tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post6843289757248097975..comments2024-03-28T03:06:48.321-04:00Comments on Words: Just A StorySaru Singhalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comBlogger75125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-69294817662914229972013-02-05T11:22:11.973-05:002013-02-05T11:22:11.973-05:00very good to know that you are writing a story Sar...very good to know that you are writing a story Saru :) keep writing. I think this one relates to real life well. An advise from my side is to use some more complex words :P :) nice one !<br />keep on writing.Saurabh Chawlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13196713748152957748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-29209153790296713502012-10-18T10:10:58.510-04:002012-10-18T10:10:58.510-04:00Everything has a happy ending....if you are not ha...Everything has a happy ending....if you are not happy it's not the end! Trust me everything is gonna go well in the end...<br />i personally wish all goes well in ur life....n also wish i get lucky like you to get married to my school fren...Pranavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05021400148830088164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-2220954036824681532012-05-07T20:27:59.924-04:002012-05-07T20:27:59.924-04:00@Everyone - Though I wish to complete this novel a...@Everyone - Though I wish to complete this novel and get it published but I think it will take few years. I want to establish myself as a poet first. Again, thanks a ton for your wishes and feedback.Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-72936253432441686062012-05-06T11:58:42.552-04:002012-05-06T11:58:42.552-04:00Nice beginning Saru.. Its interesting!! You wrote ...Nice beginning Saru.. Its interesting!! You wrote this 8 years back and published now? Hmmm.. I can't wait for a day after drafting my post.. hehehee :)<br />Pls post chapter 2.. I wanna know what's next! :)Anandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10677089538430811523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-65610290539440999042012-05-05T01:08:32.974-04:002012-05-05T01:08:32.974-04:00interesting to readinteresting to readVinay Ravindranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09791033007139790630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-72043153851079262642012-04-27T14:34:12.207-04:002012-04-27T14:34:12.207-04:00Do we get to read this novel?Do we get to read this novel?Makhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01046965116254926715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-81454913798780947312012-04-25T15:50:08.627-04:002012-04-25T15:50:08.627-04:00next please.....next please.....Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-54310834972719355182012-04-24T14:10:54.280-04:002012-04-24T14:10:54.280-04:00@Everyone - This is the beginning of the unfinishe...@Everyone - This is the beginning of the unfinished Novel I wrote 8 years back. I wanted to share it with the readers to get an honest feedback on my style of writing. I thank everyone for reading it and for your feedback which is very helpful in refining my work.Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-12922701806114697802012-04-23T11:56:43.090-04:002012-04-23T11:56:43.090-04:00Fingers crossed, I'd want to read more before ...Fingers crossed, I'd want to read more before commenting :)<br /><br />Cheers,<br />Blasphemous AestheteBlasphemous Aesthetehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16417596461540852006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-65391774907286969882012-04-22T12:03:16.959-04:002012-04-22T12:03:16.959-04:00He is an MBA from reputed B_ school ,, fir to aage...He is an MBA from reputed B_ school ,, fir to aage ki stories bhi interesting hongi..Ruchi Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13565145854196414405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-554496532051883282012-04-22T04:18:28.702-04:002012-04-22T04:18:28.702-04:00It is good...and became captivating after four fiv...It is good...and became captivating after four five lines of the beginning.......i think next would be some happy past moments and then the reality...but reading the starting of the story i felt it is something else like related to some other non-romantic or relatinship stuff<br /><br />looking out for the next part...Chetan Maheshwarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15425014456182686808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-79430383496038528462012-04-22T01:50:40.839-04:002012-04-22T01:50:40.839-04:00From poems to a Personal story Saru.. Will be chec...From poems to a Personal story Saru.. Will be checking for the updates :)BGThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14949058048585399102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-60315903027137938342012-04-21T13:46:57.340-04:002012-04-21T13:46:57.340-04:00Congratulations Saru !
You've been Tagged.
