मुहब्बत


हर मौसम में हम जिया करते है!
मुहब्बत के जाम दिन में भी पिया करते है!
आग को लगा कर गले,
बारिश की तमन्ना किया करते है!
शाम को खुशबू जिस्म की,
साँसों में लिया करते है!
रौशनी को अँधेरे में छुपा के,
धीरे-धीरे चांदनी किया करते है!
नज़रो से बातें करके
चुपचाप जिया करते है।
शायद...
हर मौसम में हम युही मुहब्बत किया करते है!


Comments

  1. खिले रंग और ये मौसम ....मुहब्बत रंग लाती है ...!!
    सुन्दर रचना सारु जी ....

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  2. मोहब्बत तो मोहब्बत है...मौसम के साथ बदल जाए वो आशिक नहीं....

    too good Saru...
    love
    anu

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  3. Nyc poem.... Najro se baate krke chupchap jiya krte h... Awesome... You are very well hindi poem... Keep writing...

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  4. इस जाम को हर वक़्त पीना चाहिए हर किसी को :) सारा क्लेश मिट जाएगा.

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  5. hum aapki nazme padh padh kar khushiyon ki jaam piya karte hai
    aur ek nazm aapki padhne, har din jiya karte hai

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  6. सुंदर शब्द की माला:)

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  7. Nice one. Though it is difficult for me to read Hindi, loved this. Love is love.

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  8. वाह! बेहद खुबसूरत अहसास!!!!

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  9. बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना सरू !

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  10. wah wah :) Awesome one :) truly inspired me :)

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  11. अपना जलना, अपना छलना,
    कब सीखेंगे जीना अपना।

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  12. lovely Saru! aap to pakki shayar ban gaien hain!

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  13. Mohabbat to Mohabbat hai...bina shabdo ke hi ek nai kahani ban jati hai..

    beautiful poem :)

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  14. i could read it from the first word till the last. I thought i would have forgotten my school hindi lessons. The poem is soulful and beautiful Saru :)

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  15. love's in the air..
    and its everywhere all d time :)

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  16. some of the lines are really powerful...U are one of those rare writers who hardly writes anything bad.....

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  17. Kaisa ye ishq hai...ajab sa...hai :)

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  18. One lethal killer you become, when you hold your pen to ink on blog posts. Mouth Zipped.

    http://neoimaginations.blogspot.in/2013/01/thru-my-lens-gwalior-shilp-mela-2013.html

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  19. every season is about love....maybe. nice write.love it

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  20. Muhabbat ko andar samaakar, shabdon mein diya karte hain? Saru - lovely!

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  21. sheer talent at it's ultimate. Bejaan shabdo me bhi jaan phook deti hai aapki kala. I always dreaded theft of your work. you have to be utterly cautious.

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  22. achi h bahut...
    mai bi kuch esa likhti hu..
    vichar milte h apne shayad...

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  23. i've come here after a very long time! and read all the posts i missed. i want to sum up my comment and say, You get better each day!
    maza aa gaya! :)

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  24. Bade muhabbat bhare alfaaz hain Saruji:)

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  25. Hi Dear Saruji,
    You have such nice Blog and i like you writing skills.
    Really those words touch my heart some where.
    Let such things come again,
    Cheers to you...;-)

    Rahul kale

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  26. दिन हो या रात मोहब्बत का जाम पीते ही रहना... बहुत प्यारी कविता. बहुत खूब. बधाई.

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  27. Beautiful, as always! :) I really love your hindi verses.

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  28. You are a pure romantic at heart, more so when you write love poems in Hindi. :) Gave me so much joy reading it. :)

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  29. Who says rhyme and meter are the only wheels of the chariot of emotions?

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  30. Wow! Just wow...no words for this poem.

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  31. very sweet poem-picture of a true romantic--or romantic saru?
    Love n hugs

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  32. hum hindi me apne khayalat wyakt karna chahte hai, fir baaki sab ki padh ke draft me bhool jaate hai...:P

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  33. Wonderful lyrics and sweet recital in soundcloud !

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  34. wah yeh mohabbat ke anokhe-ankahe rang..

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  35. Yet another beautiful composition this.
    And you know what struck me the most about this one.
    आग को लगा कर गले,
    बारिश की तमन्ना किया करते है!
    I am always in for contradiction in feelings.

    LOVED IT. :)

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  36. वाह, माशाल्लाह! बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ!

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  37. Tu shaayar to nahin???? ;) :)
    Nice shaayari! :)

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  38. This is brilliant - Aag ko laga kar gale, baarish ki tamanna kiya karte! And this - रौशनी को अँधेरे में छुपा के, धीरे-धीरे चांदनी किया करते है! Such a dramatic composition. Bollywood will totally love this. :)

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  39. so beautiful .. you are so good with words ..!

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  40. बहुत ही शानदार........दिल को छूती पंक्तियाँ ।

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