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Thursday, November 10, 2011

पहली मुलाकात


दो लफ्ज़ो में आज, मेरी उनसे बात हुई,
प्यार से पहली आज, मेरी मुलाक़ात हुई !
छलक उठे खाव्हिशो के पह्माने,
लगी मेरी आहे भी शर्माने,
जैसे शादी से पहले, बिधाई की  रात हुई,
प्यार से पहली आज, मेरी मुलाक़ात हुई !
तस्वुर में मेरा उसका आशिया था,
हर मौसम का रंग वहां नया था,
उसकी धड़कने जैसे, मेरी धडकनों के साथ हुई,
प्यार से पहली आज, मेरी मुलाक़ात हुई !
पीना उस रात को आहिस्ता आहिस्ता
छूना मेरी सांसे भी आहिस्ता आहिस्ता,
लगे जैसे प्यार के मौसम मेंप्यार की बरसात हुई,
आज मेरी उनसे पहली मुलाक़ात हुई !


*This poem was featured on merasangeet.com (One of the Leading Radio Stations for Bollywood and Hindi Songs in US) on 27th June, 2012.

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82 comments:

  1. छलक उठे खाव्हिशो के पह्माने,
    लगी मेरी आहे भी शर्माने,

    Wonderful lines....Nice poem Saru

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  2. Beautiful lines written in a simple language. Bollywood should consult you Saru. ;) I totally loved it :):)

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  3. How how how? How do you come up with such nice poems? Loved this in totality Saru.

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  4. Although I don't understand it, the language and symbols are beautiful!

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  5. बहुत सुंदर रूमानियत के भाव.....

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  6. Di!!!! Such a beautiful poem..amazing...

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  7. तो आप हिंदी में भी कवितायेँ लिखती है! ये जानकार बड़ी ख़ुशी हुई! मुझे तो कविता की शुरुआत बहुत ही बेहतेरीन लगी:) वाकई प्यार में दो लब्ज भी कभी कभी काफी होते है दिल की बात बयाँ करने में:) आशा करते है की आपके काव्य संग्रह में और भी हिंदी कवितायेँ होंगी, जिन्हें पढने का हम आनंद लूट सकें:))

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  8. khoobsurat!

    kya baat hai!...loved it:)I am happy the listlessness has been taken over by such a lovely feeling:)

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  9. wah wah!
    bahut khoob kahi!!
    your poetry in hindi has so much more depth!
    love it!

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  10. Kya baat hai!! :) Lovely poem Saru.

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  11. बहुत सुंदर शब्द का समागम !!
    Saru ka Jadu !You write so well in Hindi too...

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  12. Saru! nice linguistic expression
    Equally good in Hindi, Enjoyed..

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  13. I was waiting for your next poem :) Cheers to this one Saru, I really liked the hindi. It has an old world charm to it....

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  14. Loved the Curly Affairs as well as this hindi post is superb :D

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  15. छूना मेरी सांसे भी आहिस्ता आहिस्ता,
    लगे जैसे प्यार के मौसम में, प्यार की बरसात हुई,
    आज मेरी उनसे पहली मुलाक़ात हुई !...............wah puri kavita bahut hi sunder ......romantic kar gayi saru .......wah bahut din ke baad aisi kavita padhne ko mili ..:)
    hindi poem bhi bahut sunder likhti ho .....shabdo ka ukerna aur kahte huye kahin aur eahsas kara dena ....awasome ..
    likha karo hidi poem .........love to read your words. :) :) :) :)

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  16. एक पुरानी याद, वो पहली मुलाकात की हर झलकी को मोती बनाकर बड़े सुंदर तरीके से आपने शब्दों के धागे में पिरो दिया |
    आज आपके blog पर हिंदी की कविता पढ़कर अछा लगा |
    युही लिखते रहे ,बस पढ़ते रहने का जी चाहता है |
    Must tell you: i Love your writings. There is a magic which attracts the reader.
    Keep going :)

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  17. Wow! Never knew you can write so well in Hindi as well. Beautiful poem, very deep .. Loved it :-)

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  18. It's Hindi & I'm not very good in it!!!
    Can you just tell me the theme of this poem in one line, so that I can also enjoy this poem????Anyway, I'm eagerly awaiting your next post.

    From: www.sriramnivas.com

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  19. @deepbaazigar- Thank you so much Deepak...

    @Harsha- Thanks dear. I am so occupied these days that I posted something I wrote some 8 years back. Glad that you loved it!

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    @TD23- I am impressed by your hindi Nimish. I write a lot in hindi. But I think not many people like it. I will surely be posting it more now as I am so encouraged with your comment.

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  20. but me not so good in hindi....please post it in english too...i mean....english alphabets....language i can understand...:-(

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  21. Beautiful! its super beautiful.How do you convey such strong feeling in such a rhyme amazes me always!

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  22. beautifully written nice lines...