P...Congratulations Saru !<br /><br />You've been Tagged.<br /><br />Please follow the link below to know about the tag more:<br />http://rahul-aggarwal.blogspot.in/2012/04/ta-ta-tagged.htmlrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08174409488396279949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-68943875858142046742012-04-21T07:46:40.096-04:002012-04-21T07:46:40.096-04:00hi, its nice start.. hoping that u will come up wi...hi, its nice start.. hoping that u will come up with best series.. Good Luck :)Bharathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05155795069027262731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-1495581075635352292012-04-21T02:53:05.016-04:002012-04-21T02:53:05.016-04:00First of all, it's just a beginning, and I'...First of all, it's just a beginning, and I'd like to see which way it goes before making a serious comment. Secondly, it's much more nearly a piece of autobiography than a story, don't you think? Thirdly - but this could be only my personal opinion - even within such a short span the mood takes a sudden abrupt turn, from almost feisty to sombre and lonely: why? I mean, both of you are mature people, and surely if your husband made a move, that ought to have been a joint decision, something that doesn't leave you unhappy? I won't venture beyond this, since it's a highly personal issue, but maybe we could talk a little more privately? I am taking the liberty only because I have seen you 'voting' for my blogposts more than once. My email i.d. is suvro.chatterjee@gmail.comSuvro Chatterjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01027202980259279420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-50072070212367144242012-04-21T00:03:32.202-04:002012-04-21T00:03:32.202-04:00It appears taken control of the situation.
Habitua...It appears taken control of the situation.<br />Habituated! to read your posts particularly <br />without 'memory' power..<br />Of-late on 2nd visit left my footprint.<br />Carry on & succeed..Atanu Chatterjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999989891226311603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-58028058299659374092012-04-20T23:56:37.990-04:002012-04-20T23:56:37.990-04:00Waiting for the next part.. :)Waiting for the next part.. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17160652706919220446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-82972815116880818032012-04-20T21:38:04.677-04:002012-04-20T21:38:04.677-04:00good start...and i think i am curious to read the ...good start...and i think i am curious to read the restjoshi danielhttp://joshidaniel.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-84861908322118931662012-04-20T19:11:51.522-04:002012-04-20T19:11:51.522-04:00Well, to begin with, the way you have introduced t...Well, to begin with, the way you have introduced the characters is quite interesting. Not telling a lot about who the two people are, makes it easy for a reader to understand the characters the way they want them to be in life. Also, you have a surprisingly well balanced way of using the flashback and taking the story forward at the same time. Reminds me of a Movie I saw a few months ago, but won't write it's name just now.<br />Suggestion: Don't change the way you are writing, you are doing just fine...<br /><br />P.S. eagerly waiting for the next part...<br />Narenidea molesterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06837457117079350800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-68335327124414920012012-04-20T15:09:24.923-04:002012-04-20T15:09:24.923-04:00Sounds interesting!Sounds interesting!Radhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13262465575932161054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-14612621798992582102012-04-20T14:18:20.884-04:002012-04-20T14:18:20.884-04:00The intro kept me hooked, have no clue where this ...The intro kept me hooked, have no clue where this is going, which is good :) So, looking forward to the rest!!Amruta Marwahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12289338796983791949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-41614210498978888222012-04-20T14:12:20.538-04:002012-04-20T14:12:20.538-04:00Interesting..I will follow this one, as my own sto...Interesting..I will follow this one, as my own story..me and my wife is pretty much like this. In terms of feedback you could probably make it a bit longer than this, maybe 2 more paragraphs.Asifhttp://ramblingego.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-65719206962952037152012-04-20T08:59:57.746-04:002012-04-20T08:59:57.746-04:00Saru,
have some contra views (in fact many).
woul...Saru,<br /><br />have some contra views (in fact many).<br />would like to ask few questions before any comment. <br /><br /><br />cheers,<br />MukeshAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-38162442627236013862012-04-20T08:56:37.422-04:002012-04-20T08:56:37.422-04:00Nice one
http://www.freedomofexpression-rahul.blog...Nice one<br />http://www.freedomofexpression-rahul.blogspot.in/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04166935182865276028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6506492966159941624.post-9775619852461501482012-04-20T06:46:18.624-04:002012-04-20T06:46:18.624-04:00Very different from the run-of-the-mill ones. Long...Very different from the run-of-the-mill ones. Long way to go girl.. cheers!Monita Sharmahttp://humindian.comnoreply@blogger.com