I stretch my fingers, But mind says 'No'; Voice of my loved ones, Trails me as an echo. Persuading my heart, To sway away from phone; Keep it down, You live in a different time zone. Different time zone, I fumble in my thoughts. Morning, noon and night; I am out of sorts. It's perfect here, Too perfect for me, Like dead flowers adorned as a potpourri. Drowning in the timeline, Submerging in seven vast oceans. No distance in the world, Can cause this massive erosion. A part of me, my soul, Never left my house courtyard. If ever you want to collect me, my pieces, You know where to start.
It’s all about creating magic in words!

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ReplyDeleteहम तो हैं तेरे दीवानों में.
चाहे तो हमें अपना ना बना,
हम तो हैं तेरे परवानों में !
Sweet :)
ReplyDeleteNice one Saru!
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet... :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is so sweet. Very beautifully penned dear. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome one Ma'am... :)
ReplyDeleteaww....this is so romantic :) <3
ReplyDeleteIt's always a treat to read your hashtag stories dear.
aha....that is a sweet fight.....:)
ReplyDeleteAwww soo cheesy ..luv it Saru
ReplyDeleteHappy 2016 !
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Lovely!
ReplyDeleteHow sweet :) :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words Saru ji !!
ReplyDeleteAww! I can feel love in the air :)
ReplyDeleteLovely, like that childhood story! Do you remember Saru ?
ReplyDeleteHahahaha - what an adorable thought.
ReplyDeleteSo sweet :-)
ReplyDeleteIt's like two shots from one arrow.
ReplyDeleteSo cute and beautiful story! Loved the concept!
ReplyDeleteHahaha.. lovely
ReplyDeleteactually its too cheesy.. if i imagine the expression of that lady then it must be liking bursting into a blushfull smile.
Such a sweet and adorable end to a fight! :)
ReplyDeleteNice! No, really, it is. This concept, #HashTagStories, is interesting and so creative! A serious matter said beautifully here.
ReplyDeletethis one is awesome :)
ReplyDeleteAh.... so cutely funny. Beautifully written. :) You are a master of this amazing concept.
ReplyDeleteThat's cute :)
ReplyDeleteWah wah and wah wah for Harshwardhan Jog too.
ReplyDelete@Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
ReplyDeleteLove is what we crave for. Just love the sprinkle of humor:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal :)
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