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  23. आपकी कविता मेरे दिल के पार हुई
    हिंदी की कविता देख , इंग्लिश भी शर्मसार हुई .
    आज मेरी उनसे पहली मुलाकात हुई:)

    Superb poem Saru ma'am:) Liked it very much.

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  24. touching
    'meri aah bhi sharmayi' -wah!

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  25. good...u r equally better in hindi poetry...nice:)

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  26. Wow Saru. Never knew you could write so well in Hindi. Really beautiful

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  27. Arre, tussi toh bahut awesome shabdo ka istemaal karte ho yaar!! Kya vichaar hai aapke :)

    Great choice of words Saru :)

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  28. Hi Came through Arti. Bahut sundar kavita. Nice pics of two roses.Best Wishes. You r welcome to my blog.

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  29. Try for films, already so many people commented and appreciated :P :P

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  30. wowo beautiful WORDS and lovely poem..
    pehli mulakat no one forgets :)

    Bikram's

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  31. khoobsoorat ,pyar se bhari kavita....

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  32. WOW! Soul stirring! Kya alfaz hai, excellent Saru :)

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  33. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G in CAPITALS.. simply AMAZING!

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  34. this one's soo lovely!

    उसकी धड़कने जैसे, मेरी धडकनों के साथ हुई,
    प्यार से पहली आज, मेरी मुलाक़ात हुई !

    i just so love this set of lines!

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  35. lovely, amazing, mind blowing, fantastic,fabulous......

    no other words for it

    realy great... :)

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  36. Magical.......Changed the environment around me. Behad khoobsoorat lafjo mein aapne likha hai...

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  37. wah wah! Reminds me of Samshad Begum - "Kabhi unko samajhne ko kabhi unko parakhne ko, jeeti hui baazi bhi humne haar ke dikhai hai".

    Please do visit my post Aye Zindagi!

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  38. O Saru, It's so beautiful and romantic!!!!!!!

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  39. wow nice one in hindi. U truly r gifted.

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  40. This is great. Achi poem hai :)

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  41. God bless you more friend ! stay so kind and pretty:)

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  42. Bahut khoobsoorat panktiyaan hain..

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  43. @Rahul- I will do that next time:)

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  44. Saru i was just looking at your above laaaaaaaaamba thank you replies & thinking by god

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  45. Wow! Fabulous,luvd reading it. Wonderful post Dear.Sorry late again.

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  46. :) are wah.. pehli mulakat main hi itna sab kuch.. kya baat hai :)

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  47. सारु जी
    सस्नेह अभिवादन !


    आपकी इस ख़ूबसूरत रोमांटिक पोस्ट पर इतना विलंब से पहुंचा हूं …

    दो लफ्ज़ो में आज, मेरी उनसे बात हुई,
    प्यार से पहली आज, मेरी मुलाक़ात हुई !
    छलक उठे ख़्वाहिशों के पैमाने ,
    लगी मेरी आहे भी शर्माने,
    जैसे शादी से पहले, विदाई की रात हुई,

    …लेकिन , कविता का रस पा सका … :)
    लगे जैसे प्यार के मौसम में, प्यार की बरसात हुई…

    आपका हिंदी में सृजन यूं ही उत्तरोतर प्रगति-पथ पर अग्रसर होता रहे …
    मंगलकामनाओं सहित…
    - राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार

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  48. Outstanding Saru. There is a different charm of poetries written in Hindi..and reading one written by you is such such a pleasure! Lovely!
    the title immediately started playing this song in my mind "Yeh pehli mulakat ki meethi se bekhudi"

    I'd say, find someone to give music to your lyrics!
    they are wonderful!! :)

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  49. @Rajendra Raikwar- Thanks...

    @Sujatha Sathya- :):):)

    @MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!.- No problems and thanks dear:)

    @Sunil Padiyar- :) Thanks:)

    @vertu- Thank you!

    @Bengts fotoblogg- Thanks!

    @Rajendra Swarnkar : राजेन्द्र स्वर्णकार - Thanks a lot for such a wonderful and meaningful comment:)

    @metagravity- I love the song Mi...I wish I can find someone...And thanks for a super awesome comment:)

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  50. So glad to hear this poem on merasangeet...

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  51. Totally Mesmerizing.. I am in lack of words to appreciate this di.. Ab me kya bolu :)

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    1. Awww...thats so sweet of you Sonia :)

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  52. kya kehen................

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  53. its ultimate....
    ishq ke liye lafzon ki jaroorat nahin hoti ...
    ishq toh nazrein bayaan kar deti hain....

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  54. दो लफ्ज़ो में आज, मेरी उनसे बात हुई,
    प्यार से पहली आज, मेरी मुलाक़ात हुई..
    Bahut hi khubsurat likha hai aapne..

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  55. कुछ तो है इस कविता में, जो मन को छू गयी।

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  56. speechless.......it touched my heart....

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