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Monday, May 7, 2012

On A May Day...


Love so gratifying, Love so profound.

Love at its height, Love, I found.

It was the season, it was May.

Air spoke of Love, it was raining every day.

Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.

Clouds sheltered them, showing their stance.

Morning schemed passion, evening, on fire.

Sensed like everything brimmed with desire.

Should I say or else keep quiet?

For my Man will laugh on my plight.

It happened in summers, I loudly say.

I fell in Love on a May Day!!!


Love needs no reason and no season.  However, this poem is dedicated to all those who found their love in the month of May, as I did...

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159 comments:

  1. celebrate love and life!!
    beautiful!!

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  2. Love is beautiful, I read
    'Love' and its beauty on 'Words'!
    On a rainy day, I read
    'Love', 'Romance', 'Passion' and 'Desire'
    painted by 'Words' on 'Words'!
    It happens only here, I write
    and say,'I fell in love with this beautiful poem Saru!'

    Someone is Special

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    1. You can judge and weigh the words so beautifully SIS. Thanks for a ever wonderful comment :)

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  3. Awesome.....
    True,Love needs no reason no season,it just happens.It is so addictive that you cant come out of it that easily.Tjose feelings are difficult to express and you have written it so beautifully that it just took me to those days when I felt that passion for someone special.....my husband.
    There is magic in these words.Once again its awesome.Good work.

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    1. Good to your side of the story. Thanks a ton for reading and for a lovely comment! :)

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  4. May Magic... :)beautiful indeed! Loved it!

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  5. Wish you lots of love and happiness!!

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  6. Beautiful lines, truly heart touching....love really needs no reason or season for celebration!

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    1. Thanks and love needs nothing at all to blossom...:)

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  7. Ah- there is something about May! Lovely and romantic.

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    1. Sure and thanks you dear for reading the poem :)

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  8. Sounds so lovely...and gr88 to see u connecting the dots..

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  9. Exactly. You don't need a reason to fall in Love, happens anywhere, anytime :-)

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  10. Surprisingly, it doesn't rain here in May anymore :)

    Best loves are taken and strung in words like these.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. It rains here now. In fact raining everyday since the beginning of May. Thanks for a lovely comment Anshul :)

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  11. "Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
    Clouds sheltered them, showing their stance."

    My favorite lines. So beautiful and romantic. It reminded me of your earlier poems, "I'm in Love" and "13, Cambridge Street". So much so that I went back and read them again. Amazed as always, Saru. :)

    Hopefully love happens to someone like me as well, very soon. :)

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    1. I hope so too Akshay and thanks for remembering all these posts. Felt so fresh and great after reading your comment. :):):)

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  12. ah blesss :) month of may
    i will keep my eyes wide open he he he who knows who i might jsut see

    Bikram's

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    1. Yeah and I will keep my fingers crossed for you:)

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  13. All I can say is awww!!
    "Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
    Clouds sheltered them, showing their stance." - I loved these lines Saru.. Can't get romantic anymore... Amazed... :)
    Yes, love needs no reason and no season.. It just blooms :)

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    1. Thank you...:) And hope you find love soon. :)

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  14. Good one :)...very light...could be made into a song :)
    Btw, I didn't understand ur message about my profile.....would u send me an email plz.
    Thanks

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  15. 'Love' is a beautiful and noble feeling that can change any heart with its touch and you just wrote a equally beautiful poem on this beautiful feeling. Every word of this poem touched my heart.
    Cheers to you Saru . . .

    Ashwini Dey

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    1. Love is indeed a great feeling and thank you so much for such a lovely comment Ashwini :)

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  16. I guess, I read this already! Anyway, this is so lovely :):) I agree with Prateek, this could be made into a song :)

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    1. Yes, you have and thanks a ton for all your comments Harsha :)

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  17. Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
    Clouds sheltered them, showing their stance.
    Morning schemed passion, evening, on fire.

    Lovely poem.I salute to your poetic sense.

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  18. Bingo ! But can't say that publicly at the moment you know :( A couple of years to go before I settle down... Been 6 years since I had THAT 9th of may :) :) :)

    Lovely poem Saru,especially when I know how relevant it is to me :P God bless you!

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    1. It was 8th of May for us. :)

      Finally you are writing something on a love poem. Thanks for a lovely comment Mishra Ji :)

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  19. The stokes of passion could best ignite on a fiery May day!Incidentally, Saru, 'Mayday' is also the distress signal used internationally:)

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    1. Whenever I read the title of this poem, this thought comes to my mind. MAY DAY...But I can never find a better or an appropriate title than this...

      Thanks for reading Sir :)

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  20. Srau...I got this thru email.....Mayday...as called the labour day and your labour had now been succefull by love being bestowed upon you....superbly written...nice way to convey a day when you fell in love

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  21. Great expressions as always. Those two lines from 'morning schemed...' have all so many emotions! Super stuff.

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    1. Thanks Rohit and when will you be back???

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  22. I bow to thee... :-)
    Mindblowingly beautiful..

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    1. What can I say, Kunal!

      A humble thank you :):):)

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  23. i fell in love with the poem, so enchanting and am astonished to see,how this summery MAY can be so beautiful..

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    1. Yeah, that year it was very beautiful. Thanks for reading Ruchi :)

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  24. Light, frothy and bubbly! good reading

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    1. Thank you so much for a beautiful and crisp comment :)

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  25. very well described about romance in may relating the nature :) nice one saru! :)

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  26. Love is divine...u made me fall in love with ur words.

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    1. Thanks Ria, you are such a sweetheart!

