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Monday, November 24, 2014

In a far far land...



I am too old for 'Alice in Wonderland' but sometimes I wonder about the perfect world for us and for our children. This poem is a reflection of what we all would want to be in that happy-happy world - more love, less crime and of course, truck loads of happiness. That would be the adult version of WONDERLAND.

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80 comments:

  1. A lovely piece of writing. I hope this wish comes true one day.

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  2. Wow,you painted the adult wonderland very beautifully :)

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  3. I love your poem. Great job!

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  4. This is a lovely poem... of hope and camaraderie... Humanity and love...
    Good one Saru :)

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  5. That's the world we all wish for! very beautifully written, loved it :)

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  6. The pic isn't displaying fully probably you can place it below the text.
    Excellent writing.

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    1. It's because of your browser, I guess. Sorry!

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  7. Beautiful People.
    Beautiful Mind.
    Beautiful Thought.
    And so, Beautiful way of sharing the thoughts.
    It beautiful Saru.

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  8. OH ! what a dreamland described wonderfully with words... :-) we all dream of such a country...

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  9. I wish I was born in such a land. I hope, the land I'm born would one day become that land.
    Beautiful poem, Saru.

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  10. Lovely poem, Saru.
    Echoes a majority's sentiments for a peaceful & good world where we all live happily minus negativity...

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  11. You actually deserved to win the indiblogger awards.So touching.!

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    1. That's really sweet of you to say, Ankita. Thank you for reading!

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  12. Amazing Saru! :) Each time, everytime.. your poems overwhelm me! :)

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    1. Thank you, Mi... :)

      Your comments always bring a smile on my face! <3

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  13. It is hard to accept the fact! Yes we are loosing ourselves in the name of modernisation and almost the heaven and one day it will be so as you described

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  14. It is beautiful Saru ... I loved it ... special mention to "tears take shape of the pearl if they drop by any chance .." touching !

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  15. Nicely expressed Saru. We all wish for the same, No crime and more love n care.

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  16. That's the world we all wish for but we see often opposite ! very beautifully written words Saru ji .

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    1. Sadly so but hope there will be better times.

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  17. I read it already when you posted it on Instagram, but just couldn't resist reading again! It's awesome! :D

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  18. All the stanzas are saturated with a longing for better a world!

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  19. wow......a lovely poem......i like it..........

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  20. Wonderful poem. The last couplet is very evocative.

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  21. Here ~
    Nothing to comment
    Your words leave me numb
    The beauty of your poetry
    To them I gladly succumb.

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    1. Hahaha... That's utterly sweet and as usual, no one can beat you at writing a profound thought in simple words. :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Anshul. Means a lot coming from you.

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  23. Beautiful imagination AND expression.

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  24. This is a beautiful poetic Utopian dream, Saru:)

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  25. Very nice use of words and expression Saru. Makes me wish I were born there.

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  26. sometimes or other everyone wishes for such a place

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  27. Lovely ! But you should not post it like an image. Google cant index it

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    1. More than that I am worried as some people can't read it. I did it because people are copying my poems. Anyway, have to find a better solution.

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  28. you play with your words and our thoughts... hats-off

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    1. LOL, thanks for a lovely comment Sathish!

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  29. Beautifully written. A hope for a peaceful world :).

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  30. Amen to that world, Saru. Seems so difficult though.

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  31. That's a beautiful world you painted, Saru!

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  32. combine artistry with a utopian and tender dream, and you have this poem.. loved the thought and the play of WORDS, as always :)

    'crescent moon harps the song' and 'pluck wisdom from plants' are my favorites..

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    1. I wonder, 'how can you analyse a poem so beautifully?'

      That's a talent I must say.

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  33. Adult version of wonderland, indeed. :)

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