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Friday, July 22, 2011

When You Came


During that season I was living,

But for no reason.

In the life there wasn't any smile,

And my feet always stopped at many whiles.

I was ‘Dead’,

But no one covered my body.

For me,

I buried myself already.

Suddenly in the graveyard, there came an ‘Angel’,

Who proved himself to be true;

So, I am actually living,

Since the day I got you!

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57 comments:

  1. wow! rebirth nice concept!!

    great thought...

    keep writing & smiling always! saru..

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  2. Life starts to find more meaning and beauty with that certain someone ain't it. Angel, love.

    Nice read.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. Quite evoking! Love does seem to get reborn when we suddenly get it after seeming dead for a long time! Life gets a new lease!

    Good to have found your poem through the Indivine. Thanks!

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  4. wow, each line tells the quality of ur writing.

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  5. Whow, really awesome creation... :)

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  6. beautifully described the other life

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  7. Thanks for sharing information. your post is brilliant..

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  8. wow.. i gotta say.. there are so many hidden msg's in between these lines... i love the way the poem starts so softly, then rising like huge wave.. it ends on a happy note... love it... Its very strong... love it...

    Take care and keep writing.........

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  9. That was exceptionally brilliant..
    Woah!

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  10. wow...beautiful...

    lucky to have an angel...lucky to b living...

    many waste their entire life in that graveyard waiting for that angel....

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  11. Beautifully expressed...
    If borrow hindi words of Guylzar Saab...

    "Jeene kee tumse vajah mil gayee hai
    abdee bevajah zindagi ja rahee thee"

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  12. @Neha- Thanks Neha:)

    @sowmya- Thanks for liking the concept....

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- Very true, thanks!

    @magiceye- It is indeed very beautiful.:)

    @Leo- Love gives newer meaning to life. Thanks and thanks again for visiting which helped me in finding your awesome work.

    @Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu:)

    @Jay- Thanks Jay, Btw I love the new look of your blog.

    @Santosh Bangar- Thank You:)

    @Somsi- :) Thanks Dear...

    @Nirvaan- Blissful :)

    @Sneha Sunny- Thank you sneha

    @Thousif Raza- I love the way you analyse my poems. Thanks:)

    @Red Handed- I am delighted...

    @SUB- True, I am lucky to have my angel and wish everyone find theirs too. Thanks.

    @संजय भास्कर- Thank you Sir...

    @swaarth- Tum aa gaye ho, noor aa gaya hai... Thanks:)

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  13. Wow.. Very beautiful creation:)

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  14. Such beautiful poetry! Thanks for the follow--I really enjoy reading your work!

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  15. Good work, Saru! Keep penning down your thoughts!

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  16. those moments and the life took u turn... salute those moments...

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  17. sweet....beautiful....a whole story in a few words....and not one word a waste!

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  18. yes, people actually "live" after they fall in love...

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  19. @swati- Thanks Swati:)

    @msmcelhaney- Thanks a lot Dear and Welcome Here!

    @Sathish Kumar- Thanks Sathish...:)

    @Vyankatesh- It is indeed full of love, thanks for appreciating.

    @Bhargav- Most treasured moments of life...

    @Hariharan Valady- Thank you Sir.

    @Chintan- Thanks Dear:)

    @Girl with a silver pen- Love your comment, thanks:)

    @We Cognize- Very true:)

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  20. its so touching.. :)
    loved it as usual.. :)

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  21. @Ms. Holla- Thanks Dear:)

    @Being_AC- :) Thank you!

    @Sudeshna Das- Thanks Sudeshna...

    @Dimple Maheshwari- Thanks Dimple, Welcome here:)

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  22. Hey saru.. nice poems dad one and this one.. just one query hope you not mind...!! I think poem is expression and expressed by sensible and emotional person.. so just need to ask are these both poems relates personnely.. as dad one is obviously personnel experience for most of the girl child..

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  23. right people will live with the support of someone
    thanks for permoting u are visiting my blog also .keep it up

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  24. @Unseen World...!!!- Some of my poems are personal experiences like Who Am I, Dad? and Few Steps... but most of them I write on the basis of stories I hear. Thanks for liking them. This one I wrote when I was in 11th standard, can't recall what inspired me.

    @Santosh Bangar- Thanks:)

    @Ritchie- Welcome Here:)

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  25. @alissa4illustration- Thanks Dear:)

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  26. I dont know how you do it Saru..but you manage to capture so many emotions so beautifully in words...:)

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  27. @India's no.1 blog- Thanks and I can say that for you as well. How can you have a brilliant sense of humor! Love the minister's photo...

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  28. Wow your blog is so popular mashallah..Loved stoping here and being within your words

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  29. Wow how beautiful ! am happy you found your angel ! take care of him seldom true angels around..

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  30. wow beautifully expressed rebirth
    great......

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  31. WooooW...
    A nice rebirth..
    :)

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  32. @iamnasra- Thanks Dear, I wish my blog is as popular as yours...:)

    @Angel- Thanks :)

    @Ankit Malhotra- Thanks Ankit...

    @oja- Thank you:)

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  33. Lovely words,lovely thoughts.
    You really play magic with simple words.
    Many many thanks.

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  34. I have always thought about death this way, when someone is born, someone is passing. Maybe they met each other along the way. It's the circle of life.

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  35. @alissa4illustration- True...I hope you like it Dear...

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  36. Very simple and too short you described about life. Thanks for sharing.

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  37. beautiful thoughts. very nice composition.

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  38. Beautiful once again ... Keep up the good work!

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  39. @Aakash Kokz- Thanks for the inspiration :)

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  40. At 15, you wrote this, am simply amazed!

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  41. @Manali- Even, I was amazed when I wrote it...:)

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