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Monday, May 2, 2016

Longest Bus Ride Ever


I am not possessive-dramatic-psycho, but when it comes to men in my life, I can smell a fish swimming merrily 1000 miles inside the Atlantic. I unearthed this side of me on a CTU bus when I was a little girl. I was coming back from Chandigarh with my dad. The bus was crowded. My dad fitted me on a seat with another family - one girl, two boys, and their fat mother. I squeezed in and made a tiny space for myself in the pea-pod. Like a hero, my dad stood and smiled. His princess rode with the general public. Daddy was proud of his courteous and down-to-earth girl. I sang ‘Ringa-Ringa-Roses’ in my head and dreamt about the 5-star chocolate he promised me. It went like a middle-class fairy tale till Zirakpur. Then, a life altering event changed the dynamics of my family.

Some idiots got off, few seats became available and daddy, my very own daddy, sat next to slim-trim-sleeveless-wearing-hottie. Devastated, short-of-breath, wide-eyed... and, tiny drops of tears later, I braced myself. I had a bigger responsibility. I had to break the news to my mother - your husband sat next to another woman. How could he do this to her? He broke the eternal vows of marriage. He indulged in adultery in front of his daughter. He smiled. I pouted my lower lip out. It was a bumpy ride with many accidental shoulder and leg brushings. Highway 22 was leading to a broken marriage.

I was restless. There was nothing I could do. I peeked now and then to witness the growing intimacy between my father and Miss-Flicking-Hair. I held on the handrail and got up to measure the distance between their ankles. I made a mental note - whenever daddy would ask me how much I love him, instead of expanding my arms in Shahrukh style, I would make a tiny pinch with my adorable fingers and tell him - This tiny much, daddy! I wanted to give him a slice of his own behavior. While I was doing the investigation, that fat mother pushed me little further on the seat and made herself comfy. Now, my socks covered legs were dangling and cute little bum was on the edge of the bus seat. That made me very angry! I pushed myself inside and rested on her cushiony tummy.

We reached Ambala. I didn’t say a word. I planned to break my silence in front of my mother. I kept rehearsing a few sentences in my head.

‘Daddy sat with a hottie!’ - No!

‘Daddy doesn’t love you, mommy. He sat with aunty in the bus.’ - Better to take the hotness factor out, but it still hurt.

‘Daddy is not a good person.’ was the one I finally settled in.

Composed, my mother said while serving us Nimbu Pani, ‘Chocolate nahi di isko?’Oh, bhool gaya!

I got up, hugged my mother and then, expanded my arms wider and wider and consoled her - ‘I love you this much, mummy.’ Later, chin up, I gave my father the ‘Mother-of-all-Stares.’

But I had to share it with someone. It was too heavy a burden for a Kindergarten girl. I went to school on Monday and narrated the story to my best friend. She didn’t say anything. She just opened her mouth wider and wider, placed her turmeric stained fingers on it... A big Hawww’ followed later. Oh God, that ‘Hawww’ killed me!

A few weeks later, I took revenge. My friend’s father gave lift to our teacher, Ms. Singh. He told my friend to stand in front of their Priya Scooter as sleeveless wearing Ms. Singh sat behind. She held her purse and my friend’s schoolbag in one hand, and put the other hand on her dad’s shoulder. My friend could do nothing. But, I did something. I opened my mouth, placed my cute little hands on it... but a silent ‘Hawww’ came first in my case.


P. S.  It’s not a work of fiction, but exaggeration.

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34 comments:

  1. Is it a reply to Alok's post with PS? :P

    I always liked your sense of humour. :)

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  2. It was cute as well as hilarious.
    :-)

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  3. Such a cute post that I could not resist to acknowledge on FB in the morning, Saru!

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  4. Oh what a fantastic piece of exaggeration. Funny and made me smile in the middle of a work loaded day :)

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  5. Funny and dramatic! Wonderful Saru! I loved the
    Hawwww :)

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  6. Hawww this was soo cute Saru! Innocence of the days gone by! Beautiful narration, loved it!

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  7. hahahahaha cuttooooo h tu ladki :) <3

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  8. Lol, enjoyed reading. The innocence of childhood;a hawww was definitely a killing response then. :)

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  9. Hahhaha!! Howlarious and how. The jealous tiny little girl. Your Dad must be killing you...had he known.

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  10. So realistic...

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  11. Hawww!!! ;-) Thoroughly enjoyed. :-)

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  12. hahahaha that is the cutest story ever :D :D
    hilarious... loved the way you narrated it with the such innocence :D

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  13. Haha.. a hilarious ride :P

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  14. Interesting narration! Enjoyed reading.
    Though naughty, very concerned and possessive daughter... too much matured to believe...!

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  15. Gone are those days, aren't they? Hawww :)

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  16. That was so cute. Loved reading this piece.

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  17. Innocence of childhood, and fathers are always heroes in the eyes of daughters....they could do no wrong... :-D

    And, I can understand the killing effect of "Hawww"...

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  18. This was really a good read!! Nice exaggeration i must say.
    Shraddha singh
    www.junksin.blogspot.com

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  19. Beautiful reminiscence of childhood memories... And the Hawww is epic :-)

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  20. Hey drama queen, that was a cute one.
    You're keeping an eye on that 'guy who met his friend's girlfriend,' aren't you?

    You guys have a lovely evening. :)

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  21. So Simple, cute and hilarious!!

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  22. Sara...this is the limit to your wild imagination...poor dad of yours...this hilarious post led me to caricature all the characters in my mind...loved the "responsibility" and "hottie" part...that too from a kindergarten jealous girl!!

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  23. Hahaha.So sweet and cute post.

    Cheers,
    Sriram & Krithiga

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  24. Hahaha :D :D I can't stop laughing at the Hawwwwwww.... :D :D
    Loved reading it!

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  25. Super cute, loved the way you have narrated it! :)

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  26. @Everyone - Thank you so much for reading. :)

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  27. Omg ! That was hilarious ! But such a trauma for a little girl.. I can imagine !

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  28. Funny and cute story.. Nailed it

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