It’s all about creating magic in words!
What an ending! Wonderful!
Brilliant Saru! So many people will relate to this. So many situations. Love the way you speak so much in so few words.
Wow Saru! Your words bring out the beauty in simple situations of life. Loved the connection between hope and battery.
Awesome Saru !
This reminds me of the Hindi saying, 'Gagar mein Sagar', Saru:)
What a powerful analogy, Saru:)
So intense and poignant! Loved it! :')
loved it and added my addon on FB :)
very intensive, awesome.
Intense. Invites the reader in. Very nicely done, Saru!
Haha ! Lovely Words !!
Amazing! Brilliant! Stupendous!You are giving a tough time to haiku writers with your hashtag series, Saru:)This is what I call creative genius! Kudos!!
Ghosh. So deep and amazing. I nearly cried. :/
uh-ohMy heart just went out to your protagonist. That's so much said in such few words. Brilliant work, once again, Saru.
So many things said in so few words...:-)
Oh no... not yet. It's just been day. Sadly that's the truth of our technology driven, fast paced life. Loved this one x
My..my! The lines gave me goosebumps.. This is the first time I stumbled upon your blog and now I know what I missed till now. Excellannt storry telling!
another powerful Hashtag story, loved it
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Sad. I love the way you write intense stories in precise words.
I find your hashtag stories very impactful, Saru. The concluding lines stays with the reader.
Sad but true! Great one Saru!
@Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
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