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  27. This is beautiful and one dancing post with one hell of a tune! You're so good, Saru. :D

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  28. Wonderfully expressed. And congratulations on your special may day :-)

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  29. Awww. Beautiful Saru.. yes love needs no reason or season it just happens:) Congrats :)

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    1. looooved it :)

      stars didnt come out they went to romance. Such a pretty line :)

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    2. @Sonia- Thanks and love needs nothing at all to happen...:)

      @Madhusha- Thanks dear. :):):)

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  30. Beautifully expressed with words

    thanks for sharing

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  31. Lovely lines depicting the Cupid affair. Falling in love is itself special and finding your love in the month of May adds to it. Nice work!!!!

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    1. Thanks Ram for such a beautiful comment. Sometimes, comments are far more beautiful than the poem. This one is one such comment. :)

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  32. Wow! May it is...well gonna remain close to my heart too :-) Thank you Saru for this lovely poem

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  33. so sweet <3

    What should I say? Your poems leave me speechless. I always want to say so much, appreciate you as much as I can but I'm always left spellbound and speechless with a smile on my face :-)


    Nice work!! You rock! :-D

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    1. Awwww....That is so sweet of you...:) :) :)

      XOXOXO

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  34. beautifully penned
    beautiful pic

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  35. 'Words' theory of relativity suggests that
    some moments are real.:)
    Really! like a inter continental ballistic 'P'.
    Well launched!

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    1. Thank you so much. And in those moments we live million lives :)

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  36. Well written, Saru!

    http://rachnaparmar.com

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  37. Very romantic Saru :) loved it.

    Season of love at its best in may..
    Awaiting to see a share come in my way!! :)

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    1. I shall pray for it to happen. Lovely lines and thanks for reading Mak...:)

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  38. Beautifully expressed....

    thanks

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  39. May is so special for me coz I and my bro are born in may and my parents wedding anniversary also comes on the same month.So I would love to find my love in May ;)

    Regards
    village girl

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  40. I've missed you!!!!!!!!! But I am back :D Congrats on the custom domain -- you are rocking it!

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  41. Nice rhyming words and a beautiful poetry :)

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  42. I was reading this poem on my cellphone while is was raining, on my way back from work..And it's may! :) I just kinda fell in love with your writing! :) really candid!! :)
    loved it! :)

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    1. So, you are finally enjoying Bangalore. Thanks for reading and liking it MI :)

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  43. May you have many more Mays full of love :D

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  44. Awww, Saru, so beautiful!!! Who would have thought one could find love on a May day when sun screams through the torn ozone layer and leaves shrivel and wait...but one needs that fertile heart and the deep borewell of love within to find the love. I am so happy for you, Saru!!! May your all months be filled with May magic!!!

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    1. It was raining that year and May was so pleasant. I think everything was magical that year in May. Thanks for your wishes and a lovely comment :)

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  45. Beautiful poetry... keep penning them... liked it... cheers!

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  46. Lovely. You write well. All the Best.

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  47. Thank your stars you are not in Delhi where May is the worst season

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    1. I was in Delhi that year Sir but I will thank my stars for this year...Thanks for reading Sir :)

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  48. beautiful and lovely lines....

    i am waiting this may to happen with me...

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  49. Hi Saru, I agree love needs no reason or season..:) Love this post! Thanks! :)

    Happy Mother's Day to all moms out there! :)

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    1. Thanks for your wishes and your comment Dear :)

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  50. beautiful...its Feb for me :)

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    1. The Valentines Season :) Thanks for reading Sub:)

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  51. beautiful saru...but there needs to be a 13th month in a year that myt work for me LOL :)

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    1. I wondered when May worked for me, Alka. I am not at all romantic by nature...

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  52. Visiting after a short gap- only to see a cup overflowing love and romance!

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    1. Thanks Kusum and welcome back. I am so busy even I have missed reading all my favorite blogs, including yours...:)

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  53. so cupid hit you in may! may your love and life be as beautiful forever just like these lines

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  54. Beautiful. May has always been a special month for me because I was born in the month of May and on every birthday, its a brand new recollection of love for me, facilitated by my significant other. :)

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    1. Such a lovely way of writing. Wish you and your significant other, lots of happiness. Thanks for reading!

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  55. damn !

    if i would have known that you'll write this wonderful poem for the month of may .. i should have got married in may :P

    beautiful poem Saru !

    regards
    rahul

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    1. You tell me which month you got married. I will write a poem for you and Sarita. I hope I am correct with her name. Thanks for reading Rahul :)

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  56. :)

    There is certain kind of sadness in this poem, may be I am reading too much in to it, may be I need to unlearn the meaning of may-day.....

    xoxox
    Chintu

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    1. Not at all Chintan, whenever I read this poem MAY DAY comes to my mind. But, as I was telling Rahul Sir, I haven't found a better tittle for this poem. Maybe, you can suggest one. Thanks for reading and welcome back :)

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  57. You write awesome.. glad to know you! :)

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    1. Thanks Shubham, means a lot coming from you...:)

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  58. Have a romantic May, every year..!!

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  59. I found love in the month of May! My beautiful wife! :)

    Great poem Saru...

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    1. Good to know that, Binu...:) Thanks for reading :)

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  60. love indeed has no season., the story of my love started one july...

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    1. July, a bit of summers and a bit of rain:)

      Thanks for reading dear:)

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  61. awwsome...heart touchinG...soooo soooo soooo romantic...wot a chwt chwt choosinG combination of word....luv u alot...keep writinG foh us plsssssssssss :)

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  62. you cant believe dat i hv been ur biG fan by reading ur only one poem...love u alotta :)

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    1. Awwww...that is so sweet of you. Truly honored to read your comment. Thank you so much and welcome here:)

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  63. Wonderful .. loved the way you portrayed it !

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