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Monday, February 17, 2014

Scintillating Mornings...


Melting in cold
Rubbing my fingers on your palm
Crossing my legs over yours
By ten minutes, I snooze the alarm

I press my body against yours 
Whisper a word or two
Drowning in the swivet of desires
My body feels blue

It happened last night
I could barely ask
Tides, waves; oceans deep
You touched all my body parts

Night consummated
It hummed a passionate soliloquy
Morning longs endlessly
Building on its own fantasy

As you slide away
Uncovering lithe frame
I sigh, I sigh one more morning
With my desires still aflame 


...and I sing, 'Abhi naa jao chhod kar ki dil abhi bhara nahin'


 

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104 comments:

  1. Wow! Such a romantic verse setting desires aflame, Saru:)

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  2. Ah...the passion unfolds into something better!
    This was beautiful!

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  3. Romance and passion at their peak. Too bad,there are alarm clocks to steal the precious moments!

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  4. Amazing! With each passing poem, you're having an even bigger fan! Beautiful :)

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    1. Awww.... You just gave me a reason to smile :)

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  5. This is one sensual piece, a beautiful aftermath of culmination of desires!

    Awesome!

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Thanks and yes, love is always in air for me at least :)

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  7. Alarm clocks...worse :)
    And such a passionate poem...loved it!!

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    1. Damn, the alarm clock :D

      Glad you liked it, Hemant. :)

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  8. Wow...loved how you ended it...this new twist in poetry writing could only be done by you...

    Superb, sensuous and very innovative! :)

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    1. <3

      And the effort is duly rewarded with a beautiful comment. :)

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  9. This poem has some nice rhythm to it. I can hum it all day long. Beautiful. :)

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  10. Another one of your sensual masterpieces! It's unleashing of desires with purity. Loved how you ended with the song...
    Btw, I think you have used the same image in another post of similar thought and that's why when I saw it on FB I thought you shared an old post...

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    1. Yes, whenever I have limited access to internet, I use pictures already uploaded on blogger. Saves many GBs.

      Thanks for reading Prateek :)

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  11. Such pure unadulterated passion! Such beautiful use of words! Mindblowing!

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  12. Passion, emotion, romance, pure love .......all in one!!

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  13. Lovely. Unadulterated. Pure. A tad sensual. I could go on and on :)

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  14. A very sensuous piece with a very sweet song!

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  15. hehehehe .. be careful kahin censor board ki nazar naa pad jaaye :P

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  16. Hot..Hot.. Hot..
    Sets temperatures soaring.. :)

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  17. I will recite this on my wedding night. :)

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  18. Sensuous yet not vulgar! Lovely poem.

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  19. I could feel the passion and not one word made me feel uncomfortable. What a classy piece of romance. Hats off to you Saru.

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    1. Humbled with your generous feedback, Athena. :)

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  20. Very romantic ;)

    Abhi na jao chhod kar.... ;)

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  21. Too good. Song added charm to the poem.

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  22. As ik was submerged in the theme of your poem,i felt"Tides, waves; oceans deep"Just great.

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  23. Aha! Filled with passion, this one :).

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  24. So romantic! Loved the breezy lines :-)

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  25. Wow Words :) Loved them to the core....

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  26. Too much love! Beautiful Poem Saru di :)

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