your blog.

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  44. Amazing poetry. Would love to have a wife like you. Jealous of your hubby. :) So romantic.

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    1. Thanks Abhi for such a lovely comment...:)

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  45. Oh, soulful Sharing Saru! :) Love it! :)

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  46. Wonderful one Saru!! I actually would like to know how your husband reacted to this!! :)

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    1. I wish there was a like button here on comments too :D :D I like Binu's comment! :D
      Saru we wait for your reply on this! :D

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    2. @Binu Thomas- He gifted me a book and we went for lunch. Thanks for liking it Binu...:)

      @Metagravity- XOXOXO...:) Even I got many;)

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  47. I have given you an award at my blog. Do check it out :)

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  48. Oh my my...... guileless expression of love!

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    1. Love as they say know nothing...Thanks for reading it...:)

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  49. This all makes our love divine.

    very true... awesome.. so simple yet so touchy

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  50. very romantic! so doused in passion it is:)

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  51. With my dress on the bedside now,
    Can I say something to you?
    No matter how I look,
    I love dressing up for you!!!

    A piece of excellent romantic poem . Thanks. .Plz visit my blog.

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    1. Thank you Sir. I will surely visit...:)

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  52. Oh my God..oh my God..so beautiful!! I am in love with this poem Saru..I really am :)

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  53. so passionate...I love to stop by here... :)

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  54. Wow... u have a very beauteous feel to your poems! Love it.. Waiting for more... :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Pranita and welcome here:)

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  55. O, my heart just skipped a beat...! It's awesome, Saru, very romantic :) :)

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  56. so erotic
    yet so romantic
    so picturistic
    so sweet
    and yest cute
    I like thsi

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  57. That was so romantic <3
    Wow...Feb season..romantic posts all over <3

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    1. Yeah, seems like love is in the air...:)

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  58. Wowow!!! So beautiful! Your poems have that something in them.. Superb work Saru! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Arti. Coming from you it's a big compliment...

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  59. Romantic..passionate..sensuous..sensual..sensitive,and with the element of 'Ahness' at the end quite dramatic too!! Very well written Saru!
    amitaag.blogspot.com

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  60. the concluding lines made me smile...they are so beautifully sketched...and the passion within the core of the poem is definitely warming to say the least:-)

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    1. That's the most beautiful way of summarizing this poem. Thanks a lot Suruchi...:) :) :)

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  61. Saru.. Words cannot express this.. Very beautifully spoken, totally describing love in its deepest element.. Gr8 stuff..

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  62. Beautiful thought! I liked the last line the most!

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  63. Superb; Happy Valentines day Saru :)

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    1. Thanks Deepak and wish you the same...:)

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  64. Very Passionate... What timing too... Just before Valentine's day!!!

    Awesome!!!

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    1. Yeah, I thought of showering love on the blog in such a romantic season. Thanks for liking it and welcome here...)

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  65. Nice poem...interesting title and the romance that flows throughout..take care wish you guys great time ahead !

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    1. Thank you so much Nitin for your comment and wishes...:)

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  66. whenever I stop by words,
    I loved reading words!

    though I'd love to word,
    I've no words for your words!

    simply I return with words,
    enchanting the words!

    words, words, words, words,
    saru's words, the best words!

    Someone is Special

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    1. Speechless...Only you can write such words...Thank you so very much...:) :) :)

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    2. :-) Thanks for you comment on my Day 11 post. The prompt is to write a Haiku inspired by the image and that's the reason to see the same image on Vinay's blog too..

      Someone is Special

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  67. Are you attempting to put lover's "in the mood" with this poem? It was quite passionate, indeed! :)

    You sure do get many comments! I hope you see mine, and will visit my humble little poetry blog.

    http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

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    1. I was trying to...:)Thanks for a lovely comment and liking the poem...:)

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  68. Last two lines are awesome...perfect for archies card..:)

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  69. Aww.Such an adorably sensual poem! I could actually visualize everything! So beautifully written! Love it! :)
    Happy Valentine's day in advance babe! :)

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    1. Even I visualized everything when I wrote this.;)

      BTW, I wrote this after watching 'Pretty Women'. Thanks for your wishes and wish you the same...

      <3 <3 <3

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  70. romantic..i will save this for my wife(after marriage) to read

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    1. That's really sweet of you...Thanks Chetan...:)

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  71. its a beautiful expression and the dignity in expression is commendable!

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  72. very well penned.. I love poetry :) going through all your poems :) lovely
    love
    megha
    http://meghafashionista.blogspot.com (i might be a fashion blogger but I love reading john milton, wordsworth and now you :) )

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    1. Glad to know that you admire poems. Welcome here Megha...:)

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  73. So Passionate. So Romantic. Lovely words Saru :-)

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    1. Thank you Ash...Where are you these days?

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  74. wow...awesome...Not many people have the talent of expressing what they feel....lucky husband i must say :)

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    1. I will convey this to Alok and ask for a gift. He will take your words very seriously...:)

      Thanks for admiring it:)

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  75. so sweet especially the ending part!

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  76. This is just so romantic. speechless

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  77. wow...what a romantic lines.
    big hug to the poetess saru dear

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  78. Like alwayssssssss saru ur sooo Goood with ur words..:)
    Sorry cudn be in touch..:)

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  79. Hez lucky obviously..:) U bet..!

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    1. Np Ankitha and thanks for your comment dear...:)

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  80. "no matter how i look, i love dressing up for u".. awwwww, sooo true..
    loved it every word..

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