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Monday, March 31, 2014

Unspoken Unsaid


Between a stress and a sigh
Before you say goodbye
Much before you feel all alone
In between long pauses on telephone
I wish I could say
I miss you everyday

Between my fingers I felt 
No matter how tightly I held
Your touch lingered long past midnight
Spelling the aura so bright
I wish I could say
You were with me yesterday

Sketching the rosy days ahead
Countless times I've said
Distance burgeons the love
Smoothening the edges somewhat rough
But I wish I could stay
Much close to you every single day

Read between unspoken lines
You'll find thousand signs
Many kisses resting on your blue shirt
Walls of bedroom echoing my words
I wish You to say 
You waiting for me every single day

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48 comments:

  1. The myriad shades of love....unspoken and yet not quite. Nice poem, Saru!

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  2. Aww..I hope you fly down to NYC soon. :)

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  3. Such a pretty poem Saru... could relate to these lines :)

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  4. How deep!!!
    I can imagine how it feels.. :)
    Loved it as always...

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  5. Everytime I feel Saru is past her prime, she comes back with a poem deep enough to renew my respect for her. Atta girl!

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  6. Thae pangs of separation beautifully expressed, Saru:)

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  7. Missing someone can truly take a toll on oneself! Excellent!

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  8. Nice poem Saru.. Just a query though, any particular reason to change from "I" throughout the poem to "you" in the last para.. ( ignore my lack of understanding here :D )

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  9. that was deep and pretty :) (usually people write dark including me but u made it pretty )

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  10. Superb ...Was craving to read a Saru thing altogether.

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  11. That was so sweet ;-) Always good to let people know that you miss them! :-)

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  12. We always given in so much into a relationship. Treat the person as the world , and we revolve around it. But in the end, we do expect a little bit from him as well. A little bit of "Say you miss as well"

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  13. And of course, how can I not write. I loved and missed your words Saru!

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  14. Sounds musical, beautifully written !
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  15. These lines - Distance burgeons the love
    Smoothening the edges somewhat rough
    But I wish I could stay
    Much close to you every single day really did made me senti :(
    Poem has Saru-mark as always :)

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  16. Hi...first time on your blog (via Indiblogger). You have a way with words that paints a picture. I could totally relate to every emotion mentioned in your poem.

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  17. Wonderful, distance makes the heart grow fonder but at the same time distance is so hard to bear :)

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  18. Beautiful would be an understatement !!

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  19. Lovely. Conveys the depth of your feelings...

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  20. How sweet and very touching! Loved it!

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  21. Oh I am floating somewhere overwhelmed with loving emotions. Such a warm poetry.

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  22. Expression of intimate, selfless love!

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  23. How I wish for you the "missing part" on both the sides :)

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  24. Lovely words, Saru!
    what did your hubby say after reading these?! :)

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  25. awww..that's so romantic! Lovely....♥

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  26. Beautiful. Silence is all we need to speak, sometimes.

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  27. @Everyone - Many thanks for reading.

    @Binu - It was just an expression, ending verse was given a different tone than the others.

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