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Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Don't Miss Him


Don't sit alone and cry,

He is with you just realize.

He is the wind kissing your hair,

He is the moon who is shinning up there.

He is the smile on your face,

In your solitude whom you embrace.

Don't ever miss him, not even for a while,

You are breathing his love every time. 

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70 comments:

  1. wow nice one yaar
    U write nice romantic poems. Great

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  2. Whowww... This poem is just awesome... Very romantic and full of love... Awesome, Saru.. someday i would like to write a duet poem with you...

    Jay
    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  3. WOOOOOOOOOOOwwwwwwww.................
    gr8 lines .Saru i just love the way u present your self....
    Amazing...Awesome......

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  4. Hey nice poetry...there is truly beauty in simplicity!! :) nice blog...do check out mine too :)

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  5. Whoa.... beautiful... Full of love!!

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  6. so consoling.. was missing my brother a lot and these words of yours really helped :) :)

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  7. These words are sooo nice to imagine..and even very nice too feel ...
    congrates..:)

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  8. Very nice and full of life.. loved the poem.. :)

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  9. It reminds me of a certain poem, specially due to the rhyming used.

    Do not stand at my grave and weep
    I am not there. I do not sleep.
    I am a thousand winds that blow.
    I am the diamond glints on snow.
    I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
    I am the gentle autumn rain.
    When you awaken in the morning's hush
    I am the swift uplifting rush.
    Of quiet birds in circled flight.
    I am the soft stars that shine at night.
    Do not stand at my grave and cry;
    I am not there. I did not die.


    I don't remember the poet though, poetess to be correct.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  10. Don't miss him and ponder the days live with him :)

    Weakest LINK

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  11. touchin write...loved the rhymin scheme...:)...awesome post

    @BA-the poetess is mary elizabeth frye....:)

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  12. @Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu and I hope you like 'Few Steps' as well.

    @Jay- Thanks Jay and I love the idea of penning down a duet. :)

    @induravisinghj- Thanks Indu, you know I read your blog a lot and It inspires me to write better. Read Better, Write Better!:)

    @Sunil Padiyar- Thanks Sunil:)

    @devangini- Thanks:)

    @Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha.

    @Sunita - The Me :) :)- I miss my brother all the time. Thanks ...

    @oja- True, these words are nice to feel. Thanks.

    @Mishi- Thanks Mishi:)

    @KP- Thanks Dear!

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- Yeah, you are right, both have same rhyming scheme and sound so similar. Only thoughts are different. Lovely poem...

    @Rachit- :)

    @Neha- :) Thanks...

    @vaisakhi- Thanks Dear and thanks again for telling us the name of the poetess. :)

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  13. that is as beautiful as one can write about love... its so sweet, resonates my feelings towards my girlfriend :)... beautiful:)

    Take care and keep writing............

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  14. Saru, I don't know how to really put across my message to you, but your writes really are "soulful"

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  15. Very beautifully said Saru.. Love to read yourpoetry
    Keep writing...

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  16. so utterly romantic... lovely!

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  17. Don't ever miss him, not even for a while,
    You are breathing his love every time.

    Yes, yes it's very true.
    You have written a beautiful poem expressing
    excellent thoughts.
    Thanks for the nice presentation.

    You are most welcome on my blog.

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  18. mmmm...deep deep thoughts...anyone who reads this surely think of it's love. :)

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  20. "You are breathing his love every time."
    wow.
    Indeed I wouldn't miss him if his immense love is in every breath of mine!

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  21. Short, sweet and heart warming :)

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  22. nice lines...simple but touching!!

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  23. @Thousif Raza- Thanks Thousif and happy to know how much you appreciate and care for your girl friend.

    @Animesh Ganguly- Thanks Animesh:) Your words are a source of encouragement.

    @swati- Thanks Swati :)

    @magiceye- Thanks Deepak Sir.

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thanks Sir for such kind words.

    @डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा- Thanks Monica:)

    @vertu- Thank you so much Vertika:)

    @Bhavna- Thanks Bhavna and you know I can't thank you enough. I am honored.

    @Defiant Princess- You should never miss him:) Thanks Dear.

    @Risha Kalra- Thanks Risha:)

    @Nasnin Nasser- Thank you Dear.

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  24. Your poetry is amazing.. love your simple and genius combination

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  25. Absolutly awsome poem i really enoyed it and i ain't one for poetry normally, but this was really nice to read.

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  26. Again, a lovely poem. I usually don't like to read poems. But I simply love your lines. Short, crisp and beautifully expressive. I even loved your last poem on dad!

    Regards!

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  27. This is very sweet! It makes me think of all the people I have once lost.

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  28. This is sheer romance..another brilliant piece..am turning into a fan...:)

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  29. Beautiful..very sweet**** Loved it..

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  30. Words coated with so much hope are sure to make people happy who read them..A beautiful perspective and nicely woven poem!

    Alcina

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  31. @Farila- Thank you so much...

    @Ben- Thanks Ben.

    @संजय भास्कर- Thanks Sanjay:)

    @Harsha- Thanks Harsha and welcome here:)

    @Realms of fantasy- I am glad you like it...

    @alissa4illustration- Thanks Dear and sorry for your loss. Losing someone is very painful.

    @India's no.1 blog- Thanks:) You are also kindling romance between Mayawati and Ramdev...lol

    @amrendra "amar"- Thank you Amar and welcome here:)

    @Alcina- Thanks for such a beautiful comment:)

    @kanu- :) Thanks Dear!

    @Ms. Holla- Thanks Arpita...

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  32. बहुत सुंदर....

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  33. So true...you write very well saru <3

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  34. @वीना- Thanks and welcome here:)

    @Chintan- Thanks Chintan :) :)

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  35. simply superb!! wow i can say!

    :) keep smiling saru

    take care...

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  36. @satish- Thanks Satish:)

    @Poetic Soul- I am so sorry for that...

    @sowmya- Thanks Sowmya:)

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  37. Amazing poem! Love your writing! Keep going! :)

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  38. A womans touch ,always missing someone ! Lovely poem.

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  39. @Namrata Mahalingam- Thanks Namrata...:)

    @Angel- Thanks Angel...

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  40. I just love the way you write...

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  41. mirrors the feelings perfectly :)

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  42. www.thoughtsconnect.com is my blog....try to give interesting content each week...would love to get suggestions on the same.

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  43. @Nairita- Thanks Dear and your blog is so good and I need some suggestions from your side...

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  44. I am completely speechless and amazed......loved the last line..."You are breathing his love every time"

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  45. @Hemant- I am on cloud 9 after reading all your comments, Thanks a ton!:)

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  46. Heart touching, very deep thoughts ...

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  47. @Aakash Kokz- Thanks Aakash...Joined your blog, it looks great:)

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  48. This is so beautiful. A must read for a person who is not with their loved ones. It'll definitely bring smile on their face :)

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    1. That's utterly sweet of you to say. Thanks Deeshani.

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  49. Love the portrayal of the emotion. When someone you love is gone, this is what one can do to feel the presence felt. emotional poem.

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    1. Yeah, such emotions can beat longing.

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  50. So beautiful.You just want to fall in love all over again with someone who is not near.

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    1. That's a beautiful way of putting it. Thanks for reading, Dipanwita!

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