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  1. Brilliant Saru! So many people will relate to this. So many situations. Love the way you speak so much in so few words.

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  2. Wow Saru! Your words bring out the beauty in simple situations of life. Loved the connection between hope and battery.

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  3. This reminds me of the Hindi saying, 'Gagar mein Sagar', Saru:)

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  4. So intense and poignant! Loved it! :')

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  5. loved it and added my addon on FB :)

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  6. Intense. Invites the reader in. Very nicely done, Saru!

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  7. Amazing! Brilliant! Stupendous!
    You are giving a tough time to haiku writers with your hashtag series, Saru:)
    This is what I call creative genius! Kudos!!

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  8. Ghosh. So deep and amazing. I nearly cried. :/

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  9. uh-oh
    My heart just went out to your protagonist.

    That's so much said in such few words. Brilliant work, once again, Saru.

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  10. So many things said in so few words...:-)

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  11. Oh no... not yet. It's just been day. Sadly that's the truth of our technology driven, fast paced life. Loved this one x

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  12. My..my! The lines gave me goosebumps.. This is the first time I stumbled upon your blog and now I know what I missed till now. Excellannt storry telling!

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  13. another powerful Hashtag story, loved it

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  14. Awwww - well put. I enjoyed that :)

    www.kalpanaawrites.com

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  15. Sad. I love the way you write intense stories in precise words.

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  16. I find your hashtag stories very impactful, Saru. The concluding lines stays with the reader.

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  17. @Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

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